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如果說莎翁的十四行詩是英詩中的王冠，那麼第十八首可謂王冠上的明珠。534Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbF1jsPQgJe
一首短短的十四行詩裡面，竟然用到了十種修辭格：明喻(simile)、暗喻(metaphor)、設問/反問(rhetorical question)、擬人(personification)、相關語(pun)、矛盾(paradox)、頭韻(alliteration)、誇張(hyperbole)、借代(synecdoche)及倒裝(inversion)，而且題材還糅合了詩歌、夏天與人的永恆之美，簡直就是譯者的噩夢XD534Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRXFouVCz9P
分享一下我自己嘗試翻譯的版本(並且借詩向大家告白)，不過還是推薦大家先細細品味原文。
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
我怎能把你比做夏日？534Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKnYjHpdgMP
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Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
你比夏日更溫柔動人。534Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡB0TMQrYEIw
534Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOTx8ujZeFi
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
狂風搖落五月的嬌蕊，534Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡadGQ5IXjQH
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And summer's lease hath all too short a date.
夏日的時光稍縱即逝。534Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsK71OGtY2I
534Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTMKOJ6gFP0
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
烈日之眼時而格外灼熱，534Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtAeq5FTfbB
534Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqBOnAyNfM2
And often is his gold complexion dimmed,
金色面容轉眼黯然失色，534Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡY2yTyfp1o4
534Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUETKAND2Hm
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
一切美麗終不免凋敝，534Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡE7CM2LUwXZ
534Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWScNJyeumd
By chance, or nature's changing course, untrimmed;
不論天意無常或有常。534Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3GIImJJeeg
534Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEJmfyFZ91P
But thy eternal summer shall not fade
但你的長夏永不褪色，534Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWizpulfCaS
534Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDUzlDD9faI
Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest,
你的美麗也永不消失，534Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnkpDh3UOHS
534Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhOcnFMPNVt
Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
死亡陰影不能困住你，534Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSkQvdmGPqs
534Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡV352gWiCXU
When in eternal lines to time thou growest.
你與永恆的詩句同壽。534Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfxvV5Kb06e
534Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWkE0F1sj3Z
So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
世上一息尚存，世上一目尚視，534Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFhKjTClSWK
534Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDii0BAK7tt
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
此詩永遠長存，賦你不朽生命。
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