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如果說莎翁的十四行詩是英詩中的王冠，那麼第十八首可謂王冠上的明珠。438Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcB1f8lVdN0
一首短短的十四行詩裡面，竟然用到了十種修辭格：明喻(simile)、暗喻(metaphor)、設問/反問(rhetorical question)、擬人(personification)、相關語(pun)、矛盾(paradox)、頭韻(alliteration)、誇張(hyperbole)、借代(synecdoche)及倒裝(inversion)，而且題材還糅合了詩歌、夏天與人的永恆之美，簡直就是譯者的噩夢XD438Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlFf0gobmgT
分享一下我自己嘗試翻譯的版本(並且借詩向大家告白)，不過還是推薦大家先細細品味原文。
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
我怎能把你比做夏日？438Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyJKQ4fZ9oB
438Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoeMLrgU2Dz
Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
你比夏日更溫柔動人。438Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJyT0CvOrJw
438Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5yJqGM7yRT
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
狂風搖落五月的嬌蕊，438Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9jsIOwS6VL
438Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡneLgui1ydO
And summer's lease hath all too short a date.
夏日的時光稍縱即逝。438Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡW7Xp7IekIs
438Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLAGh2PAflZ
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
烈日之眼時而格外灼熱，438Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRevOee9ODy
438Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyHAlARKqm7
And often is his gold complexion dimmed,
金色面容轉眼黯然失色，438Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡV78TXvTD9q
438Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6W6vM4gQKe
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
一切美麗終不免凋敝，438Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4r2iLUKYbI
438Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdp0JsXWBKw
By chance, or nature's changing course, untrimmed;
不論天意無常或有常。438Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0wqX12ysOf
438Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSAwe3wpw2Q
But thy eternal summer shall not fade
但你的長夏永不褪色，438Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡp1LjDVNeW0
438Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDlLtuDiAqD
Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest,
你的美麗也永不消失，438Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡe5KtJoRceb
438Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaG2uR28iZD
Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
死亡陰影不能困住你，438Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGrlKHuCoNA
438Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBjaQ8kqmYX
When in eternal lines to time thou growest.
你與永恆的詩句同壽。438Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3C1gdmH3ik
438Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡx4jFEUnkFx
So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
世上一息尚存，世上一目尚視，438Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbVqWSlRf3Q
438Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEPS1Wg18mB
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
此詩永遠長存，賦你不朽生命。
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