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如果說莎翁的十四行詩是英詩中的王冠，那麼第十八首可謂王冠上的明珠。535Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9fc4oCBExq
一首短短的十四行詩裡面，竟然用到了十種修辭格：明喻(simile)、暗喻(metaphor)、設問/反問(rhetorical question)、擬人(personification)、相關語(pun)、矛盾(paradox)、頭韻(alliteration)、誇張(hyperbole)、借代(synecdoche)及倒裝(inversion)，而且題材還糅合了詩歌、夏天與人的永恆之美，簡直就是譯者的噩夢XD535Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡivpVGC1vzB
分享一下我自己嘗試翻譯的版本(並且借詩向大家告白)，不過還是推薦大家先細細品味原文。
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
我怎能把你比做夏日？535Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSr9TGSHkQj
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Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
你比夏日更溫柔動人。535Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvnL4wPeRpD
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Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
狂風搖落五月的嬌蕊，535Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGChF5bGrD2
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And summer's lease hath all too short a date.
夏日的時光稍縱即逝。535Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7As1roLcNc
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Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
烈日之眼時而格外灼熱，535Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9ghhJS7kh3
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And often is his gold complexion dimmed,
金色面容轉眼黯然失色，535Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxbTNmXVSjm
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And every fair from fair sometime declines,
一切美麗終不免凋敝，535Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfHTtrDXDIE
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By chance, or nature's changing course, untrimmed;
不論天意無常或有常。535Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡal40SiJrGS
535Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyWg7S0QhOF
But thy eternal summer shall not fade
但你的長夏永不褪色，535Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxFgKLGiS1A
535Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQ7MiqtlLmR
Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest,
你的美麗也永不消失，535Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5I1A2zFGBj
535Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCm4qJY0zbj
Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
死亡陰影不能困住你，535Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2DSK6LyBzB
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When in eternal lines to time thou growest.
你與永恆的詩句同壽。535Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIi22MInP0J
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So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
世上一息尚存，世上一目尚視，535Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHY8GS5GArw
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So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
此詩永遠長存，賦你不朽生命。
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