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如果說莎翁的十四行詩是英詩中的王冠，那麼第十八首可謂王冠上的明珠。455Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡntSQHRUNRT
一首短短的十四行詩裡面，竟然用到了十種修辭格：明喻(simile)、暗喻(metaphor)、設問/反問(rhetorical question)、擬人(personification)、相關語(pun)、矛盾(paradox)、頭韻(alliteration)、誇張(hyperbole)、借代(synecdoche)及倒裝(inversion)，而且題材還糅合了詩歌、夏天與人的永恆之美，簡直就是譯者的噩夢XD455Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡN2zawqdY7r
分享一下我自己嘗試翻譯的版本(並且借詩向大家告白)，不過還是推薦大家先細細品味原文。
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
我怎能把你比做夏日？455Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡs0G6c0IJlB
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Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
你比夏日更溫柔動人。455Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQs8MTuMp6z
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Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
狂風搖落五月的嬌蕊，455Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡE8r9I8Yyyg
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And summer's lease hath all too short a date.
夏日的時光稍縱即逝。455Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUyu343WXzL
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Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
烈日之眼時而格外灼熱，455Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEwwPArVZet
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And often is his gold complexion dimmed,
金色面容轉眼黯然失色，455Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡY6oS95MOwH
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And every fair from fair sometime declines,
一切美麗終不免凋敝，455Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWOzjGBDZSZ
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By chance, or nature's changing course, untrimmed;
不論天意無常或有常。455Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzOh0B3NqnF
455Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9Ir92p0iZ4
But thy eternal summer shall not fade
但你的長夏永不褪色，455Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWWp2FCf26w
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Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest,
你的美麗也永不消失，455Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfGGrfsRfOI
455Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxEBLTsSSUZ
Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
死亡陰影不能困住你，455Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZZVUaaUu46
455Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQN4guyJi43
When in eternal lines to time thou growest.
你與永恆的詩句同壽。455Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡARKl0eqYKa
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So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
世上一息尚存，世上一目尚視，455Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCyeSvtXdEq
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So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
此詩永遠長存，賦你不朽生命。
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