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如果說莎翁的十四行詩是英詩中的王冠，那麼第十八首可謂王冠上的明珠。521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ98LLMwj2so
一首短短的十四行詩裡面，竟然用到了十種修辭格：明喻(simile)、暗喻(metaphor)、設問/反問(rhetorical question)、擬人(personification)、相關語(pun)、矛盾(paradox)、頭韻(alliteration)、誇張(hyperbole)、借代(synecdoche)及倒裝(inversion)，而且題材還糅合了詩歌、夏天與人的永恆之美，簡直就是譯者的噩夢XD521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdBer3Fp6GQ
分享一下我自己嘗試翻譯的版本(並且借詩向大家告白)，不過還是推薦大家先細細品味原文。
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
我怎能把你比做夏日？521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5BN261jOna
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Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
你比夏日更溫柔動人。521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQlW8mCK8EG
521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡU0Rr7nObkJ
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
狂風搖落五月的嬌蕊，521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡK4U8krDg5X
521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzKFGh7l987
And summer's lease hath all too short a date.
夏日的時光稍縱即逝。521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3oj2F5CWEg
521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQFnU3hBo6Q
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
烈日之眼時而格外灼熱，521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHYLwseGFSm
521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6vHNTCN7fw
And often is his gold complexion dimmed,
金色面容轉眼黯然失色，521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAb6CBfrmHZ
521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuENF23jcK7
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
一切美麗終不免凋敝，521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlLQSgmyZS9
521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡG1irnmTDzV
By chance, or nature's changing course, untrimmed;
不論天意無常或有常。521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡijYwibM7Tb
521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHMVpTivcFh
But thy eternal summer shall not fade
但你的長夏永不褪色，521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJYxDPIRhCp
521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlhS0SJMSQs
Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest,
你的美麗也永不消失，521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZWwkOdSk5E
521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRgOMbfA7fh
Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
死亡陰影不能困住你，521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFSq6zkKUNV
521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoqsCrSocQB
When in eternal lines to time thou growest.
你與永恆的詩句同壽。521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8WoNneiET0
521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLJ7mf5XmoX
So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
世上一息尚存，世上一目尚視，521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡu1WfApwrks
521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTBqqaF22GJ
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
此詩永遠長存，賦你不朽生命。
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