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如果說莎翁的十四行詩是英詩中的王冠，那麼第十八首可謂王冠上的明珠。518Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYxKZdZXQkF
一首短短的十四行詩裡面，竟然用到了十種修辭格：明喻(simile)、暗喻(metaphor)、設問/反問(rhetorical question)、擬人(personification)、相關語(pun)、矛盾(paradox)、頭韻(alliteration)、誇張(hyperbole)、借代(synecdoche)及倒裝(inversion)，而且題材還糅合了詩歌、夏天與人的永恆之美，簡直就是譯者的噩夢XD518Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡg6Si8tewg3
分享一下我自己嘗試翻譯的版本(並且借詩向大家告白)，不過還是推薦大家先細細品味原文。
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
我怎能把你比做夏日？518Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRM05rjJvFv
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Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
你比夏日更溫柔動人。518Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgvdNucylfp
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Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
狂風搖落五月的嬌蕊，518Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBmU2k7HPTl
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And summer's lease hath all too short a date.
夏日的時光稍縱即逝。518Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYwu5pAD6mg
518Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLROvHwRLxR
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
烈日之眼時而格外灼熱，518Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnQDI6my7Mb
518Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8fQYfRNy3J
And often is his gold complexion dimmed,
金色面容轉眼黯然失色，518Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡctI01mNh9Z
518Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9WimckMCte
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
一切美麗終不免凋敝，518Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLKhXTgS5aN
518Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBixN8PcBz8
By chance, or nature's changing course, untrimmed;
不論天意無常或有常。518Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQbC36cXl9w
518Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHDDOSs2bk8
But thy eternal summer shall not fade
但你的長夏永不褪色，518Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9rC1KGhwfX
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Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest,
你的美麗也永不消失，518Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDhTL6XOuSc
518Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTFqNZQb8Va
Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
死亡陰影不能困住你，518Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡh1oJQqH44J
518Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPkblSBUsnO
When in eternal lines to time thou growest.
你與永恆的詩句同壽。518Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjX7intL8Wm
518Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbNN8hXR0h2
So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
世上一息尚存，世上一目尚視，518Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ37RyQWkX9B
518Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZ6zlArTFIn
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
此詩永遠長存，賦你不朽生命。
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