其實這首並不算正式的詩,34Please respect copyright.PENANAWuYt6VV1v1
幾乎沒有用到任何詩體,34Please respect copyright.PENANAtnwlSQRjnm
就算真的有也只是巧合(沒有特別去查或故意使用)34Please respect copyright.PENANAELOQ3KgWxx
勉強來說是新詩(結構比較不嚴謹)吧!
這題一樣是先有答案才有題目的~34Please respect copyright.PENANA2k35EhqTGx
而這首詩是由昨晚的一場夢開始構築的。
夢中的場景是這樣的,34Please respect copyright.PENANAgifMFigNYE
心中有著各種混亂(壓力或者恐懼或者哀傷、絕望),34Please respect copyright.PENANAkBJxs9XHWd
為了讓自己能夠靜下心來,34Please respect copyright.PENANAdONvIM7kV8
我開始寫書法。34Please respect copyright.PENANAVZL6nygFbX
這個書法的第一句叫做34Please respect copyright.PENANA0I2hXYIQOK
「天地無用」34Please respect copyright.PENANAXDMCMJDSTg
結果用這個字偏小,34Please respect copyright.PENANAEWpFEOf9Or
潛意識告訴我那是因為我對自身感到無能,34Please respect copyright.PENANAAHi8hPNB0p
所以才會越寫越沒自信~34Please respect copyright.PENANAWLDMhFnuM3
接著想要寫上另外三句,把整首詩補齊,34Please respect copyright.PENANAZfWqEazKH0
所以最後的版本是:
天地無用34Please respect copyright.PENANAZdjU9ZLOjr
山河不移34Please respect copyright.PENANAp9q6RAzDDy
人間有情34Please respect copyright.PENANATR40L5mbL1
日月無雙
在練習的過程中,34Please respect copyright.PENANAHqgqf9HPMo
似乎練了1~2個小時,34Please respect copyright.PENANAxbuxvOtWgf
不過字的大小幾乎一致,34Please respect copyright.PENANA4xVGXiQKqi
雖然一撇的捺還是如國小時那樣收尾收不好,34Please respect copyright.PENANA0Drr9eqr5X
但是心終於靜下來,34Please respect copyright.PENANA7OCbxHvdPw
只是手也爆酸~34Please respect copyright.PENANARxdCDBbgUt
於是我就醒來了。
先來分析到底這首詩(雖然可能不算詩)代表的涵義吧。34Please respect copyright.PENANAQKM4Q7yxvS
第一句的天地無用,34Please respect copyright.PENANAjuL65uBbd3
是暗指天與地也幫不了你,你必須靠自己來解決問題。34Please respect copyright.PENANAKScvvt4A5V
第二句的山河不移,34Please respect copyright.PENANA9C85LnpAFX
其實也可以寫作山海不移,34Please respect copyright.PENANAKPbop7pP4x
但是好像是第二個字的平仄要跟第一句相反(地和河、用和移),34Please respect copyright.PENANAk4XsGM9CpZ
所以才改用河。34Please respect copyright.PENANAUSiRJqmaxh
其實跟第一句類似,就是34Please respect copyright.PENANAvv5Mc0nNHm
山不轉,路轉。34Please respect copyright.PENANAqBxpGrPAPR
路不轉,人轉。34Please respect copyright.PENANAgomYDNifQo
的意思。34Please respect copyright.PENANABhcekR99Jj
第三句的人間有情,34Please respect copyright.PENANA9VC8rENblK
是說在困境中,還是要相信人間溫暖、相信愛,34Please respect copyright.PENANAwM68m536Q9
要看陽光面、不要鑽牛角尖,34Please respect copyright.PENANAPrEj5q22y0
也可以說是如果自己不行時,那就找親朋好友幫忙。34Please respect copyright.PENANAxjBpulPnrd
最後一句的日月無雙,34Please respect copyright.PENANA47zD7JzMN9
指的就是一枝草一滴露,34Please respect copyright.PENANAmtzce8Adks
也就是說每個人都是獨特的,34Please respect copyright.PENANA5lMv4kb8YS
即便是日和月,也都是唯一的34Please respect copyright.PENANAUTMfMaicbz
(就算是神話的九個太陽也只剩一個啦!)
這首詩是對應我的什麼心境就跳過吧!34Please respect copyright.PENANA1Xs7JRu6pr
但是我為什麼會覺得這首很適合獻給學長呢?
這邊我們假設學長的煩惱是控制慾(反向面則是不想被控制),34Please respect copyright.PENANA28o0r5kNSW
不要問我為什麼這樣通靈~34Please respect copyright.PENANAkAL156xhLU
再回來看看那首詩:34Please respect copyright.PENANAE55rxBKqlU
第一句的天地無用,34Please respect copyright.PENANAjPfY2Iij45
雖然學長出生在合眾地區的道館世家,34Please respect copyright.PENANAOGXIl2V92e
然而他卻來到藍莓學園,34Please respect copyright.PENANAdIFCTV1tHE
並且成為聯盟社(學生高度自治)的社長~34Please respect copyright.PENANAIW5enF8zX8
即使平常看起來懶散,34Please respect copyright.PENANA1Rb2S9FJzL
對戰時卻不馬虎~34Please respect copyright.PENANAJ6WRs8otD7
我相信這並不是因為他的家世背景或從小的訓練,34Please respect copyright.PENANAGIocMuAlJ9
就能達到這樣的成就~34Please respect copyright.PENANAZpjQZXkdII
不然他也不會就這樣敗給烏栗(相較之下沒有那樣的背景)
接著第二句的山河不移,34Please respect copyright.PENANA3G1ivvEgUd
雖然是馴龍師,但是喜歡寒冷。34Please respect copyright.PENANAVEL8hSFzDa
對戰中會看到他的寶可夢有許多反制剋龍系的技能,34Please respect copyright.PENANAPEfOd3QjC5
因此即使想要用剋屬性贏過杜若也不是那麼容易~34Please respect copyright.PENANAHRAEgniJZy(除非你作弊使用神獸)34Please respect copyright.PENANAk0XBl3enXQ
即便龍系也有弱點,34Please respect copyright.PENANAoupkinyOAs
他也能隨機應變讓自己扭轉局面、34Please respect copyright.PENANAu5bGWR1k3H
反敗為勝!
第三句的人間有情,34Please respect copyright.PENANAqM5CTTEg1A
儘管連工作人員都不信任他、34Please respect copyright.PENANAVv1Cpth0Vi
紫竽又指責他、34Please respect copyright.PENANAGUrGDb3Bji
連小學弟赤松也希望他做什麼事情,34Please respect copyright.PENANAr6gWhGpij1
能跟自己討論,不然會被人誤會或讓別人反感~34Please respect copyright.PENANA7BUqrIYhgz
他還是關心四天王的大家還有烏栗以及主角們。
最後一句的日月無雙,34Please respect copyright.PENANAvfYpsC8nTJ
這句其實是這首詩的重點,34Please respect copyright.PENANAT1EH523kPk
這個日月倒不是指太陽與月亮寶可夢~34Please respect copyright.PENANAw6gL3P1Oc0
意思是希望他不要計較特別,34Please respect copyright.PENANAv40n2xzAFv
而希望他能專注在獨特上面。
曾經有位友人出了一本書,34Please respect copyright.PENANAUxrGhi6Qfg
其中一個觀點就是「Special vs Unique」34Please respect copyright.PENANAGC68PE1TPr
我們常常會著重在Special上面,34Please respect copyright.PENANAzXXNaAzaDU
比方喜歡的人、偶像明星、老師長輩上司...34Please respect copyright.PENANAI226USD3tU
這些都是各種意義上的Special,34Please respect copyright.PENANAoc169oblf9
而我們有時候也希望自己成為Special的人。
然而,34Please respect copyright.PENANA9gKP125XK8
有時候這樣的執著也會帶給自己困擾,34Please respect copyright.PENANA1KGxowzTn8
甚至舉步維艱...34Please respect copyright.PENANAShKfU8b1cb
有些人甚至因此想不開、一直鑽牛角尖...
然而每個人都是獨一無二的,34Please respect copyright.PENANAN1RzMorrj8
即便是長相類似的人、即便是雙胞胎,34Please respect copyright.PENANAzHykXb13hT
也有不同的個性、興趣、志向,34Please respect copyright.PENANAgfWJ8qH3xI
甚至我認為複製人,34Please respect copyright.PENANA5QqHFAVgwT
也會有不同的人生目標和原則~
為什麼會獻給學長這句話呢?34Please respect copyright.PENANAWhkYiFH0S8
學長霸著社長的位子卻不認真做事情,34Please respect copyright.PENANAlcuApziJgr
這是為什麼呢?34Please respect copyright.PENANAYUp5T7lQC3
還有留級三年看似無所謂,34Please respect copyright.PENANAStOi63MzlZ
但是他與八朔老師的對話卻耐人尋味~
畢竟這些都是我腦補的東西,34Please respect copyright.PENANA1m6wbhoqde
所以就只是分享我淺薄的見解了~34Please respect copyright.PENANAFrRXcN8pW0
除了獻給學長這首詩,34Please respect copyright.PENANA8dcvAetPfl
也希望自己能做到~34Please respect copyright.PENANAQrRTxFczhL
彼此共勉之!
6/21 完
p.s. 這首詩絕不是暗指我的名字是詩字輩的那個詩喔~
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