《夾出一個她》再始動(四)247Please respect copyright.PENANAWVehixL4ii
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人生第一個長篇連載故事,終於可以寫感想,同大家廢噏一番。247Please respect copyright.PENANAlPrlFfsm12
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唔知睇緊呢篇文嘅你,有幾多係因為《夾出一個她》而認識我,從而認識澄澄故事台其他作品?如果可以,不妨留言講你喺邊度初次邂逅澄澄啊!247Please respect copyright.PENANARsZKRnitk3
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呢個故事令到我識到好多初代嘅讀者,而呢班初代嘅讀者對故事台嘅發展意義重大,佢哋好多時候會俾好多寶貴而有用嘅意見我,甚或唔少嘅讀者最後成為咗我現實上嘅好朋友,每一個留言、每一個意見、每一條Direct message我都印象深刻,成為之後寫得更好嘅指標,獲得你哋嘅讚賞,我真係好開心。即使係比較負面嘅評價,我都好欣然接受,你哋係想我好先俾啲負面意見,想我更加進步,每個善意嘅批評我都努力改善,做到最好,對得住自己嘅作品。247Please respect copyright.PENANArLWjfHY1IL
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當然各大小說平台嘅排行榜亦都令我對自己嘅創作更有信心,有幸上到紙言追稿排行榜第九名,亦都上過人氣文章小說單日排行榜嘅二十八名,甚至TBC…人人人氣榜都有十三個禮拜上榜。種種推動我寫作嘅動力,又令到更加多讀者認識我嘅故事。247Please respect copyright.PENANAua3z2DBfEy
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去到結局,真係好唔捨得一個咁多view數嘅故事去到呢刻就完,但難道想將一個故事變成沒完沒了嘅肥皂劇?View數一定會不斷累積,不過故事嘅質素一定會低,讀者有機會因為質素放下而流失,而且睇得多都會審美疲勞啦!247Please respect copyright.PENANAqdyoVdyXoN
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唯有按照大綱鋪排將故事完結,而留待他日可以加推後記或者番外篇,再續故事前緣。247Please respect copyright.PENANApj4Yo5E95y
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去到最近考完DSE,終於有時間將兩年前嘅作品《霹啪文壇頒獎典禮》搬到去再始動系列之上,完完整整咁完結《夾出一個她》成個小說,有頭有尾。原本構思係想以兩年前嘅文章成為框架,用而家嘅文筆重新演繹。最後決定唔再編寫,簡簡單單將內容輕微修改就算,保留返以前文筆欠奉嘅味道。相信睇而家嘅連載作品同兩年前嘅作品都睇到我喺創作路上嘅成長,文筆同故事都一直喺度改善同進步,我相信之後嘅文章都係會越嚟越好,大家就拭目以待啦!
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或許大家都可能有興趣知道,呢個故事到底點樣爆出嚟?就係咁:當時夾公仔機非常盛行,就好似便利店「總有一間喺附近」,可惜夾嚟夾去都係得公仔、figure毫無新意,有啲新意咪夾電話同遊戲機囉!根據《賭博條例》「有獎娛樂遊戲牌照」寫到明,每一次獎品的價值不可超過三百港元。247Please respect copyright.PENANACUde91IeyR
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咁夾女朋友又算唔算違法呢?女朋友嘅價值係視乎你點睇,可以無價,亦都可以一文不值,相信喺浚彥嘅角度就係千金小姐喇!247Please respect copyright.PENANA7WbssDzRmN
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故事選址喺西灣河太安樓係因為多嘢食,而且樓齡算高,迎合浚彥嘅家境同工作需要。「燒夜店」原型咪就係太安樓入面一間著名嘅串燒店,為咗故事嘅設定,將外賣店變成可供堂食。247Please respect copyright.PENANA0z8nhujKYc
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兩位主角嘅學校設定歸於現實上兩間中學,當然就唔喺度開名,大家就估下,話唔定有獎品㗎。247Please respect copyright.PENANAjcL8UMIw7q
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最後就自爆一下故事開頭浚彥嘅撚手小菜-意大利燴飯,正正就係我細個最愛嘅頹食項目,簡簡單單一罐忌廉湯撈飯,有時食豪啲就加些少急凍海鮮,真心方便又好食。247Please respect copyright.PENANAwSKkkvh6gV
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故事嘅結尾向某套好出名嘅動漫致敬,大家不妨估下。247Please respect copyright.PENANA6fe16v9BLL
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《夾出一個她》behind the scene 去到呢度,其實文章有好多彩蛋留待大家發掘㗎!睇完今集不妨再重新回味浚彥同蕊心嘅甜蜜之旅啦!
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感想文章嘅最後特別衷心感謝希逸同安琪,呢兩位好朋友義不容辭為故事付出咗好多嘢,成個故事嘅主要大綱就係同佢哋兩位一齊去露營嘅時候傾出嚟,三日兩夜嘅露營主要就係傾故事大綱,到落實故事構思嘅時候,安琪為故事嘅鋪排俾咗好多重要嘅意見,甚至去到連載期間都一直追睇,每集連載過後都有俾意見,想我寫得更好,想故事更加吸引人去追看,亦都幫手宣傳我嘅作品,幫我儲咗一部分讀者。247Please respect copyright.PENANAAWI1fuH1vB
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去到故事封面設計,希逸同我畫咗好多個設計,務求將故事封面畫得最好最靚,仲記得希逸為故事封面辛苦嘅付出,不斷聽我嘅意見去修改,最後嘅成品正正就係而家嘅封面,而安琪知道故事要出街之後,特登為《夾出一個她》題字,原本由電腦字變成手寫書法字,令到封面更加靚。247Please respect copyright.PENANAQq88Fn6s2m
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之後要多謝歐陽浚彥(故事名嚟),現實上成日惡搞我啲故事,整咗好多正memes抽故事台水,大家可以睇Instagram限時動態精選嘅「薪水小偷」,佢整咗好多高質而搞笑嘅memes惡搞澄澄故事台。247Please respect copyright.PENANAW8msbo5if8
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故事入面,佢同楚翹閃到爆登;喺現實上,佢係同阿妹-歐陽蕊心拍拖,閃出一個新境界,小弟見證住佢哋曖昧到相戀,真係sweet爆囉,唔知幾時可以到我閃呢?我都好想放閃啊!247Please respect copyright.PENANAaIpYiLEl0U
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最重要要多謝文字編輯HiHi,HiHi都加入咗澄澄故事台接近兩個年頭,幫我喺故事中後期俾咗好多意見我,令到故事冇咁悶。HiHi永遠都係世界上第一個睇每篇新鮮滾熱辣寫完嘅文。放心將來故事台大把文要你睇,差你好多好多餐飯,到時過嚟幫襯我啦!247Please respect copyright.PENANAk1cstHeFHC
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當然都要多謝睇到呢度嘅你,去到呢度第七十一集,啱啱好十二萬字,兩年四個月嘅時間,見證住澄澄故事台嘅發展,冇呢個故事,我相信自己都唔會有呢刻嘅成就,故事台都唔會維持到咁耐。247Please respect copyright.PENANAOyl2EBcO45
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呢個係憧憬愛情嘅故事去到呢度就正式圓滿結束,下個故事將會係對愛情嘅失望,心水清嘅讀者應該知係咩故事嚟,冇錯就係《前度超渡師》,呢個故同時都迎接緊尾聲,唔知文杰同阿嘈最後去定留呢?就喺度賣個關子喇!
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成長路上,感恩有你改變我的興趣。247Please respect copyright.PENANAq3slw5z1y8
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一日寫文,一世寫文。247Please respect copyright.PENANA4WCtImFupW
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