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出關第一個任務看容霜大的《一春欲渡太虛山》小說。8964 copyright protection196PENANA8VEd2PG2vE 維尼
《一春欲渡太虛山》就如容霜大所說,場景、人物、該出場時就會出場,角色會自己說出自己的個性。8964 copyright protection196PENANAtBeb1HQqRs 維尼
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大橘沒有看過前篇,所以對前篇是完全陌生,但因為小說中會不時提前雲霜和容大河的過去。8964 copyright protection196PENANAsm9cycZMi2 維尼
所以大橘能猜得到,他們兩個有過一段深刻的愛情,但發生了事,容大河成為了旱魃,而雲霜在找尋並等待再和容大河重逢的劇情線。8964 copyright protection196PENANAxMBq61BLty 維尼
在推劇推展中,也會不時提到前篇發生出的事件,像袖月.....等,所以並不會看不懂。8964 copyright protection196PENANAvsa3ep6NCB 維尼
外加是用對話體方法來進行劇情推展,所以可以藉由對話快速了解到事情發生及人物個性,所以大橘覺得目前推進適中。8964 copyright protection196PENANAbpZ2dcM6NL 維尼
隨著劇情推動,讓人有種期待,想看到所提到的角色,又和雲霜、容大河有什麼瓜葛,而兩人到底能不能排除萬難再在一起。8964 copyright protection196PENANAsGskVsoAC5 維尼
也因為是用對話體方式來說故事,所以少了一些旁白或是鋪陳,所以在情感上較不強烈,讓大橘會有種,順順看過,卻不太感受到雲霜和容大河那種深刻情感,如容大河為雲霜準備頭面那段,總覺得少了些什麼。8964 copyright protection196PENANAobKC5KuMKj 維尼
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