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[1] 押廣東話 /on/ 韻。67Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzzIYCh7w3Z
[2] 冇番號提供。67Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡevc8yk5jJk
[3] 看：平聲。讀陰平聲，即廣東話第一聲，/hon1/，看更、看守嘅看音。67Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2QWVoYEcSC
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氣質美如蘭，才華馥比仙，天生成孤癖人皆罕。你道是啖肉食腥膻，視綺羅俗厭；卻不知太高人愈妒，過潔世同嫌。可歎這青燈古殿人將老，孤負了紅粉朱樓春色闌！到頭來，依舊是風塵骯髒違心願，好一似無瑕白玉遭泥陷。又何須王孫公子歎無緣？67Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAjZh0XwG8E
[5] 跨：仄聲。讀陰去聲，即廣東話第三聲，/kwaa3/。廣東話口語掛衫、掛起佢個「掛」音。67Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMuiC4blExH
[6] 第廿四次德尼思化創作會嘅主題係「情慾」。
