《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧154Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡceAGxIsilG
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍154Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjXDJTh9Qxo
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）154Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEEHK3EcYhV
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單154Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxi1hEGkqbe
而是是人在食用時能入口即化154Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ21tQG8TRdq
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」154Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNnwuL4cjvJ
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久154Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡocpnwX7fQ0
使人不會因為時間的洪流154Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsdfJXuF6or
失去了炙熱154Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGpTsbX4xsi
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詩名為《夏，冬眠》154Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkuCueDLrxp
但夏季怎麼會有雪154Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡj9XS7JFcxE
令人加以反思154Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSK4HwjvhVX
雪季不該有的畫面154Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlhK1JxTfQM
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏154Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTqrvxImKgl
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或許154Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGpIXoE9WyH
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣154Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBhDUqK6saI
即便是來年154Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEUvgrwBwcy
之後的每一年都依然如此
