《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧205Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡn3TZZM4Jzu
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍205Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZFKaUlQV46
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）205Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKQIkSqxxWd
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單205Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡymiUUV53PD
而是是人在食用時能入口即化205Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjQN9p9VpIc
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」205Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdiWc1G3JaW
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久205Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrWac1j2xQC
使人不會因為時間的洪流205Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyH0CU8LLba
失去了炙熱205Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyQwAKFEkTM
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詩名為《夏，冬眠》205Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2lVbZjaxF6
但夏季怎麼會有雪205Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsNkq5vBafr
令人加以反思205Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeTMFBFRQIW
雪季不該有的畫面205Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTnhgKZRHob
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏205Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7u4xKe0bYP
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或許205Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSBNN4Gx9FI
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣205Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzccwuoy5V3
即便是來年205Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFJXAQKfi6w
之後的每一年都依然如此
