《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧266Please respect copyright.PENANAI8Ya9Bhqw3
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍266Please respect copyright.PENANAWo7WfICbV2
而藉由水果方式提升(味覺)266Please respect copyright.PENANAAQvpdOcPGg
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道,而不止是品詩這麼簡單266Please respect copyright.PENANAIt8prftDXF
而是是人在食用時能入口即化266Please respect copyright.PENANAU09bP8ApAf
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」266Please respect copyright.PENANAem3WmahFx1
我尤以喜歡這句,心臟當然不會跳動變慢,但內心(精神)的感覺卻可以,慢而持久266Please respect copyright.PENANA04g8FxGl33
使人不會因為時間的洪流266Please respect copyright.PENANALgu97XtGSi
失去了炙熱266Please respect copyright.PENANAOUX8Z3Ii49
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詩名為《夏,冬眠》266Please respect copyright.PENANAozd70l92xW
但夏季怎麼會有雪266Please respect copyright.PENANArn5tESTko0
令人加以反思266Please respect copyright.PENANAEwVpmhkG2j
雪季不該有的畫面266Please respect copyright.PENANA4Nke1uYFAR
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲,走過歲月的容顏266Please respect copyright.PENANA2naTojqpTU
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或許266Please respect copyright.PENANAS4aFyLRdyc
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣266Please respect copyright.PENANA1x9NZRcu43
即便是來年266Please respect copyright.PENANAPlU4LMAFm0
之後的每一年都依然如此