《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#170 夏祈杳杳
▌類型 樂府詩
▌作者 宅米蟲子
本篇相對於前兩篇樂府詩184Please respect copyright.PENANAhXWCLMrsyn
詩意要較為薄弱184Please respect copyright.PENANAhXMqMvEcMQ
但仍是一首很棒的古詩184Please respect copyright.PENANALwGasQ6HhD
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之所以我認為相對較弱的部分184Please respect copyright.PENANADowNqsbfGU
是其意境 與用詞的閱讀感184Please respect copyright.PENANAGVNHanDzc4
【兩世笙花】、【殘夏中秋】中皆有一個顯眼的主題,但在【夏祈杳杳】中以花鋪景,望卻天上星闕流露出了一絲孤寂與深沉的感受。184Please respect copyright.PENANARCT7XIFE77
或許是【兩世笙花】的一抹玄龍劃破淡薄心防,思念太深。184Please respect copyright.PENANA3no8dGRzRH
也許是【殘夏中秋】的細雨紛飛絕情綿綿,景色太美。184Please respect copyright.PENANADNcHNZ0Xd8
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再嗑完了兩份深沉的憂愁後,重回到了【夏祈杳杳】,別有另外一種,希望來年梧桐花開,伊人會再來的期望。184Please respect copyright.PENANAWzGCPFIEOe
更多是抱持著,能夠等待,並且那人是可以等得到的感受。184Please respect copyright.PENANAW0rIjmaNk0
故此,以其作為比較下,兩者意境高低立判。184Please respect copyright.PENANAxpk4D4TBil
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當然,宅米的詩無庸置疑放在蕉園上都是罕有敵手,皆為佳作。184Please respect copyright.PENANAv766oHjOzX
詩的優缺,僅憑讀者當下的心境去解讀。184Please respect copyright.PENANA4iIYlQ3iDU
每個人的角度皆為不同。184Please respect copyright.PENANAXT6ruz4MJ7
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有人感受深刻,184Please respect copyright.PENANAuEaeM0SH92
有人無感,184Please respect copyright.PENANASBYgVFkOQn
各有差異。184Please respect copyright.PENANAeyD1J85KAQ
而我僅是那茫茫人海中,184Please respect copyright.PENANA11vxpw7mcx
因其而感受到詩中情摯所渲染一名騷客。