《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#170 夏祈杳杳
▌類型 樂府詩
▌作者 宅米蟲子
本篇相對於前兩篇樂府詩183Please respect copyright.PENANAQtbEs3PAbA
詩意要較為薄弱183Please respect copyright.PENANAe1SsyUWq8y
但仍是一首很棒的古詩183Please respect copyright.PENANAhuSPgyydQA
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之所以我認為相對較弱的部分183Please respect copyright.PENANAVJgomm9TFT
是其意境 與用詞的閱讀感183Please respect copyright.PENANAPaFNRzsHlM
【兩世笙花】、【殘夏中秋】中皆有一個顯眼的主題,但在【夏祈杳杳】中以花鋪景,望卻天上星闕流露出了一絲孤寂與深沉的感受。183Please respect copyright.PENANA02npVS28OO
或許是【兩世笙花】的一抹玄龍劃破淡薄心防,思念太深。183Please respect copyright.PENANAiTFZYsSlJ1
也許是【殘夏中秋】的細雨紛飛絕情綿綿,景色太美。183Please respect copyright.PENANAv7rMk6JpyJ
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再嗑完了兩份深沉的憂愁後,重回到了【夏祈杳杳】,別有另外一種,希望來年梧桐花開,伊人會再來的期望。183Please respect copyright.PENANAdh5h35TgRu
更多是抱持著,能夠等待,並且那人是可以等得到的感受。183Please respect copyright.PENANAjdaybOF5rn
故此,以其作為比較下,兩者意境高低立判。183Please respect copyright.PENANApm7vsaZmiS
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當然,宅米的詩無庸置疑放在蕉園上都是罕有敵手,皆為佳作。183Please respect copyright.PENANAunB4jQctEe
詩的優缺,僅憑讀者當下的心境去解讀。183Please respect copyright.PENANAt8PttM0Wig
每個人的角度皆為不同。183Please respect copyright.PENANAMYbz0E4V2Y
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有人感受深刻,183Please respect copyright.PENANAEYCemYkmtW
有人無感,183Please respect copyright.PENANALGZYAehkSN
各有差異。183Please respect copyright.PENANA0FqgAG8SMj
而我僅是那茫茫人海中,183Please respect copyright.PENANA0BjqWjUQUK
因其而感受到詩中情摯所渲染一名騷客。