《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧220Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlTgFtwmcPc
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍220Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgwNm7EnUtd
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）220Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLhJfb6XOCS
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單220Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡt5pwlBkGmg
而是是人在食用時能入口即化220Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDE77nq2V8Q
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」220Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3L4FOeAoBC
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久220Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWizMH3Bqro
使人不會因為時間的洪流220Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKtTO7WRgRQ
失去了炙熱220Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOVN5qo0hzm
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詩名為《夏，冬眠》220Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1N7WI5PeDl
但夏季怎麼會有雪220Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMvJwVk2dt2
令人加以反思220Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5OlEa9md6k
雪季不該有的畫面220Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5PT075iE7H
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏220Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNMSBDCWOCn
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或許220Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4OLOmulJjH
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣220Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9jSrEaoWUe
即便是來年220Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡggcwZASmMG
之後的每一年都依然如此
