《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧220Please respect copyright.PENANAlTgFtwmcPc
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍220Please respect copyright.PENANAgwNm7EnUtd
而藉由水果方式提升(味覺)220Please respect copyright.PENANALhJfb6XOCS
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道,而不止是品詩這麼簡單220Please respect copyright.PENANAt5pwlBkGmg
而是是人在食用時能入口即化220Please respect copyright.PENANADE77nq2V8Q
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」220Please respect copyright.PENANA3L4FOeAoBC
我尤以喜歡這句,心臟當然不會跳動變慢,但內心(精神)的感覺卻可以,慢而持久220Please respect copyright.PENANAWizMH3Bqro
使人不會因為時間的洪流220Please respect copyright.PENANAKtTO7WRgRQ
失去了炙熱220Please respect copyright.PENANAOVN5qo0hzm
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詩名為《夏,冬眠》220Please respect copyright.PENANA1N7WI5PeDl
但夏季怎麼會有雪220Please respect copyright.PENANAMvJwVk2dt2
令人加以反思220Please respect copyright.PENANA5OlEa9md6k
雪季不該有的畫面220Please respect copyright.PENANA5PT075iE7H
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲,走過歲月的容顏220Please respect copyright.PENANANMSBDCWOCn
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或許220Please respect copyright.PENANA4OLOmulJjH
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣220Please respect copyright.PENANA9jSrEaoWUe
即便是來年220Please respect copyright.PENANAggcwZASmMG
之後的每一年都依然如此