《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧219Please respect copyright.PENANANXuQb732Wy
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍219Please respect copyright.PENANAqZ1kAaZVsF
而藉由水果方式提升(味覺)219Please respect copyright.PENANAy5dB57WlGi
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道,而不止是品詩這麼簡單219Please respect copyright.PENANAEIAtbsiMHK
而是是人在食用時能入口即化219Please respect copyright.PENANABEMrUxxmZn
219Please respect copyright.PENANApeXwHNV7La
「嘗試把心臟調慢」219Please respect copyright.PENANAsIp62C3cYm
我尤以喜歡這句,心臟當然不會跳動變慢,但內心(精神)的感覺卻可以,慢而持久219Please respect copyright.PENANAD2gHS8TpNU
使人不會因為時間的洪流219Please respect copyright.PENANA360iX5ZZ42
失去了炙熱219Please respect copyright.PENANAacsAqfNX41
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詩名為《夏,冬眠》219Please respect copyright.PENANAcRk4o0qcwL
但夏季怎麼會有雪219Please respect copyright.PENANAmL8QP26Wmn
令人加以反思219Please respect copyright.PENANAhOZoFJLtev
雪季不該有的畫面219Please respect copyright.PENANAioSGBqHciT
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲,走過歲月的容顏219Please respect copyright.PENANAQ7wZMJ7iA9
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或許219Please respect copyright.PENANADOSMkjPRPh
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣219Please respect copyright.PENANALBp96VGifT
即便是來年219Please respect copyright.PENANAMC40tcWMEd
之後的每一年都依然如此