《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧219Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNXuQb732Wy
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍219Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqZ1kAaZVsF
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）219Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡy5dB57WlGi
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單219Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEIAtbsiMHK
而是是人在食用時能入口即化219Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBEMrUxxmZn
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」219Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsIp62C3cYm
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久219Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡD2gHS8TpNU
使人不會因為時間的洪流219Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ360iX5ZZ42
失去了炙熱219Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡacsAqfNX41
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詩名為《夏，冬眠》219Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcRk4o0qcwL
但夏季怎麼會有雪219Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmL8QP26Wmn
令人加以反思219Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhOZoFJLtev
雪季不該有的畫面219Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡioSGBqHciT
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏219Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQ7wZMJ7iA9
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或許219Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDOSMkjPRPh
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣219Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLBp96VGifT
即便是來年219Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMC40tcWMEd
之後的每一年都依然如此
