《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧206Please respect copyright.PENANAWW9YkyFRTW
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍206Please respect copyright.PENANAy0OwwFOTXX
而藉由水果方式提升(味覺)206Please respect copyright.PENANA6jkVrTHwPK
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道,而不止是品詩這麼簡單206Please respect copyright.PENANAJ0JZuPnCZb
而是是人在食用時能入口即化206Please respect copyright.PENANA1ePJCDh15z
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」206Please respect copyright.PENANAW7qw9qWQAo
我尤以喜歡這句,心臟當然不會跳動變慢,但內心(精神)的感覺卻可以,慢而持久206Please respect copyright.PENANABSRQQAYES4
使人不會因為時間的洪流206Please respect copyright.PENANAlr4vzgwoSb
失去了炙熱206Please respect copyright.PENANAzsgwOH5iop
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詩名為《夏,冬眠》206Please respect copyright.PENANAt6pcBzANl4
但夏季怎麼會有雪206Please respect copyright.PENANAEl1gHQWQjK
令人加以反思206Please respect copyright.PENANAAYMLrglPJI
雪季不該有的畫面206Please respect copyright.PENANArWzghjFHAw
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲,走過歲月的容顏206Please respect copyright.PENANAKYP9YPrCin
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或許206Please respect copyright.PENANAw2bpV14mj1
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣206Please respect copyright.PENANAtcAke1ot0k
即便是來年206Please respect copyright.PENANAXPUZerMjwF
之後的每一年都依然如此