《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧226Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbo1KbI2jw1
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍226Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIyfLEQxNas
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）226Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡL6l4BptHe7
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單226Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡB82Z9kFuiZ
而是是人在食用時能入口即化226Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcdWn5gYDcD
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」226Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZU5YdIGpTQ
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久226Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBu2QJ7cVuG
使人不會因為時間的洪流226Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhtPURXI6Vy
失去了炙熱226Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGwqxbKnVhu
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詩名為《夏，冬眠》226Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYgxIZSJiNs
但夏季怎麼會有雪226Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡktkBRve3Vu
令人加以反思226Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYTJ9bzogRz
雪季不該有的畫面226Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4gsHf1Bnlm
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏226Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEbeHIUDJnl
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或許226Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOQzVJeJlHN
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣226Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxnZUczLJFZ
即便是來年226Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡd04Rmj8A8J
之後的每一年都依然如此
