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No Plagiarism!YNFdL7eM4UhFwtTzsQFmposted on PENANA 我比較喜歡舊版。412Please respect copyright.PENANANy6CHpKwnE
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在舊版描述雙方打鬥的段落,用字簡潔也很有畫面。而且要說全篇開頭的話,雖然新版有種悲壯感,但我覺得勢均力敵的局面會比一面倒更好看。412Please respect copyright.PENANAeCioGO1FK5
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