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No Plagiarism!gS93xwiY46aysUYBaFZ1posted on PENANA 作者:巴月老人8964 copyright protection633PENANAi6bSrKIjfc 維尼
作品連結:《江河洗血劍》8964 copyright protection633PENANAaN3DKVWlTj 維尼
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本心得將會分爲兩個部分:8964 copyright protection633PENANAGBdSC8U3TY 維尼
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事不宜遲,現在開始。8964 copyright protection633PENANAmkCHBGrhoI 維尼
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1)寫給潛在讀者的宣傳式心得8964 copyright protection633PENANAvd71XVwcDF 維尼
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首先,《江河洗血劍》是個怎樣的故事呢?8964 copyright protection633PENANA2JVOK1cWFh 維尼
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簡單來説,就是六藝齋掌門華白年刺殺掌管江漢的高臻天,結果失敗被殺,還令六藝齋慘遭高臻天派來的高手與官兵圍攻,結果門派被毀,七名弟子被逼分散各處。8964 copyright protection633PENANA28z0dYH7jZ 維尼
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故事的主軸,就是述説這七名弟子向高臻天復仇的過程。8964 copyright protection633PENANAcV4TGw6A8v 維尼
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説到這裏,可能已經有人開始察覺了……8964 copyright protection633PENANAPkSpaCMuKp 維尼
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沒錯,這是群像劇。8964 copyright protection633PENANA6iiahBIVI5 維尼
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雖説是群像劇,但還是有主角的,只是作者一開始並沒清楚指明,需要讀者們邊看邊猜。8964 copyright protection633PENANAo1tAFd8IUU 維尼
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整部作品給我的感覺,就是前面幾章很難看,但劇情越後面越好看。8964 copyright protection633PENANAMgdUOz1e70 維尼
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爲什麽一開始很難看?8964 copyright protection633PENANA4kglmjzzwE 維尼
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故事開始不久,就發生了六藝齋與高臻天派來的高手和官兵們大戰。8964 copyright protection633PENANAQ4YaffSTBp 維尼
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就如上面所述,六藝齋有七名弟子加上師母,而高臻天派來的高手都是之後被復仇的重要對象,是以都有名有姓。8964 copyright protection633PENANAKCxkS0EFKc 維尼
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這導致一開始登場角色太多,令我讀得有點難消化。8964 copyright protection633PENANAxNdcWwxV9L 維尼
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好在「巴月老人」這個作者品牌有所保證,令我能夠堅持到消化完畢。接下來的劇情分別集中講述弟子們的故事,也不再有太多角色一起登場的問題,果然越來越好看。8964 copyright protection633PENANAmmtx30XgPC 維尼
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這種寫法,我擅自稱之爲「下棋式寫法」。8964 copyright protection633PENANANh6FYPEVTz 維尼
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就像下棋,一開始所有棋子都已在棋盤上,會令人有點眼花繚亂,但接下來就只是這堆棋子精彩的互相廝殺。8964 copyright protection633PENANAiH1e85YOp3 維尼
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這部作品也是同樣的道理。8964 copyright protection633PENANAeZcP3fEqE4 維尼
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作者一開始就讓大部份重要角色登場,接下來就鮮少新角色加入,而是著重於現有角色之間的愛恨情仇,並且隨著劇情發展,角色數量一個個減……這裏就不劇透了。8964 copyright protection633PENANAAherw2r2tN 維尼
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總之,閲讀這部作品,就要有心理準備說一開始會眼花繚亂,但只要熬過去,精彩的劇情就來了!8964 copyright protection633PENANAEtu6eOwo2Y 維尼
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閲讀了超過一半,甚至開始發現,原來主角就是「那位」,並體會到挖掘出藏寶的喜悅。8964 copyright protection633PENANAFLuUTXwfHv 維尼
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既然這是宣傳式心得,請容我在這裏邀客,以下是三種我覺得可以嘗試閱讀《江河洗血劍》的人:8964 copyright protection633PENANAg6786bobto 維尼
1) 想閲讀不同於一般的網文之人。8964 copyright protection633PENANAVZn9lQzRbk 維尼
2) 明白「下棋式寫法」的美妙之人。8964 copyright protection633PENANAwZnZgYnDYf 維尼
3) 想閱讀已完結作品之人。8964 copyright protection633PENANAAH3IU7S5rN 維尼
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宣傳式心得就寫到這裏,如若開始心癢,歡迎點入作品連結閲讀。8964 copyright protection633PENANA6q4saPkNEN 維尼
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作者:巴月老人8964 copyright protection633PENANAcssVIZ1Qzx 維尼
作品連結:《江河洗血劍》8964 copyright protection633PENANA0KsLvv0OAX 維尼
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2)寫給作者的分享式心得(含劇透)8964 copyright protection633PENANAN8Hs9VqRI6 維尼
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恭喜巴月老人又完結了一部作品!!!8964 copyright protection633PENANArsght59iBf 維尼
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就像上面所説的,這部作品跟上次的《劍打梨花》一樣,一開始都有點勸退,但因爲深信「巴月老人」這個品牌,堅持閲讀下去,果然劇情越後面越好看,不辜負了我的信任。8964 copyright protection633PENANAv4CFQUFWAs 維尼
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按照往常,先説説幾位印象深刻的人物好了。8964 copyright protection633PENANA7md2bDNlSS 維尼
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印象最深刻的,當然是閱讀了超過一半的劇情,才找出來的主角丁零。8964 copyright protection633PENANAByVREquYqA 維尼
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當然,我不覺得丁零是反面教材,畢竟很多時候他的做法,都是當下最「有利」的選擇。雖然有點過於使用手段,但我瞭解。畢竟不這樣做,死的就是自己。8964 copyright protection633PENANATN4vc7j0h9 維尼
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雖然這麽説,但丁零並非我最喜歡的男角。8964 copyright protection633PENANAb09g4i0xk5 維尼
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個人最喜歡的男女角,分別是高臻天和柳玄辰。8964 copyright protection633PENANAFd0gbHoCfv 維尼
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這兩位角色是少數幾個隨著劇情發展,而願意改變想法之人,我甚至很支持兩人在一起。很遺憾的,柳玄辰最後還是過不了那一關,唉……8964 copyright protection633PENANAN8Nh4FX2FN 維尼
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最討厭的角色嘛……8964 copyright protection633PENANAwqL3mzp7BR 維尼
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原本是高臻天的哥哥,因爲他説出真相,間接害死了柳玄辰。但閲讀到最後,就變成了楊世英,畢竟他到最後都不肯放下仇恨。8964 copyright protection633PENANAvT4nZKKTkQ 維尼
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沒辦法,他所認知的正義,我完全不認同。8964 copyright protection633PENANAGxSnwLZLHn 維尼
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説完了角色,接下來説說其他方面。8964 copyright protection633PENANAnbKNye7Cn2 維尼
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在寫出這篇感想前,我回去讀了讀以前寫給《劍打梨花》的感想。8964 copyright protection633PENANAPP14HI4OzE 維尼
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當中,我有提到一個缺點是「敘事手法過於平淡如水」,不足以引爆讀者的情緒。8964 copyright protection633PENANAdtxAKYuIBp 維尼
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而在這部作品……8964 copyright protection633PENANASGJwlmp3tT 維尼
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敘事手法開始有高低起伏,一些場景如楊世英最後跟丁零吵架,都有調動我的情緒。8964 copyright protection633PENANAX0tbLqQ0cN 維尼
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恭喜作者的敘事手法更加精進!8964 copyright protection633PENANAoD0B5TQfl7 維尼
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不過,對於這部作品還是有一點不滿。8964 copyright protection633PENANAnMWVICtFiA 維尼
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就是比起武林味,反而官場味更爲濃厚。8964 copyright protection633PENANA8sdoUojxRZ 維尼
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我個人最喜歡的劇情,就是楊世英闖蕩江湖,結識秦霜和一堆朋友,共同搶奪天星那段,比較有武林的味道。8964 copyright protection633PENANAATklicvkj8 維尼
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很可惜,楊世英最後的表現很不討喜,不然就會成爲我最喜歡的男角色。8964 copyright protection633PENANA5V3S4guBdV 維尼
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除此以外,大多數的劇情都跟官場有關,就感覺少了點武林味……8964 copyright protection633PENANARuEwv9HeuT 維尼
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但總的來説,也還是一部精彩的作品,完本辛苦了!8964 copyright protection633PENANA2Mks7FFgEe 維尼
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想説的就這些,期待作者的下一部作品!8964 copyright protection633PENANA1TnSxHSRa3 維尼
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