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作者:巴月老人8964 copyright protection374PENANAr7yD6RAHwl 維尼
作品鏈接:《劍打梨花》8964 copyright protection374PENANA6FSx2XnJuR 維尼
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猶記得《劍打梨花》首次發布在網絡小說平臺後,秉持著了解各類最新作品的想法,我點進去閱讀。8964 copyright protection374PENANAHSU1zQSONb 維尼
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當時,我在使用著手機,但讀著讀著,卻仿佛回到了中學時期,那個捧著武俠小說在閱讀的我……8964 copyright protection374PENANAFUimkNDOqO 維尼
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沒錯,這是一部會讓我回想起那段非常喜歡武俠小說的青春歲月之作。8964 copyright protection374PENANAD1kcHSWzpa 維尼
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那麼,為什麼我會說《劍打梨花》是一部走出固有框架的武俠小說呢?8964 copyright protection374PENANAHMjZdMrZrh 維尼
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通常武俠小說的套路,就是主角因緣際會得到絕世神功,闖蕩江湖,最終打敗壞人,抱得美人歸。8964 copyright protection374PENANAdaGTglCaiT 維尼
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但《劍打梨花》並非這種套路,反而是一部群像劇,沒有特定的主角視野,由幾個主要的女角貫穿全場。8964 copyright protection374PENANAqAoWHj2Z9j 維尼
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是的,你沒看錯,幾個主要的女角,但她們也不是主角。8964 copyright protection374PENANAA7PpS0hJfW 維尼
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硬要說的話……8964 copyright protection374PENANAbGLHCm9i5B 維尼
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主角是一本名為《萬壽寶典》的武功秘笈,而整部小說的劇情就是圍繞著《萬壽寶典》而展開。8964 copyright protection374PENANAZqrQnVblX3 維尼
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一開始,我並沒意識到這一點,反而錯誤地嘗試尋找誰是男主角,還把自己代入『花晨武』,以為他就是男主。8964 copyright protection374PENANAREjfqbPrid 維尼
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當然,結果花晨武並非男主,而我……也被勸退了。8964 copyright protection374PENANA7gsybVoZew 維尼
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過了一段時間,《劍打梨花》宣告完結,我看了看作者巴月老人的完結感言,才明白這是部群像劇,我的閱讀方式一開始就錯誤了。8964 copyright protection374PENANAYdS79DABIM 維尼
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於是,我決定再次點開《劍打梨花》,並且是以閱讀群像劇的想法來看待這部作品。8964 copyright protection374PENANAUejFDACmx5 維尼
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聽前輩說過,不管什麼小說都好,其實說的都是人與人之間的故事。8964 copyright protection374PENANAfuo8ncGXPi 維尼
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《劍打梨花》所述說的,就是一個家庭與周遭之人的故事。8964 copyright protection374PENANAHaL0vJeges 維尼
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看完整部作品後,我印象最深刻的人物有三個。8964 copyright protection374PENANAuQny9IX2be 維尼
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首先,就是梁人鳳。8964 copyright protection374PENANAYUhZEm2s74 維尼
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他從為報父仇,到逐漸展露稱霸江湖的野心,成為武林盟主,最後卻……8964 copyright protection374PENANAkU3XZRyzTh 維尼
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說實話,看到一半時,我反而支持梁人鳳這個角色。8964 copyright protection374PENANAmkm01cBmRW 維尼
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只可惜啊,他總是要用一些陰暗的手段來處理事情,最後落得這種下場,只能說是活該。8964 copyright protection374PENANA2RFaaxDnDF 維尼
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其次,是潘七娘。8964 copyright protection374PENANAqy3n3xNflV 維尼
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夠神秘,且幾乎貫穿整個故事。8964 copyright protection374PENANARkn50rS5ba 維尼
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最後,是李瑤。8964 copyright protection374PENANAV7OKAs6o3n 維尼
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因為我是個好……咳!大家心知肚明。8964 copyright protection374PENANAe8qPdjvvJ3 維尼
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不得不說,現代作者都很提倡說要有美美的封面和插圖,而很多讀者也喜歡這類作品,378Please respect copyright.PENANAKF4uGIK1Jz
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最美的小龍女,依然是大家當初閱讀《神雕俠侶》時,腦海中所幻想的那個小龍女。8964 copyright protection374PENANAT18iBYAJVI 維尼
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讀者拋棄了自己那無限的想象力,378Please respect copyright.PENANANO1ZRwoRlY
選擇追求眼前所看到的一切,也因此錯失了最美好的人事物,這……是個本末倒置的時代。8964 copyright protection374PENANAuNWeOZUzi8 維尼
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既然是武俠小說,戰鬥場面當然也得提一提了。8964 copyright protection374PENANAW28tKug6bW 維尼
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我印象中最深刻的戰鬥,就是最後那場風長聲VS鐵無咎之戰。8964 copyright protection374PENANAwO2tzcXzix 維尼
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兩人不比內力,比的……是招式,也就是文鬥。8964 copyright protection374PENANA1tfjkl9HkT 維尼
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沒錯,沒有什麼特效、沒有什麼高武、沒有什麼發光、沒有什麼呯呯嘭嘭,只是兩人輪流比劃招式,但卻最令我印象深刻。8964 copyright protection374PENANAM5uSApJWo9 維尼
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當然,整部小說讀下來,也並非全都是優點,至少有兩點是我覺得稍有遺憾的。8964 copyright protection374PENANAibmj1itIAQ 維尼
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第一點,敘事手法過於清水平淡。8964 copyright protection374PENANAxjux1KrajP 維尼
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好處是對讀者來說沒有負擔,閱讀整部小說就像在喝清水一樣,不會對身體造成負擔。8964 copyright protection374PENANA8WHhBbBGn6 維尼
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但是……8964 copyright protection374PENANALxKzIK3cLe 維尼
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我在喝著清水時,有時會有「咦?這麼重要的角色……就這樣死了?」的想法,就感覺……當時應該有烈酒端上,但作者仍然只給了我一杯清水。8964 copyright protection374PENANApeIv6XSgf5 維尼
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換句話說,沒有在重要的劇情點引爆讀者的情緒。8964 copyright protection374PENANA5MFtqOP5oa 維尼
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當然,並沒有說一定要引爆讀者情緒,或許……這就是巴月老人獨有的風格吧。8964 copyright protection374PENANAMARsM010eL 維尼
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第二點,整個江湖……感覺太弱了。8964 copyright protection374PENANA2txZwxLqk4 維尼
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提到武俠小說,總會想到各大武林幫派例如少林、武當和丐幫等等。但這些大門派大幫派,378Please respect copyright.PENANAgm5CoVYH8i
卻沒有發揮應有的影響力,或是乾脆就沒有出現。8964 copyright protection374PENANANY5Zg0KxRe 維尼
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以致風長聲的武林盟主……似乎得來太過容易。8964 copyright protection374PENANAZc3RyNDa3e 維尼
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感覺……他當上的並非武林盟主,而是一群宵小幫派的頭領而已。8964 copyright protection374PENANA9rJO80o9aT 維尼
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以上就是我對於《劍打梨花》的感想。8964 copyright protection374PENANAFwfhZ5BKP6 維尼
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要是閱讀到這裏卻還沒看過這部作品,請容我在這裏邀客,以下是三種我覺得應該閱讀《劍打梨花》的人:8964 copyright protection374PENANA3NsJfE7hSg 維尼
1) 想回味當初看武俠小說時的感動之人。8964 copyright protection374PENANABegx8fmm3o 維尼
2) 想閱讀走出固有框架的武俠小說之人。8964 copyright protection374PENANALw3InjMKyL 維尼
3) 想閱讀已完結作品之人。8964 copyright protection374PENANAWxCxKYgK9c 維尼
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邀客之余,請容我在這裏趕客,以下是三種我覺得可以不用去閱讀《劍打梨花》的人:8964 copyright protection374PENANA5RBty4ZOBF 維尼
1) 想看主角龍傲天,練得絕世神功,開後宮之人。8964 copyright protection374PENANAafk9906TAL 維尼
2) 只想看男性角色逞威風的大男人主義之人。8964 copyright protection374PENANANynLsuNaEV 維尼
3) 只看看打!打!打!的打蟲上腦之人。8964 copyright protection374PENANArkR9Ufr0ub 維尼
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就寫到這裏,請巴月老人笑納(?)這份書評,也感謝大家的閱讀。8964 copyright protection374PENANAjzL32fAAnQ 維尼
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