《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧206Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZt6AGlnawa
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍206Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8tierg3AuA
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）206Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4aHhIxjYHb
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單206Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjLiqEkBx03
而是是人在食用時能入口即化206Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTYn4ZrNW1J
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」206Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoO9NBk7LIi
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久206Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡw5D7rqGxjy
使人不會因為時間的洪流206Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0DWkhwQLa6
失去了炙熱206Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwcrrKrtcXg
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詩名為《夏，冬眠》206Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡi5opI1DmCQ
但夏季怎麼會有雪206Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXBc8PATs4k
令人加以反思206Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsMGHLq5xbj
雪季不該有的畫面206Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoKT1bqwc8E
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏206Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJIVga9edYB
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或許206Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVWWJzb1M9h
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣206Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡavehazdEiH
即便是來年206Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡILdLEmyN9h
之後的每一年都依然如此
