《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧155Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJNpEAdQKQp
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍155Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrK0f2Tlx1m
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）155Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5yZZavnqFm
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單155Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVhNWDtTInz
而是是人在食用時能入口即化155Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtILC6f543P
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」155Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡr0Rio1Fgen
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久155Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnWe5bSj6Lv
使人不會因為時間的洪流155Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLowGajAjhY
失去了炙熱155Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQcaASBz7FM
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詩名為《夏，冬眠》155Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡP8pBVpSY4A
但夏季怎麼會有雪155Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDD9NA22dKT
令人加以反思155Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPRHjIF2RPZ
雪季不該有的畫面155Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeT9kpY2Vfq
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏155Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡx3Z9HANFAs
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或許155Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVbqK2i2zu2
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣155Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIQrvS9k9Sn
即便是來年155Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpYVe1uZGgT
之後的每一年都依然如此
