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11/16

大米粥 大米粥
Nov 16, 2022 305 1 Min Read
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No Plagiarism!p3zr6BiMafPPtOxFOYItposted on PＥNAＮＡ

今天給一個好朋友聽了給某某的初版demo

我個人覺得初版比較像是江添的獨白

很溫柔

帶點悲傷的溫柔

就……該怎麼說，跟添哥很像

後來版本的某某就是望仔

準確來說，是添望的給某某

歌詞帶著一點添哥專屬的溫柔

曲風有著望仔的歡脫

有著少年的盛大

309Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjoEN5KV6Xi

「經年之後我富有一切自由

可以親吻可以情鍾

獨缺少十七歲某某

於是一切富有都貧窮」

這段是初版我最喜歡的地方

這一段的旋律配上這樣的歌詞真的很心痛

嗚嗚嗚，陳亦洺大大真的好厲害

 

後來的某某主要分成兩部分

前半像添哥

後半像望仔

曲風雖然沒有那麼溫柔

可是感覺更貼合他們的愛情

感覺一切都明亮

 

給某某 初版：https://youtu.be/z9JCaJNP35U

給某某 原版（也就是正式版本）：

https://youtu.be/Hi_Xx8cg3RA

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