
相信自己的直覺,有時靈光一閃的念頭,比深思熟慮的結果更令人拍案驚奇。因為心血來潮的靈感放棄一個月的進度也是常有的事。當時亦然,直覺認為劇本尚有不足,我就相信直覺而停筆,重新審視故事。
首先是第十八章的部份,重頭戲是昌因為大小姐毀容而自責,覺得自己能力不足而拖累大小姐,崩潰痛哭,顯示昌柔弱的一面。然而大小姐沒有責備昌,突顯二人的牽絆堅如磐石。387Please respect copyright.PENANAUAaa5kC13C
舊作『在樹林裡的她』寫過類似的劇情,理應很容易掌握才對,是甚麼在妨礙我呢?387Please respect copyright.PENANAlEa9AyfdiP
昌:「是我。」387Please respect copyright.PENANALo8DIba82Z
甚麼!?387Please respect copyright.PENANA8YO3Tg9kwz
昌:「是小看我嗎?你這隻軟體生物。我才不會為了此等小事就崩潰。說,我的靈感原型是誰。」
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(羅貝爾特+法夫尼爾)x沃爾特÷2,比起女僕,執事的成份比較高。387Please respect copyright.PENANAD94GZZ34tm
昌:「這算大小姐變成了他媽哥池,依然面不改容鞠躬盡瘁才是真正的女僕吧。」387Please respect copyright.PENANA6T1Jrz4v8a
你的執念也太重!不過,這的確符合你的設定啦。387Please respect copyright.PENANAhzHH9gdoC7
昌:「知道就馬上把故事重寫,你這隻章魚。」387Please respect copyright.PENANAiI7wnjYWOh
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可惡的高腳七,一針見血打出大暴擊,令人無法反駁。那麼,將劇本這樣改一改——改到就有鬼啦!完全沒有靈感啊!387Please respect copyright.PENANAyv1B8TgubN
我不寫了!JoJo!387Please respect copyright.PENANAPNDQa2mQIK
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昌:「你不是還有CP要推嗎?」387Please respect copyright.PENANAeTavg23ziA
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那就,暫時休筆!387Please respect copyright.PENANATCbFWegMsJ
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24/12/2021
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