可惜文中太多「我」了,如果可以換寫法會更好。最後一句的處理比較好,不然就只是普通的夢境。對於怪物沒有比較深入描繪,所以感覺不恐怖。繼續加油吧,希望潛水中~生活順利。122Please respect copyright.PENANA8d6Dzqn7vn
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以怪物為主題:122Please respect copyright.PENANAhvr3EnFayQ
創挑還沒有結果啊!122Please respect copyright.PENANAjAdWK1q32u
有了嗎?122Please respect copyright.PENANAFc5uGAy5Nj
還沒啊……122Please respect copyright.PENANAMvmKg9ajvU
怎麼還沒呢?122Please respect copyright.PENANAswp4diFtNO
怎麼呢……122Please respect copyright.PENANApUUrfq4dAk
拖延就是一只看不見卻處處有的怪獸,122Please respect copyright.PENANAA2zNIx1QYl
我們的生命,越拖越短,越拖越乏。122Please respect copyright.PENANAS8YEoWhlZt
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我想在其他平台發,我嘗試不要用創挑。122Please respect copyright.PENANAwVa5vZ8cM1
今天會把報告交上來吧?122Please respect copyright.PENANAAEXROwPOOH
我聽說下個星期才是截止日期~122Please respect copyright.PENANALdjyDGfkSQ
啊!有怪獸!122Please respect copyright.PENANANkFlEoXx32
哪裡?那裡?122Please respect copyright.PENANAIIeXKgpKgQ
這裡有,這裡有,那裡也有~122Please respect copyright.PENANADyR4pCscKZ
就在你你我的時間裡!122Please respect copyright.PENANAPjs2XHQaT9
生命,越拖越短,越拖越乏。122Please respect copyright.PENANA5hPibXyIjV
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〈被怪物襲擊〉潛水中~122Please respect copyright.PENANAWiSwijcgLJ
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