可惜文中太多「我」了,如果可以換寫法會更好。最後一句的處理比較好,不然就只是普通的夢境。對於怪物沒有比較深入描繪,所以感覺不恐怖。繼續加油吧,希望潛水中~生活順利。122Please respect copyright.PENANAoDGyLthSQJ
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以怪物為主題:122Please respect copyright.PENANANNfZFhgtbs
創挑還沒有結果啊!122Please respect copyright.PENANAG2CLfRKwX5
有了嗎?122Please respect copyright.PENANAxZtUzhIcrt
還沒啊……122Please respect copyright.PENANAS9fbcFrVMm
怎麼還沒呢?122Please respect copyright.PENANA2TAkSLw18f
怎麼呢……122Please respect copyright.PENANAQ24Gr5Vmyq
拖延就是一只看不見卻處處有的怪獸,122Please respect copyright.PENANAoYrlxxbobC
我們的生命,越拖越短,越拖越乏。122Please respect copyright.PENANAw7e9zwc5UZ
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我想在其他平台發,我嘗試不要用創挑。122Please respect copyright.PENANAj5XAVqW7gY
今天會把報告交上來吧?122Please respect copyright.PENANAA59UpGZ99V
我聽說下個星期才是截止日期~122Please respect copyright.PENANAVVBYzSU74y
啊!有怪獸!122Please respect copyright.PENANAl7jiud1i01
哪裡?那裡?122Please respect copyright.PENANAenI8rQxuCI
這裡有,這裡有,那裡也有~122Please respect copyright.PENANAJQYlz5T5LS
就在你你我的時間裡!122Please respect copyright.PENANADG7RqKFGrR
生命,越拖越短,越拖越乏。122Please respect copyright.PENANA4j2DmWe5zg
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〈被怪物襲擊〉潛水中~122Please respect copyright.PENANAixfk1AA9qA
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