可惜文中太多「我」了,如果可以換寫法會更好。最後一句的處理比較好,不然就只是普通的夢境。對於怪物沒有比較深入描繪,所以感覺不恐怖。繼續加油吧,希望潛水中~生活順利。121Please respect copyright.PENANASm5x2ygjIZ
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以怪物為主題:121Please respect copyright.PENANAPlgRRXQkdT
創挑還沒有結果啊!121Please respect copyright.PENANArRT3A5fdqd
有了嗎?121Please respect copyright.PENANAUPuqX0fQ9o
還沒啊……121Please respect copyright.PENANAvhIW3VCALr
怎麼還沒呢?121Please respect copyright.PENANALbpszoP0Hi
怎麼呢……121Please respect copyright.PENANA5dImxkBFXx
拖延就是一只看不見卻處處有的怪獸,121Please respect copyright.PENANAGjud4J6JVf
我們的生命,越拖越短,越拖越乏。121Please respect copyright.PENANAAtS5uD1egG
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我想在其他平台發,我嘗試不要用創挑。121Please respect copyright.PENANAwzfLfNqAJ4
今天會把報告交上來吧?121Please respect copyright.PENANAub07FMoLqH
我聽說下個星期才是截止日期~121Please respect copyright.PENANAqSru8gIzhz
啊!有怪獸!121Please respect copyright.PENANACmDfsLZCdM
哪裡?那裡?121Please respect copyright.PENANA6ojdXYZAF0
這裡有,這裡有,那裡也有~121Please respect copyright.PENANApY3pnWTBgj
就在你你我的時間裡!121Please respect copyright.PENANAT2QLidFb4s
生命,越拖越短,越拖越乏。121Please respect copyright.PENANAkFxBcPrPKy
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〈被怪物襲擊〉潛水中~121Please respect copyright.PENANAWFyXjdbALM
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