可惜文中太多「我」了,如果可以換寫法會更好。最後一句的處理比較好,不然就只是普通的夢境。對於怪物沒有比較深入描繪,所以感覺不恐怖。繼續加油吧,希望潛水中~生活順利。111Please respect copyright.PENANApFWAvVr2dE
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以怪物為主題:111Please respect copyright.PENANA5GgVw9jAf0
創挑還沒有結果啊!111Please respect copyright.PENANA2TLLB5LeLJ
有了嗎?111Please respect copyright.PENANA2z2iGOdwsw
還沒啊……111Please respect copyright.PENANAT9WCH3DiHJ
怎麼還沒呢?111Please respect copyright.PENANAJv3CnXRp2o
怎麼呢……111Please respect copyright.PENANAfWocL3sVtQ
拖延就是一只看不見卻處處有的怪獸,111Please respect copyright.PENANAZSCffggvm4
我們的生命,越拖越短,越拖越乏。111Please respect copyright.PENANAl3CeBaQvZT
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我想在其他平台發,我嘗試不要用創挑。111Please respect copyright.PENANACwROKAXwAu
今天會把報告交上來吧?111Please respect copyright.PENANALpMG4pq7mW
我聽說下個星期才是截止日期~111Please respect copyright.PENANAiMifKxcxse
啊!有怪獸!111Please respect copyright.PENANAvXcsTdbJc7
哪裡?那裡?111Please respect copyright.PENANAEepyoEuokj
這裡有,這裡有,那裡也有~111Please respect copyright.PENANA1GlVoRwBGd
就在你你我的時間裡!111Please respect copyright.PENANAAh5GLwC7ht
生命,越拖越短,越拖越乏。111Please respect copyright.PENANAuKF3dZbYI8
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〈被怪物襲擊〉潛水中~111Please respect copyright.PENANA3l9gikVmxV
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