可惜文中太多「我」了,如果可以換寫法會更好。最後一句的處理比較好,不然就只是普通的夢境。對於怪物沒有比較深入描繪,所以感覺不恐怖。繼續加油吧,希望潛水中~生活順利。112Please respect copyright.PENANAN3AJvNiKlq
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以怪物為主題:112Please respect copyright.PENANAMYTwiCTo1n
創挑還沒有結果啊!112Please respect copyright.PENANAZpZNGbkMFR
有了嗎?112Please respect copyright.PENANAu7Jx1liHFV
還沒啊……112Please respect copyright.PENANAza29rfzBou
怎麼還沒呢?112Please respect copyright.PENANAbsmlJR199K
怎麼呢……112Please respect copyright.PENANAugkPzss0GG
拖延就是一只看不見卻處處有的怪獸,112Please respect copyright.PENANAebAuNSzl3q
我們的生命,越拖越短,越拖越乏。112Please respect copyright.PENANAXYqwZBXpT8
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我想在其他平台發,我嘗試不要用創挑。112Please respect copyright.PENANAWZcllhW2eP
今天會把報告交上來吧?112Please respect copyright.PENANAV4SaZFpCQr
我聽說下個星期才是截止日期~112Please respect copyright.PENANAkOf3yhINqk
啊!有怪獸!112Please respect copyright.PENANAuk5Zxvapkt
哪裡?那裡?112Please respect copyright.PENANAVuJQH757z1
這裡有,這裡有,那裡也有~112Please respect copyright.PENANAw07sb3qo1T
就在你你我的時間裡!112Please respect copyright.PENANAf4W3WzgldO
生命,越拖越短,越拖越乏。112Please respect copyright.PENANAyv5UP5faey
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〈被怪物襲擊〉潛水中~112Please respect copyright.PENANAEUYex3Vgoj
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