感謝各位的投稿!413Please respect copyright.PENANAjC2R7SzKaU
看了八篇不同風格的故事!真讓人開心!413Please respect copyright.PENANASMaYy0jizu
先恭喜得獎的故事,夢墨為得獎篇章此附上短短的心得~413Please respect copyright.PENANAxvOV7s4Cp0
心得就只是夢墨個人的感受及想法413Please respect copyright.PENANA1Oh3Oe8GOK
並沒有說寫得不好或是特優,純粹夢墨喜不喜歡而已
另外人氣獎以「喜歡數量」多的故事獲得!413Please respect copyright.PENANAuK3nkSoq2A
就那麼剛好的,第一名也同為人氣獎得主!413Please respect copyright.PENANAXaHAAY1xLg
再次恭喜《Cứu, cứu cháu với》
第一名:《Cứu, cứu cháu với》413Please respect copyright.PENANAKKm03MdrVQ
(兼人氣獎得主)413Please respect copyright.PENANANtqYQ6ZqRw
以日常作為開頭偷玩電腦、尋找訊號XD413Please respect copyright.PENANAhRDd45jEcr
這讓也偷玩過電腦的我非常有共鳴W413Please respect copyright.PENANA8CfP9g5FMA
除了開頭很逗之外,還有就是突然出現的神祕亂碼+恐怖畫面!413Please respect copyright.PENANAypJU2POzZ8
其實到這裡我還沒什麼感覺,只認為「唉唷!有點看頭!」413Please respect copyright.PENANAgfELpOcK4e
結果後續結尾意外二連發!413Please respect copyright.PENANAHvKgP3ad9B
不管事移工慘劇還是Cứu, cứu cháu với的原意413Please respect copyright.PENANAvsbekO2qF6
這在整天看完之後,都讓我有種心有餘悸的感覺413Please respect copyright.PENANAHKnUM3IeIj
用字簡單明白,劇情樸實無華,卻令人覺得真有其事413Please respect copyright.PENANAuBjvIkrhsG
恭喜我說你聽撰寫《Cứu, cứu cháu với》獲得第一名及人氣獎
第二名:《廊道》413Please respect copyright.PENANAnIzrRT3YTQ
雖然看到第二段就猜到大概結尾XD413Please respect copyright.PENANAPpqXevKIkt
不過這種「小丑竟是我自己」的業力引爆故事很不錯413Please respect copyright.PENANAzQz8tsrbYr
敘述上也很像在看短片美劇那樣413Please respect copyright.PENANA7xTsWKjQVu
獵奇程度我還挺喜歡的,特別是肚子裡的蟲蟲XD413Please respect copyright.PENANA1Pz4NgiDts
劇情上有懸疑但都被我猜到後續發展所以有點ODO唉呀~413Please respect copyright.PENANAbrXvvkINyi
就是沒有被驚艷到,但又喜歡傑森的夢與屍體(?413Please respect copyright.PENANAmavbGtSwFA
整題來說是很不錯的驚悚短文413Please respect copyright.PENANAq8xM0TwMQP
恭喜不轉的《廊道》獲得第二名
第三名:413Please respect copyright.PENANAfvo4v95mdz
這個名次是最難抉擇的413Please respect copyright.PENANA4Azklyw9Ld
因為我第三喜歡的文章,都是「好可惜」的狀態413Please respect copyright.PENANA00Pg83RpSu
既然是曾經競爭的三篇,就也來說一下三篇較勁的短評吧413Please respect copyright.PENANA2ykY1MrBLZ
以發佈順序點評:413Please respect copyright.PENANAx1kP1H4TuI
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》413Please respect copyright.PENANA1c0bFeIxEb
超值爽直快,一筆暢通到底413Please respect copyright.PENANAfv86Bzubnf
渣男現身設計嚇人、渣男劈腿真相大白、鬼來了殺渣男>END413Please respect copyright.PENANA2LCkXOdnbI
沒有任何曲折離奇,鬼說來就來,說殺就殺413Please respect copyright.PENANACwopANd4GE
WOW!明明有點陰謀詭計卻不需要動腦直接獲得答案413Please respect copyright.PENANAgtQ6N55jFB
這也是很微妙的一篇故事w413Please respect copyright.PENANACWK3t5bgIP
但好可惜的部分,就是我沒有沒感覺到恐怖413Please respect copyright.PENANAzwvCe9Tjck
跟第二名同樣,劇情上沒有被驚艷到413Please respect copyright.PENANA55JlEvYlSU
不過渣男便肉渣也挺舒爽的w
《乖乖文化》413Please respect copyright.PENANAV8wJjzjJuH
好可惜!這篇真的要大喊好可惜!413Please respect copyright.PENANAIId7M67Yvb
首先引用台灣奇怪的乖乖文化我覺得很有看點413Please respect copyright.PENANAYBCYgKN54d
對呀,我也覺得乖乖文化很奇妙XD413Please respect copyright.PENANAHg7ncTV5D2
(老實說我原本不知道有這個文化,後來看某部電影才補充到這個冷知識)413Please respect copyright.PENANAuw84Kqd5mP
唉呀,故事裡那個乖乖吊飾笑得我心裡發寒413Please respect copyright.PENANAbcI9BRlY56
我也想來瓶麥香紅茶壓壓驚413Please respect copyright.PENANAqoDbVbQqmC
結尾真的很可惜,因為沒有首尾呼應導致恐怖點直接消失413Please respect copyright.PENANAsazTczkwyc
感覺小儀真的就只是做了惡夢,其他都只是想太多了413Please respect copyright.PENANAs3iVB2JViY
結尾建議多一點點暗示,增加故事的慣連性413Please respect copyright.PENANAj9lGDN1sj0
例如:413Please respect copyright.PENANAq5tr85x6fh
小儀醒來鬆了一口氣,原來是在做夢413Please respect copyright.PENANAksADz6xz8f
>放學忘記去放乖乖413Please respect copyright.PENANAwjVJXz2Doo
>回家打開冷氣時,乖乖吊飾卡在冷氣孔嘿嘿笑著(喂413Please respect copyright.PENANAYftFQqdHpn
好啦、浮誇了,就只是希望結尾完整一些413Please respect copyright.PENANAcZqavvGTXd
總結來說題材有趣、文章順暢但缺乏慣連性413Please respect copyright.PENANAY8kHo3g6Le
有種將要發寒卻嘎然而止,實為可惜
《玉妃引》413Please respect copyright.PENANAaYYSdK57Dq
宛如聊齋的古風故事413Please respect copyright.PENANA2yhRLNmVrZ
以架空東晉時期桓伊的梅花引撰寫精怪戀情(?413Please respect copyright.PENANABJUT9gpfWJ
不恐怖但很有趣,就像我前面說的宛如聊齋413Please respect copyright.PENANAakxYFAOEvq
不過這架空似乎出現了玄幻的設定(好微妙)413Please respect copyright.PENANAc7Z87JMKVn
雖然排版壅擠,但內容可以說是很漂亮?413Please respect copyright.PENANAbYxIfXqj4v
對,有氣氛、有畫面,就像在鬧街看見說書人坐在凳子上講民間故事
可、要說恐怖程度413Please respect copyright.PENANAn9Q8LODgjk
乖乖笑得你心裡發寒贏了XDDD413Please respect copyright.PENANARbOnwE0Ox8
以中段度來說乖乖贏了,但以整體完成度玉妃引更勝一籌413Please respect copyright.PENANAuBeQk1MMTs
畢竟乖乖文化,會讓我產生期待,然而他卻讓我跌倒了413Please respect copyright.PENANA5rRltfmikF
玉妃引穩紮穩打,也許沒有錯愕驚奇,但他有離奇軼聞413Please respect copyright.PENANAebMgFXKTqj
新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件介於兩者之間413Please respect copyright.PENANAGB1Jn8psUG
這篇有屬於自己的狗血風格,彷彿看到了某色水玲瓏
歷經幾小時的掙扎(對,都凌晨了我還在思考難以入眠413Please respect copyright.PENANAF8ZjyqlUM4
我還是決定把第三名頒給乖乖413Please respect copyright.PENANAQojqzRhrXx
畢竟能用短短五百字以內就引起我的期待,一秒過後讓我跌倒413Please respect copyright.PENANAmPcNOCvyCS
這也算有點厲害的鬼故事啊(初次閱讀衝擊性來說413Please respect copyright.PENANASqsdr9HUbY
恭喜夏夜的風《乖乖文化》獲得第三名
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》和《玉妃引》413Please respect copyright.PENANAWoDr3w8BvJ
個別獲得夢墨特別獎50金幣打賞
其餘未獲獎的文章也能獲得10金幣打賞413Please respect copyright.PENANAt2MAqRa2Ha
再次感謝各位的參與!下次有機會開創挑的話!歡迎再來玩!