作者妳好813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSKBYOvfo02
受到妳的邀请813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtUIisCnmyV
稍微看了下这本佩姬813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4ZHNS33U96
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡE3qln6RBGa
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyAvz0SzAdw
现世一堆东西813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ285QNhBmrR
其实就很简单一个道理813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHZDb9gDs2D
主角想要被爱813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDF3n1bPgs9
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡay0DCpgzjZ
男主卢克爱813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡu20gaHgdxg
主角就爱回去813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4TzvberH2F
女主伊莎爱813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZFxvnDzvTc
主角就爱回去813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHmHlZioZDM
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYkQNynPO78
想要被爱是佩姬的主题813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡicQC4B2Q0E
主角性别不是问题813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQ1g5PDo7Uk
内心冲突不是问题813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXtBgYY364q
主角被爱就迎刃而解813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡURgUz1B13k
看不懂这点整部书就看不了813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3YQmsZ6QgX
妳的书乏人问津是这道理813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfhEdsOaK0j
作者妳说主角口是心非813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtbDOs6KkWy
欸我说这不对813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhO9q3yd5rT
这明摆着口非心也非813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkbn8NeaHxO
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZ7Mub7VLRW
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡl0BCgMVqSt
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5Yoj0n3VzS
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxDeF8ZIUV6
为了被爱813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAVvbRcyk9i
连原本的性别都不要了813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3I9vilONVL
这主角疯的傻的813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0B6RMbww44
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡm3eb1LOoV6
女主伊莎813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYSqRAdK6Hw
单纯的色鬼813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfA6O12HEwT
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKELj6DY2iZ
黑化可能
艾德兰813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRYsgBeRmF8
可怜虫阿813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTToLYwX5uL
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVXl9LRt0Ft
妳说解释不够813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡv3VcYlvqsK
我到觉得清楚813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡI7nCtgIG7X
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMI6Q81qfiv
他为啥强813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwcajrjRlDr
妳啥都没讲813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZYx9fO8Ycg
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYKA6KoLrYo
也是除主角外最明白的角色813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnu8Z2hxjBG
她就拿来爱主角的813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNtzhpv4jtm
功能性角色
还有其他许多813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPsiVWWpl8V
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6FWg2ZPMm6
可以瞧见妳的苦心813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFuX0PC8JGg
我觉得这没必要813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCkqajxIHye
好的台词提一次够了813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJvWf03uOQN
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXeqYQXGNoB
我倒嫌设定囉嗦813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIkP6tjYC2i
空白很重要813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvmium2yfYK
没明白有没明白的好处813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8TcfC1ypzz
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHnpAUv43j4
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSsoEndicVy
我还会继续看的813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0rcimh0VMs
确实好看813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfR4qc0miG2
希望你这能写完813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡozHXU91AkF
能放上起点不813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMJyKGwucQ4
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡah8NTqIWrC
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡo5zw2z6KZ8
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6RIHjuROex
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhtt3yFYVbP
感謝你的評文813Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5xNYzOuulF
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