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稍微看了下这本佩姬717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNPZCbKSTjp
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBtgzaNJ9qo
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡplf5YmGNWq
现世一堆东西717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXDs0inFHLR
其实就很简单一个道理717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDRuFcxIAiJ
主角想要被爱717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlJngqTS7KE
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzBlLnmKCdA
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女主伊莎爱717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCo2Mm8TArM
主角就爱回去717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUt2AjGJrDc
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoZigAIIV16
想要被爱是佩姬的主题717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMxb4KeTyDs
主角性别不是问题717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBacJ1W14To
内心冲突不是问题717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1aSIaNzqc4
主角被爱就迎刃而解717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZ5oTVa1uud
看不懂这点整部书就看不了717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡc88Gm5CDFP
妳的书乏人问津是这道理717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFcq8dM6zfB
作者妳说主角口是心非717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXRIZHPmAi5
欸我说这不对717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpILvAcaML9
这明摆着口非心也非717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ95anlG27v9
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUDJz3mnMzD
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡX7wDNzKkj7
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlySrrcS42B
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZQg0fP72tI
为了被爱717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡegodVjuL1K
连原本的性别都不要了717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZDrXS3wppN
这主角疯的傻的717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqOdqHd456g
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZa9ht57fn7
女主伊莎717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwwd2ZonWqc
单纯的色鬼717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4OYDC5LOE8
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvuz9VPoauF
黑化可能
艾德兰717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrDUcx22GRM
可怜虫阿717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzOUVUtKTUf
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWPpTpKgn4b
妳说解释不够717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡO7tMDLx1Jz
我到觉得清楚717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIBy5G68rbJ
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpER3w2reGe
他为啥强717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5xpnBNxEl5
妳啥都没讲717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡR5MITDO0Do
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2GlSHzK493
也是除主角外最明白的角色717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtL8F3jNx8E
她就拿来爱主角的717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVtonqTv3Wo
功能性角色
还有其他许多717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡs6G0MHZqxB
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmAQv2bcBPF
可以瞧见妳的苦心717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4IceoChW1Z
我觉得这没必要717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrT2af7Poiv
好的台词提一次够了717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaTdYexNjhP
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpdzcfnZSpL
我倒嫌设定囉嗦717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxFtC6lRf5X
空白很重要717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1OEhew4AuY
没明白有没明白的好处717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡr7jsPCSHTK
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsjwAYByilI
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwdiAxkPltB
我还会继续看的717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEHOZRebvUY
确实好看717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkA4D8mzNaL
希望你这能写完717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSLipX8hZYr
能放上起点不717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡySh9CXMfyf
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡddgczOqeqr
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBj3osZCsVT
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHmcpVa1W7R
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPU1gb6oqXp
感謝你的評文717Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjkLi5PDCfx
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