作者妳好772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTfEd9yLFck
受到妳的邀请772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeMIkZluokn
稍微看了下这本佩姬772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaUhroCAVP6
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtcQMqpCIvL
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡihwOAXfLl4
现世一堆东西772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNhhek8oHTB
其实就很简单一个道理772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsvo8YOsg4z
主角想要被爱772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1xwYHHc7ll
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnSqx7dbtWD
男主卢克爱772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXxcLpps5i1
主角就爱回去772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWXOIvcmnff
女主伊莎爱772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmhgJhgVXN8
主角就爱回去772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAfP5aKHC6K
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXoOdAYBtKX
想要被爱是佩姬的主题772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ80CeZWHS2j
主角性别不是问题772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRcEO08ttlq
内心冲突不是问题772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtiUARFpCkp
主角被爱就迎刃而解772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJJ3qM1aHyU
看不懂这点整部书就看不了772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡi8ufIJHRXJ
妳的书乏人问津是这道理772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKHWDtBtXeE
作者妳说主角口是心非772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsggbDVpybC
欸我说这不对772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPNd6a5MNga
这明摆着口非心也非772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUE7JnoMOo7
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWW4lYqrdtw
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnK6KeYxOlE
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlSXpJTKHc8
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyOhS78QmWw
为了被爱772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7V2QBjFnol
连原本的性别都不要了772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgaXbQtrUEJ
这主角疯的傻的772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9TwmJg7lZE
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLLbEFCbNaO
女主伊莎772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡR0dOhCIKPQ
单纯的色鬼772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdkGRBAg0Zh
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRGOZr8oBvW
黑化可能
艾德兰772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡM1T6rcdKQp
可怜虫阿772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSmarwYteGH
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtN9LIhrbsG
妳说解释不够772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡP2s4z0TZ45
我到觉得清楚772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpqlS2j5O0N
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡn8xsINOEuo
他为啥强772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVHljS9FJMj
妳啥都没讲772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzq62g7sPjO
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuZ0WxsmyO6
也是除主角外最明白的角色772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEHZIdbxG6x
她就拿来爱主角的772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFC8be8A0jm
功能性角色
还有其他许多772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEMTl1Pn61V
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNtRFKFQsHX
可以瞧见妳的苦心772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡV7kOXjNOy1
我觉得这没必要772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZMe8tKbGXb
好的台词提一次够了772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkKs9D9yYHq
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxIUxt0Ebr0
我倒嫌设定囉嗦772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjeAyzfPgCd
空白很重要772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9KsGWWRCVj
没明白有没明白的好处772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAp81EeytCC
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhCndpU7VmJ
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡE0LgFS4nDO
我还会继续看的772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGm5OK6PhYa
确实好看772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7GToOu7SVS
希望你这能写完772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcb0oamiYeE
能放上起点不772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXJtvAM9UKy
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzVWQVpJKW6
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPuRfXeb5bA
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEV9nSboyhd
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡE7eo9PHcki
感謝你的評文772Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ45op1PUjTf
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