作者妳好723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSc5UgLzG2f
受到妳的邀请723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrAyEGt6byf
稍微看了下这本佩姬723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡborDI5by0k
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnEbyFCze25
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdmkLx1tkRm
现世一堆东西723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0sTyjeHJJX
其实就很简单一个道理723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAPWSd45oXo
主角想要被爱723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyoRLTawz6Q
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡErR4406h3f
男主卢克爱723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡybZQj9VWd4
主角就爱回去723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSbiqgP1lYn
女主伊莎爱723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRmTQrebeft
主角就爱回去723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4fjkuOaWIg
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOPP178d31i
想要被爱是佩姬的主题723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzVJm9hjMPg
主角性别不是问题723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxptstkFPGF
内心冲突不是问题723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡF5npCb6SJO
主角被爱就迎刃而解723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPbWI0TN7Vo
看不懂这点整部书就看不了723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWm8krLgmHH
妳的书乏人问津是这道理723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfVsSgXglFs
作者妳说主角口是心非723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHR22URiRwr
欸我说这不对723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRPhDRgmFOR
这明摆着口非心也非723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAB4mznMFbx
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHpz883B45W
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtiur71Q4Co
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5X3lWaGvl7
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡf3d9JBGULv
为了被爱723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYlwdO30tZT
连原本的性别都不要了723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡd9MQyAJFO8
这主角疯的傻的723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAmxmhYCN2g
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7Qfu2NOW0q
女主伊莎723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡK2C1G3rLpv
单纯的色鬼723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwwHQKBZFEj
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjqV0yWt93S
黑化可能
艾德兰723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWWy7MjMtum
可怜虫阿723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡV2uBjb345u
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDoudAop9mJ
妳说解释不够723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwatOudsTUJ
我到觉得清楚723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLiuMsjcrlV
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIcC8OVBAgU
他为啥强723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡl4sFcO8Lal
妳啥都没讲723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0gWm2Ia759
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFmhFiUAcyn
也是除主角外最明白的角色723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4y3mFt4HP2
她就拿来爱主角的723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9DwmDv5YFT
功能性角色
还有其他许多723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡotdmUxWCxw
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhtPojElQsT
可以瞧见妳的苦心723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjvqP8amYcW
我觉得这没必要723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqX9XLRV43b
好的台词提一次够了723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBoe9h8RuxX
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7bXKfSKA4f
我倒嫌设定囉嗦723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqp3HduUCq4
空白很重要723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQFkX9KzA7X
没明白有没明白的好处723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLhUSDKgdLQ
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2M00mh9O6f
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtYftAYx32z
我还会继续看的723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRCJ5SFZQZv
确实好看723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqlTV3VNTqw
希望你这能写完723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNYQbchjplz
能放上起点不723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOvhD5YsdtK
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLLKLbCxvOh
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNxsVbbVcqE
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ537s6xba88
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeJBpZmmHFr
感謝你的評文723Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCSq5mTTKoV
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