作者妳好814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlCXIXlE2um
受到妳的邀请814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9flaqCCa26
稍微看了下这本佩姬814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpRxn8CzfXc
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjc4ovwa34p
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡB3U6BzKm3C
现世一堆东西814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXf8f5Xvk7k
其实就很简单一个道理814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSJ5eUPcHVd
主角想要被爱814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTIsLOXknGs
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡk1UsATrmjt
男主卢克爱814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ047g9fC2iV
主角就爱回去814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡky9xDF4q5J
女主伊莎爱814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbJ8nN15oHj
主角就爱回去814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDkoWlhnclf
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0ALHZ3ch4e
想要被爱是佩姬的主题814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSFDtDDiKXn
主角性别不是问题814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsE4im1UkKt
内心冲突不是问题814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOmetjJ4kBA
主角被爱就迎刃而解814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFvC2phm2Wx
看不懂这点整部书就看不了814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6L4BcjAS6n
妳的书乏人问津是这道理814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMR7ExfL81f
作者妳说主角口是心非814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCnL6jJilAY
欸我说这不对814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrFB14P4aIo
这明摆着口非心也非814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxXmkGU5rPr
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsLdAmqVq15
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡG7D8P845ao
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSDu9mfiF5U
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡz6KWSdFuIf
为了被爱814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡreRxafNmTC
连原本的性别都不要了814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLj3rRzfipq
这主角疯的傻的814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkl7xh3hP6g
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡexBfVROwgv
女主伊莎814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5RmMRGP6qj
单纯的色鬼814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJ4JuqZM1YV
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2LtHLHUiNc
黑化可能
艾德兰814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVkZ322DRE5
可怜虫阿814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡziYrCql043
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ08VEBIpTXK
妳说解释不够814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5j3GYgrIwn
我到觉得清楚814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ17whj9S4Ra
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1iNgZUvFEK
他为啥强814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaVprL5Ziiu
妳啥都没讲814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6EsKRSdYjo
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAmCINxMpBX
也是除主角外最明白的角色814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOiLb6gZdRO
她就拿来爱主角的814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgI50fDrSnw
功能性角色
还有其他许多814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfsPkioHPd0
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsjkC9bDWFB
可以瞧见妳的苦心814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpPTa1sjajx
我觉得这没必要814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzFvcSuz2kr
好的台词提一次够了814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLnshWROVq7
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡB6QyDFZ43n
我倒嫌设定囉嗦814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmYNBHiNz5R
空白很重要814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡX5M4DTjimH
没明白有没明白的好处814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXD5Wqxo5uk
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgq7r419kmN
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKYvVsM2rzj
我还会继续看的814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7YNlcfTQN4
确实好看814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgSGGeaTaho
希望你这能写完814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuKb0rD3pO5
能放上起点不814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡowVOQDrzkx
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGVaFMrTvum
作者回應：814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjAzzq7QRBc
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlMpI9XeAez
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHzVfrdbBFN
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJ1kmZBLivL
感謝你的評文814Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEQq8iigbEg
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