As I Sit Here... - My 'Ten Minute' Contest Entry | Penana

Login

Register

Please use Chrome or Firefox for better user experience!

Comments

Show more...

4

0

Prev

Next

Style

Expand

Menu

coins

Sponsor

Request update

Share

Report

#1

My 'Ten Minute' Contest Entry

_curlyyy.vvibez_

May 25, 2016

1124

1 Min Read

As I lay here right now,

I see stars above.

I see stars that have an everlasting flame,

A flame that could make or break me with one look.

As I lay here I see her face in the night sky.

I hear her sweet voice whispering to me,

"I love you dear, worry no longer, you will see me soon."

And in that moment I know she is here.

I know she remembers me and no longer wants me in pain.

As I lay here starring into the night sky and listening to her voice

I feel a sense of peace for the first time since she left me here,

in this God forsaken town all alone.

I feel love in her presence.

I feel safe when I hear her soft, loving voice.

As I lay here thinking of her I feel something I've never known.

A love that is to strong to part with, a love that is everlasting.

Like the stars I see above.

My love for her is a star in the night sky,

a flame unable to be extinguished,

a strength,

a weakness,

and the most unbearable pain,

is parting with such love.

ns216.73.216.247da2

0

coins

4 likes Suggest Edits

_curlyyy.vvibez_

You have reached the end of the story.

Tags

No tags yet.

Have a friend who might like this story?

Click to share it now!

You may also like:

The Devils Trampling Grounds

_curlyyy.vvibez_

The New Jepthah

_curlyyy.vvibez_

I Believed You.

_curlyyy.vvibez_

The Things I Carry

_curlyyy.vvibez_

Vincent J. Gajewski III

Rhythms of My School Life

Explore more stories

As I Sit Here...

Bookmark!

Request update 0

Table of Contents

#1 My 'Ten Minute' Contest Entry