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發症Sim窿：毛可兒死亡事件

Spaghetti Even Spaghetti Even
May 2, 2020 524 4 Mins Read
No Plagiarism!kocmYmG5mfMFfLYJp92Hposted on PＥNAＮＡ

人物: 探員Even(FIB)     [Even]

          探員Calvin(FIB)   [Calvin]

          現場搜證人員       [Steven]

          毛可兒(死者)        [Maclai] 

          毛辰臣(死者老豆) [Ryan]

          史潶璟(殺人黑警) [Jacky]

          旁白                      [Kiko]

Scene 1: 日蝕大道,夜晚

(毛可兒(泊車員服裝)從日蝕大樓墮下)

(救護車及警車趕到)

(探員Even和探員Calvin駕駛JB700到達案發現場)

!!NEW INTRO!!

Scene 2: 日蝕大道案發現場,夜晚

現場搜證人員: 死者叫做毛可兒，屍體已經送咗去殮房，現場冇其他可疑嘅物品

探員Calvin: (開心)咁即係無可疑啦，Close File!

現場搜證人員: (開心)好嘢，今晚玩Minecraft，收工!

探員Calvin: 跟住三日喺屋企玩Apex!

(探員Even和探員Calvin轉身)

探員Even: 你唔覺件事好可疑咩，呢一年單單Case都無可疑，我哋聽日去殮房驗屍

Scene 3: 殮房門口,中午 (Diamond Casino Heist Prep: Security Card)

(探員Calvin及探員Even身穿禮儀師套裝)

探員Even: (嘆氣)明明我哋係FIB，竟然要偽裝潛入去…

探員Calvin: (期待)快啲入去啦，早啲收工早啲玩CS

(探員Calvin及探員Even進入殮房)

(探員Even搵到毛可兒屍體)

(探員Even搜索毛可兒屍體)

探員Even: (細聲)Calvin我搵到啦，有張Sim卡喺佢個身到，走啦。

(探員Calvin及探員Even離開殮房)

探員Even: (疑惑)點解零零舍舍有張Sim卡喺佢度呢?

探員Calvin: (講笑)係咪佢老豆唔識，叫佢幫手入卡咋?

探員Even: 我又唔係佢老豆，點知啫?

探員Calvin: (輕鬆)你FIB嚟架嘛，去問下咪知囉!

Scene 4: 街機鋪

旁白：第二日

(毛辰臣打緊機)

(探員Even和探員Calvin進入機鋪)

探員Even: 我想問你係咪毛可兒嘅父親 毛辰臣 呀?

毛辰臣: 係又點唔係又點？唔好阻住我玩PUBG啦

探員Even: 我哋係FIB，依家要調查毛可兒案發當日去咗邊。

探員Calvin: (奸笑)你唔合作嘅話，以後你一玩我就Join你Game，第一個Team Kill你

毛辰臣: (驚慌)好好好我講我講

探員Calvin: (自滿)你係咪搵毛可兒幫你入Sim卡?

毛辰臣: 入Sim卡我叻過佢啦，使乜搵佢幫手。

探員Even: 咁你知唔知毛可兒案發當晚去咗邊度?

毛辰臣: (思考)佢同我講佢去咗朋友屋企…好似係嗰個咩…史潶璟

探員Calvin: 咁多個差佬，你講緊邊個 死(音：史)黑警呀?

毛辰臣: 你哋唔係FIB嚟咩，查吓咪知囉!

探員Even: 睇嚟今次我哋要殺入差館啦!

Scene 5: 警察局 (Diamond Casino Heist Prep: Escape Disguise: IAA Agent)

(探員Even和探員Calvin一人揸住一枝機關槍)

(二人進入警局亂槍掃射)

探員Even: 史潶璟你喺邊度!!!

探員Calvin: 史潶璟同我出嚟!!!

Scene 6: 警察局外

(探員Calvin呆站)

探員Even: 行啦Calvin，史潶璟喺差館出面啦

(探員Even和探員Calvin走近)

探員Even: 我想問吓你係咪史潶璟?

史潶璟: 係(咳咳)，請問有咩事呢?(咳咳)

探員Calvin: 我哋係FIB，依家調查緊，快啲攞部手機嚟Check吓

(註:除緊急情况外，必須先獲得搜查令才能查閱被捕者的電子器材)

(史潶璟交出手機) (探員Calvin研究手機)

探員Even: 咳到咁樣嘅你係咪有武漢肺炎...

探員Calvin: (插入)嘩你部手機無訊號嘅，連電話都打唔到喎

史潶璟: 係呀，我插極都插唔到Sim卡入去

探員Calvin: 梗係啦，你部手機都冇插Sim卡嗰個窿

探員Even: 你係咪搵過毛可兒入Sim卡?

史潶璟: (膽怯)我有搵過佢，但係…

探員Even: 因為佢幫唔到你入Sim卡，所以你就殺咗佢!

Scene 7:日蝕大樓天台,晚上 (回憶片段) (毛可兒身穿泊車員服裝)

史潶璟: (不滿)乜你搞咁耐都入唔到架(咳咳)，你老豆整電話好叻架喎

毛可兒: 你睇吓部手機先啦，都冇Sim窿，入乜鬼呀!

史潶璟: (不耐煩)有咩可能冇呀，呢部國產機(咳咳)我新買架，下面咪有個窿囉(咳咳)

毛可兒: 咳到咁樣嘅，你有肺炎呀?

史潶璟: 反正都死，你都一齊死啦!

(史潶璟推毛可兒落樓)

毛可兒: 啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊

Scene 8: 純文字

旁白: 經過探員Even同Calvin嘅努力調查，終於查出事件嘅真相，毛可兒嘅死亦被判為

         (停頓) (重音)無可疑!

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