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M. Williams
Dec 17, 2018 14:16602Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCY2HtfLfJG
I love horror and thriller stories, but the short story "The Christmas Incident" by Zak is a favourite. 602Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhhoM0M73xa
Firstly, I was honoured to be requested as the Beta Reader for this story and would like to thank Zak for giving me the chance.602Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡp5S7iHUzSY
Secondly, the story hooks you in straight away, and you immediately feel sorry for the family because of what's happening to their son. I also felt fear for the family when reading about their son.602Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVSIusk5lAA
He builds the suspense beautifully and makes you want to read the next part to check up on the family. Then BAM out of nowhere Zak has added in a twist that changes everything! It was crazy, but masterfully done!602Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡs2eLhEy6fC
It is well worth the read, so pop on over to his page and take a look! You won't be disappointed!602Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtomSEiCNfc
Well done, Zak!
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