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M. Williams
Dec 17, 2018 14:16672Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0RdAiBLi40
I love horror and thriller stories, but the short story "The Christmas Incident" by Zak is a favourite. 672Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBMhPXML7Wh
Firstly, I was honoured to be requested as the Beta Reader for this story and would like to thank Zak for giving me the chance.672Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4pveHWPCcv
Secondly, the story hooks you in straight away, and you immediately feel sorry for the family because of what's happening to their son. I also felt fear for the family when reading about their son.672Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡawvsaEfJ3J
He builds the suspense beautifully and makes you want to read the next part to check up on the family. Then BAM out of nowhere Zak has added in a twist that changes everything! It was crazy, but masterfully done!672Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnUipLxVHy9
It is well worth the read, so pop on over to his page and take a look! You won't be disappointed!672Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpburIkFcK6
Well done, Zak!
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