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縱看是李清照<<如夢令.昨夜雨疏風驟>>的四句主句:昨夜雨疏風驟,濃睡不消殘酒,卻道海棠依舊,應是綠肥紅瘦。631Please respect copyright.PENANAgxObCEhjqW
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*第二句:夜練銀河天淡:用典范仲淹<<御街行>>的:天淡銀河垂地631Please respect copyright.PENANAzr5kCloYxD
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感覺這次寫得不太好...還請見諒及多多指點XD631Please respect copyright.PENANAEiuape7uOX