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雖然題目是寫詩,但還是按平仄寫了首<<如夢令>>,也可當作是首新詩吧XD618Please respect copyright.PENANAf3mWtAjIAH
縱看是李清照<<如夢令.昨夜雨疏風驟>>的四句主句:昨夜雨疏風驟,濃睡不消殘酒,卻道海棠依舊,應是綠肥紅瘦。618Please respect copyright.PENANAEb1ku6Gh2Z
四首分別由夜、早、午、昏看花間園林境況618Please respect copyright.PENANARBSuC2TcGf
*第二句:夜練銀河天淡:用典范仲淹<<御街行>>的:天淡銀河垂地618Please respect copyright.PENANA925QB88G02
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感覺這次寫得不太好...還請見諒及多多指點XD618Please respect copyright.PENANAFmvwd59jrO