終完修正完第一章。改動的地方如下:
角色改名639Please respect copyright.PENANAp8Jol7YSUy
除了玄牛之外,所有畜牲集團的戰士都重新命名,因為那些陳生、李生、等等的命名,亂來之餘,又不符合作品性格。所以有以下改動:
何大力->南昌一絕639Please respect copyright.PENANAEfL6X0VomD
劉元山->海柏639Please respect copyright.PENANAEb7IxaNbHj
陳生->曉尚639Please respect copyright.PENANA7537mueiCR
李生->曉珀639Please respect copyright.PENANAolQZUJo6lK
嚴生->迎豐639Please respect copyright.PENANATynMBfnY7N
史生->富薈639Please respect copyright.PENANAaIWV3iTvbc
林生->傲形639Please respect copyright.PENANA3Y14S3InuW
黃生->利奧639Please respect copyright.PENANAL6MIjqm7cd
張生->曉岸
執文法639Please respect copyright.PENANAkjFWeq0LPT
也許是小弟進步了,現在回看第一章,文法竟是那麼糟糕,是以也大幅修正。639Please respect copyright.PENANAhTun2mIDZn