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No Plagiarism!nPTSZN92kjOSm1MXIERWposted on PＥNAＮＡ Chapter 1.03: September 20, 20158964 copyright protection1139ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7fep4qzMFX 維尼
"I've finished reading your manuscript."8964 copyright protection1139ＰＥＮＡＮＡiiobHyTGKu 維尼
"Really? Weren't you going to study for your geophysics test tomorrow?"8964 copyright protection1139ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4BvSB5zyj1 維尼
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"I agree with Susy. The writing style is too lighthearted for the actual story. You should darken the tone."8964 copyright protection1139ＰＥＮＡＮＡaU3CauZuv3 維尼
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"Also—I think her assassin friend's character is a tad underdeveloped. He has so much potential as a character."8964 copyright protection1139ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4hkhkrczQj 維尼
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