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No Plagiarism!riYInN0yjTt7zGLq6xdkposted on PＥNAＮＡ Chapter 1.03: September 20, 20158964 copyright protection1082ＰＥＮＡＮＡbUhbiOxTgs 維尼
"I've finished reading your manuscript."8964 copyright protection1082ＰＥＮＡＮＡK98rGCpmGi 維尼
"Really? Weren't you going to study for your geophysics test tomorrow?"8964 copyright protection1082ＰＥＮＡＮＡu1D51mu2VT 維尼
"I'll be fine."8964 copyright protection1082ＰＥＮＡＮＡDyfqSX5ITt 維尼
"If you say so."8964 copyright protection1082ＰＥＮＡＮＡuJ80bxfE19 維尼
"Don't you want to hear what I think of your story?"8964 copyright protection1082ＰＥＮＡＮＡHDHnF2nmrq 維尼
"By all means."8964 copyright protection1082ＰＥＮＡＮＡr1CD9cFWgK 維尼
"I agree with Susy. The writing style is too lighthearted for the actual story. You should darken the tone."8964 copyright protection1082ＰＥＮＡＮＡFkQ9V08iwC 維尼
"I'll do my best."8964 copyright protection1082ＰＥＮＡＮＡGuwfB4n2qi 維尼
"Also—I think her assassin friend's character is a tad underdeveloped. He has so much potential as a character."8964 copyright protection1082ＰＥＮＡＮＡrv79UJcuzV 維尼
"I'll look into that. Thanks, Eru."8964 copyright protection1082ＰＥＮＡＮＡNwOsKITwdA 維尼
"Anytime, Kenny. Now, if you'll excuse me, I have to study for that test tomorrow."8964 copyright protection1082ＰＥＮＡＮＡoTSBluoIwq 維尼
"I trusted you, and you lied to me."8964 copyright protection1082ＰＥＮＡＮＡCxnEcZHUzL 維尼
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