A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANAliEukDA5gF
謝謝你,不過我這篇沒名字欸—579Please respect copyright.PENANAA28DMXEyWb
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAah1MAkxwXl
你指標題?579Please respect copyright.PENANAvtsQOK028V
但有時訂標題也很困難~579Please respect copyright.PENANAIpWsgp0kqW
就像你這一段對話(給我看的故事)到底想向讀者表達什麼,很難用十個字以來形容得完。
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANAjcio8wfJ6A
嗯對啊,579Please respect copyright.PENANAeUpJjhFKAg
所以才困擾嘛。
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAtGEZ6v5MkA
那是因為,你寫的時候沒有先定主旨,579Please respect copyright.PENANAoUOgEGQDr6
所以沒有中心思想在。579Please respect copyright.PENANAYyMWBefbOh
我猜的對嗎?
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANA8KlcU4nnQE
嗯,我所有寫出來的都是臨時起意的。579Please respect copyright.PENANAwwYf9UaOHe
所以...有時候看以前的文,都還會想著:這真是我寫過的嗎?579Please respect copyright.PENANAaBYskjAmds
對了,我所有的文都無題。
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANABzWsGmpmEO
看來你真的很喜歡想這些小故事!579Please respect copyright.PENANAFlPD3AdeRD
如果是長篇故事,很難沒有主題和中心思想。
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANAOQ0WIoBfix
那是因為我很沒耐心,只能寫短的啊!
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAqJjVhD5ass
哈哈~真的嗎~XDD579Please respect copyright.PENANAe2OHShhM9e
我認為呢~ 只是因為這個故事你沒有材料寫不下去。579Please respect copyright.PENANA2hjxpVC5u0
所以下一次你會想到其他人發生其他的故事,579Please respect copyright.PENANAOXdEwBqMN6
而不是一直把這個故事接下去,寫成長篇。
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANA7ijiupq8tL
當然是真的啊~所以我之前的小說寫到後面全都是我朋友寫的。579Please respect copyright.PENANAcpykwkYtJs
說來有點不負責任,但我就是沒辦法好好寫完,因為往往都是在我還沒寫完一篇,另一篇的靈感就來了。579Please respect copyright.PENANA1bOpbKIpkJ
我才剛打完你就講了我要說的😂😂 狂
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANA8RWlQz4FI7
我指的「材料」,其實就是你「靈感」的原料。579Please respect copyright.PENANA73pns92gqi
沒有「靈感」,是因為你「材料」用完了。
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANALFoHtpNYtU
那材料沒了怎麼補充啊?
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAJ9EBDi5JNt
我先教你如何準備材料,好嗎?
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANAo7xSN4wLFZ
好啊。
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAmPADdj9n6a
如果寫作課給你一個題目:「強者和弱者」,三百字。579Please respect copyright.PENANAevH7XIUj1a
你會想到寫什麼故事?我們看看裡面有什麼材料在。579Please respect copyright.PENANAEBVAjltbyS
大致形容一下你想到的畫面就好。579Please respect copyright.PENANAl1kOLhLvSa
這個大致形容就是你的中心思想了。
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANApX7vN1mWDh
好的,579Please respect copyright.PENANATwOtMGBAmE
強者和弱者=弱肉強食的世界、579Please respect copyright.PENANAOppSdUybSB
有關言情的武俠小說吧。
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAZsedjJHEOP
『弱肉強食』是第一類材料,579Please respect copyright.PENANANYMtUBkerG
『武俠』和『言情』第二類材料。
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANAXggbPFWWD0
弱肉強食怎麼會是材料啊?
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAbYrDZfZMdV
讓我配上一些東西說明吧。579Please respect copyright.PENANAP79rc0p1BX
『英雄』『總裁』『乞丐』『軍人』是第三類材料579Please respect copyright.PENANALg3nxaIzuL
有了這些材料,可以組織出故事靈感。579Please respect copyright.PENANAJT04h5IRGv
比如:579Please respect copyright.PENANATv4UtWAb5I
『乞丐』是強者,而『總裁』是弱者。579Please respect copyright.PENANApDa34j0MYY
兩者之間發生了一個『弱肉被強食』的故事。而這是一個『言情』做主題。579Please respect copyright.PENANArzYeCdOhNT
總裁被乞丐吃了(攻受意味
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANAJSJoWrLbnB
還是不懂欸
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAPIiddGK1vd
嗯...我好像舉錯例了
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANAObzWEcPzhG
你的思維和他人不同啊…
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAQepOFBZ7RZ
『弱肉強食』描述兩個事物的互相關係579Please respect copyright.PENANAugh3ZCDHRp
一個強,一個弱,對吧?
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANAqUKaT8eiEy
嗯,對啊
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAWvMH0MSi2F
有了這個定義之後,憑空創作出來的人物就有『身份和關聯』,579Please respect copyright.PENANA79k9WiRims
他們在故事裡,一個強,一個弱,強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方。
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANA5lB3I73lK9
強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方的話,那弱的一方是在反抗的一方嗎?
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANA5On4UJRfVb
這個要再看其他材料能給你什麼想像了:579Please respect copyright.PENANAcATRhMqY6z
『老虎』和『兔子』做材料的話,弱者看起來不可能反抗。579Please respect copyright.PENANAZGJzDlb9S2
但如果在放『讓弱者打敗強者』的劇本裡,就會變出弱者反抗強者的情節來。
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANALGsNpDdxuU
哦~
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAKURlpZZyvu
然後我就從沒靈感,變成可能想像和寫出:579Please respect copyright.PENANAZiThNDe8CL
『一隻兔子用陷阱打敗了老虎』(配上智謀)579Please respect copyright.PENANAqizsFim5hs
『一百隻兔子聯合打敗了老虎』(配上團結)579Please respect copyright.PENANA9WUtL1t6bs
的故事
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANAGznGSLlUeo
好的、579Please respect copyright.PENANAWWoFZkJhfu
可是這故事好誇張啊,一百隻欸!
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAbRGVdMz13n
哈哈~誇張是能讓你記得的套路XD
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAlJhWfIg1lE
現在,我們回來看看你原來的故事有什麼材料?又少了什麼材料? 好嗎?
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANAeBNHROL4qi
我的故事有少什麼嗎?
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAyYAD2gb5Hj
不知道~ 但你有興趣聽聽我的分析嗎?
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANApJ5iBjVPWt
好,只要是能讓我變好的我都聽!
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAFKGvLVQrQk
你想不下去,是因為這個故事只有幾個材料:579Please respect copyright.PENANALaUpGdT2at
1.『爭執』579Please respect copyright.PENANA5ASohUl1Xa
2.『有錢人/富貴的人』579Please respect copyright.PENANANg5R8sXv9x
3.『分手的情人(主角)』579Please respect copyright.PENANABtIlpf9XJn
4.『狠心的姐姐(主角)』579Please respect copyright.PENANAgiRT2jnLFK
5.『不孝女(主角)』
其中3-5都是文章中的"我"她與各人的關係
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANALfhR8BQq4Z
嗯,對,可是這又說明了什麼嗎?
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAAZc1G2eqDy
當主角"我"的『爭執』一完了,整個故事也就沒有其他料能用,所以發展不下去了。
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANADmZBSqMVXh
那如果加入復仇呢579Please respect copyright.PENANAAfsymGaCSy
搶她大姐的未婚夫579Please respect copyright.PENANAHASwZyEzBY
怎麼樣?
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAw2cL65Ndga
沒錯~要寫下去就要更多的材料。那下一章《復仇》就是你想要的標題了579Please respect copyright.PENANAA2CJWWyBzg
這一章叫《爭執》、下一章叫《復仇》……579Please respect copyright.PENANA6beXH5zbgC
故事主軸可能就是『夏家因怨』。
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANAQ1KiiVdyyR
好的,了解啦
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANAn8vnvDmtKo
嗯...那男主要誰?
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAMmVsYMqKIa
不一定要有吧~?579Please respect copyright.PENANAYGW2lSdYXS
兩個女主角又如何?
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANAh2DeuvytNx
可是我只寫過言情小說啊…
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAtFE5t8lbFr
比如579Please respect copyright.PENANAisMdfasMLa
1."我(筑楓)"對夏家『復仇』579Please respect copyright.PENANALH4EGSq4pw
2.雨星又對"我"『復仇』
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAreCNc0hdJw
呵呵~沒關係~材料齊集靈感到了,你就知道該怎樣寫了!579Please respect copyright.PENANADQgtr18Zad
(要創作男主角,也是一樣用『材料』。)XD579Please respect copyright.PENANA6KZIY4Pu10
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAsAv1eSw64j
只要你學懂解析自己文章裡有什麼材料,要從無沒靈感變有靈感會容易得多。 579Please respect copyright.PENANANjw5bODuTh
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANAq0wNn3ukDX
你好厲害啊!579Please respect copyright.PENANA8UM1McH7QK
(重新把故事編排)579Please respect copyright.PENANA47mOao7quu
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANA02UCVSzER1
你真的做很好了~剩下的請再找其他人幫你啦~579Please respect copyright.PENANAJH95aIVkcX