A君:517Please respect copyright.PENANAKvMbgEl6O1
謝謝你,不過我這篇沒名字欸—517Please respect copyright.PENANACuNxxuPI7A
龍晨P:517Please respect copyright.PENANAyaz35fmkGk
你指標題?517Please respect copyright.PENANAbYU5IT10va
但有時訂標題也很困難~517Please respect copyright.PENANAdHLGA6dLHT
就像你這一段對話(給我看的故事)到底想向讀者表達什麼,很難用十個字以來形容得完。
A君:517Please respect copyright.PENANA7qJFtYjIOe
嗯對啊,517Please respect copyright.PENANAS1sexzzuAq
所以才困擾嘛。
龍晨P:517Please respect copyright.PENANATUW3gg0mNV
那是因為,你寫的時候沒有先定主旨,517Please respect copyright.PENANAquWplBzXWU
所以沒有中心思想在。517Please respect copyright.PENANAJBDW6fA9v1
我猜的對嗎?
A君:517Please respect copyright.PENANAXwjH624Gn1
嗯,我所有寫出來的都是臨時起意的。517Please respect copyright.PENANAhlx9Zmdu4T
所以...有時候看以前的文,都還會想著:這真是我寫過的嗎?517Please respect copyright.PENANAnZ4o4itUC6
對了,我所有的文都無題。
龍晨P:517Please respect copyright.PENANAcZcJa2a7N9
看來你真的很喜歡想這些小故事!517Please respect copyright.PENANALGNJwLLa2v
如果是長篇故事,很難沒有主題和中心思想。
A君:517Please respect copyright.PENANAopp0QHy2NR
那是因為我很沒耐心,只能寫短的啊!
龍晨P:517Please respect copyright.PENANAVPV8w7Ogwr
哈哈~真的嗎~XDD517Please respect copyright.PENANAOl9twoMWaV
我認為呢~ 只是因為這個故事你沒有材料寫不下去。517Please respect copyright.PENANAyDM2P0Jf8H
所以下一次你會想到其他人發生其他的故事,517Please respect copyright.PENANAchSUgoUVtg
而不是一直把這個故事接下去,寫成長篇。
A君:517Please respect copyright.PENANA1xlYgKIEWg
當然是真的啊~所以我之前的小說寫到後面全都是我朋友寫的。517Please respect copyright.PENANApPqqblLsta
說來有點不負責任,但我就是沒辦法好好寫完,因為往往都是在我還沒寫完一篇,另一篇的靈感就來了。517Please respect copyright.PENANAkkjzfiLeea
我才剛打完你就講了我要說的😂😂 狂
龍晨P:517Please respect copyright.PENANAdKMGSkYhw6
我指的「材料」,其實就是你「靈感」的原料。517Please respect copyright.PENANABan2xwTYGI
沒有「靈感」,是因為你「材料」用完了。
A君:517Please respect copyright.PENANAd4CRg3qe8e
那材料沒了怎麼補充啊?
龍晨P:517Please respect copyright.PENANAD0r5Zbimms
我先教你如何準備材料,好嗎?
A君:517Please respect copyright.PENANAdKuLNQ2KjS
好啊。
龍晨P:517Please respect copyright.PENANAEzi6pc4ze9
如果寫作課給你一個題目:「強者和弱者」,三百字。517Please respect copyright.PENANAgx9HaTVh8X
你會想到寫什麼故事?我們看看裡面有什麼材料在。517Please respect copyright.PENANAitbhXo35IA
大致形容一下你想到的畫面就好。517Please respect copyright.PENANA1CvRejXuHt
這個大致形容就是你的中心思想了。
A君:517Please respect copyright.PENANADglydPWqSz
好的,517Please respect copyright.PENANAcO2ixSfVoW
強者和弱者=弱肉強食的世界、517Please respect copyright.PENANAk2VPoC6SZE
有關言情的武俠小說吧。
龍晨P:517Please respect copyright.PENANA3dTGeiM7dy
『弱肉強食』是第一類材料,517Please respect copyright.PENANA0QUwE6Auys
『武俠』和『言情』第二類材料。
A君:517Please respect copyright.PENANAo2gCNMQzzw
弱肉強食怎麼會是材料啊?
龍晨P:517Please respect copyright.PENANAz8Ekh2pURD
讓我配上一些東西說明吧。517Please respect copyright.PENANAzgeLDzEToS
『英雄』『總裁』『乞丐』『軍人』是第三類材料517Please respect copyright.PENANA94aC1heWFd
有了這些材料,可以組織出故事靈感。517Please respect copyright.PENANAXWPuwzzlCk
比如:517Please respect copyright.PENANAoqiGm0faIl
『乞丐』是強者,而『總裁』是弱者。517Please respect copyright.PENANAD9r8Rej9d6
兩者之間發生了一個『弱肉被強食』的故事。而這是一個『言情』做主題。517Please respect copyright.PENANAE2F1c2d6oz
總裁被乞丐吃了(攻受意味
A君:517Please respect copyright.PENANAZu4pcD7MtX
還是不懂欸
龍晨P:517Please respect copyright.PENANAUHZWKp8vvq
嗯...我好像舉錯例了
A君:517Please respect copyright.PENANAzrOlmgp4p7
你的思維和他人不同啊…
龍晨P:517Please respect copyright.PENANA4UDpxh5fsO
『弱肉強食』描述兩個事物的互相關係517Please respect copyright.PENANAynCVuRvxUF
一個強,一個弱,對吧?
A君:517Please respect copyright.PENANAQSSEKheTjF
嗯,對啊
龍晨P:517Please respect copyright.PENANAmjxiizL0Wt
有了這個定義之後,憑空創作出來的人物就有『身份和關聯』,517Please respect copyright.PENANA7Q1blWb9xf
他們在故事裡,一個強,一個弱,強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方。
A君:517Please respect copyright.PENANAJoUJkr9nME
強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方的話,那弱的一方是在反抗的一方嗎?
龍晨P:517Please respect copyright.PENANAE0EizZF4dJ
這個要再看其他材料能給你什麼想像了:517Please respect copyright.PENANAgmtfiZPIaG
『老虎』和『兔子』做材料的話,弱者看起來不可能反抗。517Please respect copyright.PENANAV6r2b7zeOm
但如果在放『讓弱者打敗強者』的劇本裡,就會變出弱者反抗強者的情節來。
A君:517Please respect copyright.PENANAfKidMJWJXc
哦~
龍晨P:517Please respect copyright.PENANAIxwK2X4Ijd
然後我就從沒靈感,變成可能想像和寫出:517Please respect copyright.PENANArrPcBXts2O
『一隻兔子用陷阱打敗了老虎』(配上智謀)517Please respect copyright.PENANAENaXv8VCdd
『一百隻兔子聯合打敗了老虎』(配上團結)517Please respect copyright.PENANALykYEDKwCJ
的故事
A君:517Please respect copyright.PENANAWZgK6RP7iW
好的、517Please respect copyright.PENANA4eb4i44mBj
可是這故事好誇張啊,一百隻欸!
龍晨P:517Please respect copyright.PENANAkZiVjghedq
哈哈~誇張是能讓你記得的套路XD
龍晨P:517Please respect copyright.PENANA1xtVJqy2L4
現在,我們回來看看你原來的故事有什麼材料?又少了什麼材料? 好嗎?
A君:517Please respect copyright.PENANAizrjsjcZaK
我的故事有少什麼嗎?
龍晨P:517Please respect copyright.PENANASJgALeLN0i
不知道~ 但你有興趣聽聽我的分析嗎?
A君:517Please respect copyright.PENANA7dc0shVUQS
好,只要是能讓我變好的我都聽!
龍晨P:517Please respect copyright.PENANArsWjnxDwPM
你想不下去,是因為這個故事只有幾個材料:517Please respect copyright.PENANArUWNmhsiQt
1.『爭執』517Please respect copyright.PENANA4xKCZJwy9Q
2.『有錢人/富貴的人』517Please respect copyright.PENANAHEd3BsE5Gi
3.『分手的情人(主角)』517Please respect copyright.PENANAqpVBvUZF2y
4.『狠心的姐姐(主角)』517Please respect copyright.PENANAA1C9dX4Kq9
5.『不孝女(主角)』
其中3-5都是文章中的"我"她與各人的關係
A君:517Please respect copyright.PENANAtMjiODNW7D
嗯,對,可是這又說明了什麼嗎?
龍晨P:517Please respect copyright.PENANArJLlwI6e6D
當主角"我"的『爭執』一完了,整個故事也就沒有其他料能用,所以發展不下去了。
A君:517Please respect copyright.PENANAZiFwqMBOpj
那如果加入復仇呢517Please respect copyright.PENANAaZbEbRENtK
搶她大姐的未婚夫517Please respect copyright.PENANAhl0w3ltyew
怎麼樣?
龍晨P:517Please respect copyright.PENANAsxAZDxQd1E
沒錯~要寫下去就要更多的材料。那下一章《復仇》就是你想要的標題了517Please respect copyright.PENANAFXMIX346hI
這一章叫《爭執》、下一章叫《復仇》……517Please respect copyright.PENANAkhBJ3gFpp1
故事主軸可能就是『夏家因怨』。
A君:517Please respect copyright.PENANAokFd5eA1CT
好的,了解啦
A君:517Please respect copyright.PENANAizWBJ4tczD
嗯...那男主要誰?
龍晨P:517Please respect copyright.PENANAYvZvqR6r57
不一定要有吧~?517Please respect copyright.PENANA4fxK4IoRGa
兩個女主角又如何?
A君:517Please respect copyright.PENANAmWuSc9sKxK
可是我只寫過言情小說啊…
龍晨P:517Please respect copyright.PENANAuW1LBBQMKi
比如517Please respect copyright.PENANAfCp03gs2P2
1."我(筑楓)"對夏家『復仇』517Please respect copyright.PENANA1Vs2yEQx4v
2.雨星又對"我"『復仇』
龍晨P:517Please respect copyright.PENANAZMSSytbUQF
呵呵~沒關係~材料齊集靈感到了,你就知道該怎樣寫了!517Please respect copyright.PENANARz2Aw350s9
(要創作男主角,也是一樣用『材料』。)XD517Please respect copyright.PENANAQQsC53twox
龍晨P:517Please respect copyright.PENANAHkoD0udkrT
只要你學懂解析自己文章裡有什麼材料,要從無沒靈感變有靈感會容易得多。 517Please respect copyright.PENANAucayLoDY28
A君:517Please respect copyright.PENANApXt2QlqkAG
你好厲害啊!517Please respect copyright.PENANAqQpqlF1Mus
(重新把故事編排)517Please respect copyright.PENANAHIHZ0IiTGq
龍晨P:517Please respect copyright.PENANAdi1a2RmUgM
你真的做很好了~剩下的請再找其他人幫你啦~517Please respect copyright.PENANAeV2HypkFOC