A君:464Please respect copyright.PENANAkq5cpGyWHQ
謝謝你,不過我這篇沒名字欸—464Please respect copyright.PENANADk7G6TzyjV
龍晨P:464Please respect copyright.PENANA6aYGbqOcRG
你指標題?464Please respect copyright.PENANATc8aAwUYMR
但有時訂標題也很困難~464Please respect copyright.PENANAaRhRSf0YLs
就像你這一段對話(給我看的故事)到底想向讀者表達什麼,很難用十個字以來形容得完。
A君:464Please respect copyright.PENANAhuar0LoBv3
嗯對啊,464Please respect copyright.PENANAlsEFNwp0K8
所以才困擾嘛。
龍晨P:464Please respect copyright.PENANAURhEfDlXiU
那是因為,你寫的時候沒有先定主旨,464Please respect copyright.PENANA6gEPbsmuHR
所以沒有中心思想在。464Please respect copyright.PENANALtlYopM9Eq
我猜的對嗎?
A君:464Please respect copyright.PENANAaaYCoY5cn7
嗯,我所有寫出來的都是臨時起意的。464Please respect copyright.PENANAE28QpXt7hb
所以...有時候看以前的文,都還會想著:這真是我寫過的嗎?464Please respect copyright.PENANA2jK07AdXqE
對了,我所有的文都無題。
龍晨P:464Please respect copyright.PENANAuudkuvX172
看來你真的很喜歡想這些小故事!464Please respect copyright.PENANAqVhn79Q2kY
如果是長篇故事,很難沒有主題和中心思想。
A君:464Please respect copyright.PENANACJEiokQGYG
那是因為我很沒耐心,只能寫短的啊!
龍晨P:464Please respect copyright.PENANAT5PEfRrbQn
哈哈~真的嗎~XDD464Please respect copyright.PENANApTfyJEQpj4
我認為呢~ 只是因為這個故事你沒有材料寫不下去。464Please respect copyright.PENANAjj1vv6wSLo
所以下一次你會想到其他人發生其他的故事,464Please respect copyright.PENANAGG0EvFOS01
而不是一直把這個故事接下去,寫成長篇。
A君:464Please respect copyright.PENANAtLMd4E8jY2
當然是真的啊~所以我之前的小說寫到後面全都是我朋友寫的。464Please respect copyright.PENANA3ThgIg64Gv
說來有點不負責任,但我就是沒辦法好好寫完,因為往往都是在我還沒寫完一篇,另一篇的靈感就來了。464Please respect copyright.PENANAw7qxrrLVyu
我才剛打完你就講了我要說的😂😂 狂
龍晨P:464Please respect copyright.PENANA7Jh2QiF5O6
我指的「材料」,其實就是你「靈感」的原料。464Please respect copyright.PENANAHWO0mXuHWG
沒有「靈感」,是因為你「材料」用完了。
A君:464Please respect copyright.PENANAa9hodqle2x
那材料沒了怎麼補充啊?
龍晨P:464Please respect copyright.PENANA4X6xb2aU3V
我先教你如何準備材料,好嗎?
A君:464Please respect copyright.PENANAkc3Ccnet7u
好啊。
龍晨P:464Please respect copyright.PENANAAeJ4GtJhTE
如果寫作課給你一個題目:「強者和弱者」,三百字。464Please respect copyright.PENANA1Hx8zkwy5j
你會想到寫什麼故事?我們看看裡面有什麼材料在。464Please respect copyright.PENANA2NAZDnPmZ3
大致形容一下你想到的畫面就好。464Please respect copyright.PENANAybWcuxbg5p
這個大致形容就是你的中心思想了。
A君:464Please respect copyright.PENANA3X28GgxxJ9
好的,464Please respect copyright.PENANAHMvrgtZ1Vl
強者和弱者=弱肉強食的世界、464Please respect copyright.PENANAx9bW7pic4y
有關言情的武俠小說吧。
龍晨P:464Please respect copyright.PENANAHciFbFhYbe
『弱肉強食』是第一類材料,464Please respect copyright.PENANA3G2gSlMzOR
『武俠』和『言情』第二類材料。
A君:464Please respect copyright.PENANAnbeRurkao5
弱肉強食怎麼會是材料啊?
龍晨P:464Please respect copyright.PENANAnvIJSnehgP
讓我配上一些東西說明吧。464Please respect copyright.PENANA1RvvlP496K
『英雄』『總裁』『乞丐』『軍人』是第三類材料464Please respect copyright.PENANAvZ0CWmYmQH
有了這些材料,可以組織出故事靈感。464Please respect copyright.PENANAGQONKGOZQ1
比如:464Please respect copyright.PENANAk2ZAXO9yBS
『乞丐』是強者,而『總裁』是弱者。464Please respect copyright.PENANAFAE9OKVeGP
兩者之間發生了一個『弱肉被強食』的故事。而這是一個『言情』做主題。464Please respect copyright.PENANA5lZKA19wLG
總裁被乞丐吃了(攻受意味
A君:464Please respect copyright.PENANA93DUqZd2PM
還是不懂欸
龍晨P:464Please respect copyright.PENANAnezdxz427P
嗯...我好像舉錯例了
A君:464Please respect copyright.PENANA3n3UDrxvPV
你的思維和他人不同啊…
龍晨P:464Please respect copyright.PENANAgUsKP3OGvN
『弱肉強食』描述兩個事物的互相關係464Please respect copyright.PENANAI05MiZz7eT
一個強,一個弱,對吧?
A君:464Please respect copyright.PENANAUujoStYQhV
嗯,對啊
龍晨P:464Please respect copyright.PENANAil4GhuCvWE
有了這個定義之後,憑空創作出來的人物就有『身份和關聯』,464Please respect copyright.PENANAIziGwievEy
他們在故事裡,一個強,一個弱,強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方。
A君:464Please respect copyright.PENANA4oBkropfir
強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方的話,那弱的一方是在反抗的一方嗎?
龍晨P:464Please respect copyright.PENANAHQkXf44Ll8
這個要再看其他材料能給你什麼想像了:464Please respect copyright.PENANANdXaDPM8NL
『老虎』和『兔子』做材料的話,弱者看起來不可能反抗。464Please respect copyright.PENANAZ9UefrfJno
但如果在放『讓弱者打敗強者』的劇本裡,就會變出弱者反抗強者的情節來。
A君:464Please respect copyright.PENANAnGTgzesBND
哦~
龍晨P:464Please respect copyright.PENANAPQVWGDBSHT
然後我就從沒靈感,變成可能想像和寫出:464Please respect copyright.PENANAr5PQk6lWhX
『一隻兔子用陷阱打敗了老虎』(配上智謀)464Please respect copyright.PENANA0kdMtPf1Rc
『一百隻兔子聯合打敗了老虎』(配上團結)464Please respect copyright.PENANAbtbIWhHN7i
的故事
A君:464Please respect copyright.PENANANIMPoCiPr5
好的、464Please respect copyright.PENANACO4FRC87Om
可是這故事好誇張啊,一百隻欸!
龍晨P:464Please respect copyright.PENANAPGVhRBErxd
哈哈~誇張是能讓你記得的套路XD
龍晨P:464Please respect copyright.PENANA6XubSj1y0q
現在,我們回來看看你原來的故事有什麼材料?又少了什麼材料? 好嗎?
A君:464Please respect copyright.PENANAGTF1yQLgPm
我的故事有少什麼嗎?
龍晨P:464Please respect copyright.PENANADBCSYYTnoX
不知道~ 但你有興趣聽聽我的分析嗎?
A君:464Please respect copyright.PENANAWAs3kg5VNk
好,只要是能讓我變好的我都聽!
龍晨P:464Please respect copyright.PENANALXFKBaNTp9
你想不下去,是因為這個故事只有幾個材料:464Please respect copyright.PENANA5H9AMIiiUG
1.『爭執』464Please respect copyright.PENANARvEJitPKQR
2.『有錢人/富貴的人』464Please respect copyright.PENANA0ZxKdgbJSi
3.『分手的情人(主角)』464Please respect copyright.PENANAigdtt2OEjb
4.『狠心的姐姐(主角)』464Please respect copyright.PENANAC38ZnaqEiS
5.『不孝女(主角)』
其中3-5都是文章中的"我"她與各人的關係
A君:464Please respect copyright.PENANASinxCNib4f
嗯,對,可是這又說明了什麼嗎?
龍晨P:464Please respect copyright.PENANAadB9cAlAVj
當主角"我"的『爭執』一完了,整個故事也就沒有其他料能用,所以發展不下去了。
A君:464Please respect copyright.PENANAcGQMluAJUt
那如果加入復仇呢464Please respect copyright.PENANA7vFAFQvWPh
搶她大姐的未婚夫464Please respect copyright.PENANAERtGq0c4JM
怎麼樣?
龍晨P:464Please respect copyright.PENANAMrLN7l0JFl
沒錯~要寫下去就要更多的材料。那下一章《復仇》就是你想要的標題了464Please respect copyright.PENANAXfdELXlGHj
這一章叫《爭執》、下一章叫《復仇》……464Please respect copyright.PENANAQMM78E89a3
故事主軸可能就是『夏家因怨』。
A君:464Please respect copyright.PENANAjoPX2MiSbh
好的,了解啦
A君:464Please respect copyright.PENANAGvryytPrjx
嗯...那男主要誰?
龍晨P:464Please respect copyright.PENANAVWDzCgavSF
不一定要有吧~?464Please respect copyright.PENANArZDzUkJwiA
兩個女主角又如何?
A君:464Please respect copyright.PENANAlihETKsDaW
可是我只寫過言情小說啊…
龍晨P:464Please respect copyright.PENANAcd9fe2ofYS
比如464Please respect copyright.PENANAKQA4O32IU7
1."我(筑楓)"對夏家『復仇』464Please respect copyright.PENANAQ1pC8rBQpa
2.雨星又對"我"『復仇』
龍晨P:464Please respect copyright.PENANAiPN21lfxcg
呵呵~沒關係~材料齊集靈感到了,你就知道該怎樣寫了!464Please respect copyright.PENANA5FEtmmbx39
(要創作男主角,也是一樣用『材料』。)XD464Please respect copyright.PENANA9aHFoMert4
龍晨P:464Please respect copyright.PENANA4nSRJflyNM
只要你學懂解析自己文章裡有什麼材料,要從無沒靈感變有靈感會容易得多。 464Please respect copyright.PENANAlIItdW5VNZ
A君:464Please respect copyright.PENANAhn7KFoXTCE
你好厲害啊!464Please respect copyright.PENANA6glog9iBN3
(重新把故事編排)464Please respect copyright.PENANArgpiM34Wu0
龍晨P:464Please respect copyright.PENANASPlGXxa17W
你真的做很好了~剩下的請再找其他人幫你啦~464Please respect copyright.PENANA05kGj27eos