A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANAWRZifK1zFj
謝謝你,不過我這篇沒名字欸—579Please respect copyright.PENANAjghx3lobh2
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAtAKQszpdkc
你指標題?579Please respect copyright.PENANAHiG1loYm4e
但有時訂標題也很困難~579Please respect copyright.PENANA5FbJkRttEj
就像你這一段對話(給我看的故事)到底想向讀者表達什麼,很難用十個字以來形容得完。
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANAeHTJEAwRYg
嗯對啊,579Please respect copyright.PENANA7BbkM2qORv
所以才困擾嘛。
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANATmUUwWUcs5
那是因為,你寫的時候沒有先定主旨,579Please respect copyright.PENANA64NXeQTkdb
所以沒有中心思想在。579Please respect copyright.PENANAwgrMeD2z8R
我猜的對嗎?
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANAbSsradbTxl
嗯,我所有寫出來的都是臨時起意的。579Please respect copyright.PENANAbsgbOVA6BL
所以...有時候看以前的文,都還會想著:這真是我寫過的嗎?579Please respect copyright.PENANAPW3bD0m4Zs
對了,我所有的文都無題。
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANARJlX2rXyto
看來你真的很喜歡想這些小故事!579Please respect copyright.PENANAtzChlbOmpq
如果是長篇故事,很難沒有主題和中心思想。
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANADlF7if7ld7
那是因為我很沒耐心,只能寫短的啊!
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANA5jOum8EoE3
哈哈~真的嗎~XDD579Please respect copyright.PENANADINo3Vu9YQ
我認為呢~ 只是因為這個故事你沒有材料寫不下去。579Please respect copyright.PENANAY30GMRxFnx
所以下一次你會想到其他人發生其他的故事,579Please respect copyright.PENANAyejfJiJLw7
而不是一直把這個故事接下去,寫成長篇。
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANAz8qcdfySTV
當然是真的啊~所以我之前的小說寫到後面全都是我朋友寫的。579Please respect copyright.PENANAgsCkAujvEF
說來有點不負責任,但我就是沒辦法好好寫完,因為往往都是在我還沒寫完一篇,另一篇的靈感就來了。579Please respect copyright.PENANAlpK8F7diFC
我才剛打完你就講了我要說的😂😂 狂
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAqNyLMjW8OJ
我指的「材料」,其實就是你「靈感」的原料。579Please respect copyright.PENANAX3P8S56Tpu
沒有「靈感」,是因為你「材料」用完了。
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANAGyKxmFJxZt
那材料沒了怎麼補充啊?
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAgTv35IzoMv
我先教你如何準備材料,好嗎?
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANASlYT1fLNDD
好啊。
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAfAkEoqnVQ6
如果寫作課給你一個題目:「強者和弱者」,三百字。579Please respect copyright.PENANACt9dHwvuYX
你會想到寫什麼故事?我們看看裡面有什麼材料在。579Please respect copyright.PENANA8Jvx84GPyV
大致形容一下你想到的畫面就好。579Please respect copyright.PENANAIdAwP7DYR2
這個大致形容就是你的中心思想了。
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANAbmKNiY5GXA
好的,579Please respect copyright.PENANAgEPwVo2oAb
強者和弱者=弱肉強食的世界、579Please respect copyright.PENANAevQZVUh0wj
有關言情的武俠小說吧。
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAeOtxFPR0NC
『弱肉強食』是第一類材料,579Please respect copyright.PENANAET5BOe0J8U
『武俠』和『言情』第二類材料。
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANA6Et4VZJ08S
弱肉強食怎麼會是材料啊?
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANA94at6JyYUI
讓我配上一些東西說明吧。579Please respect copyright.PENANA7qRznFL2kn
『英雄』『總裁』『乞丐』『軍人』是第三類材料579Please respect copyright.PENANA5DvCv8LMdm
有了這些材料,可以組織出故事靈感。579Please respect copyright.PENANAyude8TJhfV
比如:579Please respect copyright.PENANAQBIq33dT4F
『乞丐』是強者,而『總裁』是弱者。579Please respect copyright.PENANAtlGxDyvv0R
兩者之間發生了一個『弱肉被強食』的故事。而這是一個『言情』做主題。579Please respect copyright.PENANAahJ8AksV3D
總裁被乞丐吃了(攻受意味
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANAw5RA9GFkFu
還是不懂欸
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAMV5za9tb7a
嗯...我好像舉錯例了
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANAvdcvmO6tbH
你的思維和他人不同啊…
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAzIMoHeI2RU
『弱肉強食』描述兩個事物的互相關係579Please respect copyright.PENANAuSJwmdRKkL
一個強,一個弱,對吧?
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANAoF8LE3ttSw
嗯,對啊
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAp6pzl7jbmW
有了這個定義之後,憑空創作出來的人物就有『身份和關聯』,579Please respect copyright.PENANAjmAUau7Vy7
他們在故事裡,一個強,一個弱,強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方。
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANAPmhMHPM5P8
強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方的話,那弱的一方是在反抗的一方嗎?
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANA3gxmwweqLZ
這個要再看其他材料能給你什麼想像了:579Please respect copyright.PENANANk4A20exUX
『老虎』和『兔子』做材料的話,弱者看起來不可能反抗。579Please respect copyright.PENANAqrHKm5148e
但如果在放『讓弱者打敗強者』的劇本裡,就會變出弱者反抗強者的情節來。
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANACUpx3nzGSo
哦~
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAmDX1azaiw0
然後我就從沒靈感,變成可能想像和寫出:579Please respect copyright.PENANAUj2KQuPNzH
『一隻兔子用陷阱打敗了老虎』(配上智謀)579Please respect copyright.PENANAHNCpg9HPic
『一百隻兔子聯合打敗了老虎』(配上團結)579Please respect copyright.PENANAynCOddGLnY
的故事
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANACWExIp1ZSi
好的、579Please respect copyright.PENANACphaqsVZIW
可是這故事好誇張啊,一百隻欸!
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANARRy1Nt30Qe
哈哈~誇張是能讓你記得的套路XD
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAtUZWhxgUUg
現在,我們回來看看你原來的故事有什麼材料?又少了什麼材料? 好嗎?
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANAlrPwlUdB1H
我的故事有少什麼嗎?
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANATTGTIQe3ZT
不知道~ 但你有興趣聽聽我的分析嗎?
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANAxSwP3qN9pO
好,只要是能讓我變好的我都聽!
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAoYMV0vlO0B
你想不下去,是因為這個故事只有幾個材料:579Please respect copyright.PENANA46sgEAE5Fu
1.『爭執』579Please respect copyright.PENANAPB4fhkS8lL
2.『有錢人/富貴的人』579Please respect copyright.PENANAbVteJQMCZv
3.『分手的情人(主角)』579Please respect copyright.PENANA1ujtLjcK2l
4.『狠心的姐姐(主角)』579Please respect copyright.PENANAgHxJLpr1z2
5.『不孝女(主角)』
其中3-5都是文章中的"我"她與各人的關係
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANAt44vlLDO4q
嗯,對,可是這又說明了什麼嗎?
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANA2j48RwDhym
當主角"我"的『爭執』一完了,整個故事也就沒有其他料能用,所以發展不下去了。
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANA1Mjd0GXe8u
那如果加入復仇呢579Please respect copyright.PENANAQx5buZWr3Q
搶她大姐的未婚夫579Please respect copyright.PENANAkORlu47i62
怎麼樣?
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAbc8HCOQlga
沒錯~要寫下去就要更多的材料。那下一章《復仇》就是你想要的標題了579Please respect copyright.PENANA2EsyOg2mZv
這一章叫《爭執》、下一章叫《復仇》……579Please respect copyright.PENANAgSTiksbiQf
故事主軸可能就是『夏家因怨』。
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANAPZjuTmluAo
好的,了解啦
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANA8u9Cd2InH5
嗯...那男主要誰?
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANA29s8cVG13l
不一定要有吧~?579Please respect copyright.PENANAIlM1sbpFnO
兩個女主角又如何?
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANAOZqRK9WU7q
可是我只寫過言情小說啊…
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAF3jfXP6YHn
比如579Please respect copyright.PENANAjHI6wsl2Mr
1."我(筑楓)"對夏家『復仇』579Please respect copyright.PENANA1U3a2ZOzkv
2.雨星又對"我"『復仇』
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANA7Df3CbDq8g
呵呵~沒關係~材料齊集靈感到了,你就知道該怎樣寫了!579Please respect copyright.PENANAn87nas3jVL
(要創作男主角,也是一樣用『材料』。)XD579Please respect copyright.PENANAysmxiMmxda
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAUdxk2Wk1We
只要你學懂解析自己文章裡有什麼材料,要從無沒靈感變有靈感會容易得多。 579Please respect copyright.PENANABdKBKx2zg5
A君:579Please respect copyright.PENANAs3PMNnL0BK
你好厲害啊!579Please respect copyright.PENANAhmSseFDPyv
(重新把故事編排)579Please respect copyright.PENANAge29QR7h9j
龍晨P:579Please respect copyright.PENANAMDjOjITK8M
你真的做很好了~剩下的請再找其他人幫你啦~579Please respect copyright.PENANAwBo3ZymFTN