寫作菜鳥日記 -1266Please respect copyright.PENANAIe3UPNbigZ
今天初步完成第13章,但還沒進行合併文件前最後的修改。6Please respect copyright.PENANAo2z1mgGUkP
字數 8,2876Please respect copyright.PENANAoPE3aDmBGu
這章在大綱上就概念模糊,6Please respect copyright.PENANAyG8z4Rai2R
實際寫的時候也就是⋯⋯平舖直敍。6Please respect copyright.PENANAPeYPJPwMOH
跟流水帳差不多(汗)6Please respect copyright.PENANAtr3Uuq8mha
卻沒有可以修改的方向。6Please respect copyright.PENANAp6quXwAiOE
問題應該出在節奏的安排,6Please respect copyright.PENANAUsDdxTfCRT
之前幾個篇章我會用堆疊的方式,6Please respect copyright.PENANAkBsxVutglt
把氣氛和情緒一直往上疊,6Please respect copyright.PENANA1sVTxx8TAX
到章末堆到最高點。6Please respect copyright.PENANAQTbgSnYssH
但是這一章一直平平的,6Please respect copyright.PENANApz1oRzZKvE
然後我也不想在這裡加入什麼爆點6Please respect copyright.PENANAZfwwJg3utF
畢竟就是個戰鬥後再度進入備戰的準備期。6Please respect copyright.PENANAJHGI5qtQZa
只能先說服自己把它當作完成了,6Please respect copyright.PENANAlz1IohOESd
接著寫下一章。6Please respect copyright.PENANA5ft3MFW42n
然後另外一個問題是今天喝了啤酒就很想睡6Please respect copyright.PENANAJ2nR6smsha
沒什麼思考能力。6Please respect copyright.PENANA2KNwDGdArH
這款小麥啤酒很好喝,這湯包和辣椒也很好吃。6Please respect copyright.PENANAGazP4pE0Tb
然後請忽略背景,加儂多夫絕對沒有正在對薩爾達做出什麼奇怪的事。