"Here we go, Momma," I whisper, running my thumb across her elegant handwriting. I tuck the chocolate bar into my coat, placing my mobile travel factory down in front of the empty storefront. Setting my cane down on one end, I touch the hidden trigger that lengthens it, stepping up onto my travel factory and hitting the button that makes the little banner pop out.36Please respect copyright.PENANAc8pglv8IPm
"Ladies and gentlemen of the Gallery Gourmet!" I cry, my eyes alighting on a lone girl. Her hair is the color of chocolate and her eyes match. Her skin is light, a similar shade to my own. Other passerby begin to slow to a stop, looking at me.36Please respect copyright.PENANAbCPoIIozAg
"My name is Willy Wonka." I touch my hat, sliding my finger along the rim as I speak. "And I have come to show you a marvelous morsel!" 36Please respect copyright.PENANAf5K7vBJ0jS
People begin crowding closer, and the girl gets jostled further back where I can't see her as well. The faces reflect varying degrees of interest and curiosity.36Please respect copyright.PENANAXn1EZflnJX
"An incredible edible!" I continue my speech. "AN UNBEATABLE EATABLE!" I lean back then straighten with the intensity of the words. "The likes of which this world has never seen. So quiet up and listen down." I pause my animated hand gestures, realizing that the words switched themselves somehow. 36Please respect copyright.PENANAZmGQd5kqAV
"Nope, scratch that, reverse it." I swing my arm just so, sending the Hoverchoc down my sleeve and into my closed hand. "I give you-" I open my palm, revealing the Hoverchoc. "The Hoverchoc." 36Please respect copyright.PENANAUj4ru2IQsV
Murmurs ripple through the crowd, and I can't -and don't want to- keep the smile from appearing on my face. With the other hand, I make the little flute appear and bring it to my lips, playing the notes to wake the Hoverfly.36Please respect copyright.PENANAj1nce18FsK
The chocolate outside opens and closes with soft clicks to the notes of the little flute.36Please respect copyright.PENANA6YuO2SuWbD
"In." I close my hand over the Hoverchoc.36Please respect copyright.PENANADGFuDr5E0g
"A." I close the other hand over the flute.36Please respect copyright.PENANAJqEhruhMbz
I quickly, and with the ease of endless practice, slide them both out of sight before opening both hands to the next words of my song. "Jungle near Mumbai there's a little Hoverfly."36Please respect copyright.PENANAMXIbSG6fqW
Gasps and murmurs filter through the crowd with my magic trick. 36Please respect copyright.PENANAPn3hmfETeY
My grin widens as I continue singing, folding my arms and flapping them for emphasis. "Whose wings go at a thousand flaps a second, that's no lie." I hold up a finger, sliding my gaze across the crowd.36Please respect copyright.PENANAL58r6Z3VZe
"These microscopic fleas, like chocolate more than leaves."36Please respect copyright.PENANANIJfZmUntj
I sweep my hat off my head and into my arm. "And when asked nicely lay precisely-" I reach into my hat, pulling out an entire jar of Hoverchocs. "One little egg in each of these." I smile brightly as gasps sweep the crowd once again.36Please respect copyright.PENANAAGSOF3opaC
Plonking my hat back upon my head, I hold the jar up in plain sight. "When it hatches from its shell, it gives a happy yell, 'Woohoo!'"36Please respect copyright.PENANAQrtbd2ORHo
Hopping off my travel factory, I march around it in a circle, animatedly shoving the jar into the air then back down again. "'How thrilling to be living in a chocolate hotel!'"36Please respect copyright.PENANAV6xppOQKRQ
I stop in front of the crowd, drumming my fingers under the jar. "It beats its wings with glee, and then as you will see-"36Please respect copyright.PENANA8xVEZjIIkM
I lift the top off the jar. "The choco-LATE will levitate and float most gracefully." The Hoverchocs float up out of the jar, lifting into the air over the shocked passerby.36Please respect copyright.PENANArgO88ZqFsy
Against my will, I find myself seeking out the girl in the crown, anxious for her reaction. To my utter delight, I find her eyes alight with joy and awe.36Please respect copyright.PENANAhsVVQ0iDkg
I tap the ground in time to the tune playing through my mind, pressing my lips together in an attempt to contain the pure joy running through me. "Well there's chocolate. And there's chocolate."36Please respect copyright.PENANApmbGZo8JIg
I whip my hat off my head and spin around, causing the Hoverchocs to follow my movement from above. "But only Wonka's makes your eyes pop out their sockelets." 36Please respect copyright.PENANA6DPgxQy1p5
I replace my hat once again, grabbing my cane and swinging it through the air. "Put your hand into your pockelet, get yourself some Wonka chocolate! Come now I insist."36Please respect copyright.PENANAH7zfK8glMu
I grab the jar back from a passerby. "You've never had chocolate like this-"36Please respect copyright.PENANASdDCNPDai4
I drum my fingers on the underside of the jar, calling the Hoverchocs back. "No, you've never had chocolate like-" I replace the lid. "This."36Please respect copyright.PENANA5YNtrBhe4k
The crowd starts cheering and I tip my head to my right, smiling and nodding.36Please respect copyright.PENANAndJgU4TLkU
"Well, who wants to try one?" I call.36Please respect copyright.PENANAwlUaM3BuzS
Hands shoot up all around, but one voice rings out over the others. 36Please respect copyright.PENANAXmSFRwEPGA
"I do." The crowd parts for a man in a dark, pinstriped suit. 36Please respect copyright.PENANAA1uaeExBOm
"Mr. Slugworth, sir." I find myself saying.36Please respect copyright.PENANA9KWRM0Mvw5
"Excuse me!" calls another man, this one in a green suit, pushing through the crowd.36Please respect copyright.PENANAfVoJthh8pQ
"Mr. Ficklegrubber." Yet another famous chocolate maker is coming to meet me.36Please respect copyright.PENANAHFxrydRPmE
I catch sight of yet another man in a yellow suit pushing through the crowd.36Please respect copyright.PENANAO4Z8hxmEyL
"And Mr. Prodnose." I say somewhat softly, in awe of seeing the men I've admired for years.36Please respect copyright.PENANAyESnkDmjXb
"What an honor." I say as they all line up in front of me.36Please respect copyright.PENANAFGi03hZYVm
Mr. Slugworth holds out his hand and I reach for his. "Ever since I was a little boy-" I trail off as his grip firmly clenches my hand, leaving me with a throbbing hand. "That is quite a handshake," I say, somewhat weakly.36Please respect copyright.PENANAnk6CUym4AB
"It's a business handshake, Mr. Wonka. Lets people know I mean business." Slugworth smirks ever so slightly.36Please respect copyright.PENANALTlzG1Cqtq
"Ahh..." I massage my hand slightly.36Please respect copyright.PENANAkTGVWCNSfZ
"Now come along, let's try one of these so-called-Hoverchocs..."36Please respect copyright.PENANAmw3nco9kSQ
I hold out the jar, watching them each take one and pop it into their mouths. I watch their slightly smug expressions turn shocked.36Please respect copyright.PENANA7cYKDkAE86
"Ooo. There's not just chocolate is there? There's... marshmallow." Slugworth sounds surprised.36Please respect copyright.PENANAJq4hga2Ytx
"That's right," I reply, getting excited. "Harvested from the Mallow Marshes of Peru."36Please respect copyright.PENANAsXzCqM0Wo2
"And... caramel.." Mr Ficklegrubber puckers his mouth slightly.36Please respect copyright.PENANAEo04q4vQEk
"With the bittersweet tears of the Russian Clown." I turn to Prodnose as he makes his own comment.36Please respect copyright.PENANAtGbNI3EOAo
"And.. is that... surely not... chili?"36Please respect copyright.PENANASzz7w2AOIq
"Cherry picked by the cherry pickers of the imperial gardens in Japan." I respond readily.36Please respect copyright.PENANAQfwvAyHRrY
"Well. Mr. Wonka. I've been in this business a very long time. And I think it's safe to say that of all the chocolate I've ever tasted-"36Please respect copyright.PENANAoQU7xesQrO
I nod, nearly bouncing on my toes at Slugworth's impending praise.36Please respect copyright.PENANAyibvh0ZwMn
"- this is without doubt, the absolute, one hundred percent, worst."36Please respect copyright.PENANAgojPpRAf3D
I let out a whoop, turning away from the chocolate makers. "There we have it, ladies and gentle men, an endorsement from Mr. Sl-" I pause, his words suddenly hitting me and turn back to him. "Wait, the worst?"36Please respect copyright.PENANAGuQLKckUmn
"We three are the fiercest of rivals." Slugworth gestures to the other chocolate makers. "And yet we agree on one thing. A good chocolate should be simple, plain, uncomplicated."36Please respect copyright.PENANAqtsRQczM2q
Ficklegrubber steps forward, coming alongside Slugworth. "And this, with all its bells and whistles... well it's just.."36Please respect copyright.PENANADC9XLHLnWs
"Weird," says Mr. Prodnose stepping forward as well.36Please respect copyright.PENANAilDTP7nTLx
I lower myself to sit on my travel factory, only a little disappointed they didn't like my chocolate. "It's a shame," I say sadly, watching Mr. Slugworth lick his lips. "If you thought the chocolate was weird.. you're gonna hate what happens next."36Please respect copyright.PENANAgZL6ZatvUt
He opens his mouth, probably to ask what happens next, but then he lifts off the ground. "What's happening? What's going on?" he cries, sounding slightly panicked.36Please respect copyright.PENANA2mPZzFmZfn
I stand up, "That's the Hoverfly! Broken out of its cocoon, it's flapping its wings in your belly!" I lean back watching the chocolate makers drift upwards.36Please respect copyright.PENANA5a6Xfbop9y
Mr. Prodnose flips over, his hair dropping to the floor at my feet. "My hair!" He tries to swim through the air to get it. "My goodness!"36Please respect copyright.PENANAgpsLYFlUSi
"Don't worry! You'll be completely unharmed!" I pick up the wig and toss it into Mr. Prodnose's hands.36Please respect copyright.PENANAx5SK4wGQxV
"Oh thank you."36Please respect copyright.PENANAz3AnroFDWK
"In about twenty minutes, it'll get tired and exit through your rear!"36Please respect copyright.PENANAeuEDyw28Hn
I smile as they drift ever higher, nearly reaching the roof of the Gallery Gourmet.36Please respect copyright.PENANAp0QjMafxkE
"You're off your rocker, Wonka!" yells Slugworth. "Who in their right mind wants chocolate that makes them fly?!"36Please respect copyright.PENANAdV8PKKYH0c
"Let's find out, shall we?" I whisk the lid off the jar. "Who's for a Hoverchoc?"36Please respect copyright.PENANAotDsQZaCCf
People all around jump for the floating chocolates, dropping silver sovereigns in my jar as they grab them. I thank each person, telling a few of them to enjoy their flight.36Please respect copyright.PENANAqvS1DIBp0h
Suddenly, the air is full of flying people and I step away, admiring my work. I catch sight of Noodle the orphan by the gate. I tip my hat to her, smiling when she smiles at me.36Please respect copyright.PENANAxCThug3EXs
A whistle pierces the air, and I see policemen pushing past Noodle and into the Gallery.36Please respect copyright.PENANAexuxy0CO8m
"Alright folks," calls the one in charge. "Nothing to see here. Just a small group of people defying the laws of gravity. Poke 'em boys."36Please respect copyright.PENANAjhYggFVYg7
The remaining crowd disperses rapidly.36Please respect copyright.PENANAcuAo7InEk4
"That's the Hoverchoc, sir, that's the point." I glance at the policemen sticking poles up at the flying people.36Please respect copyright.PENANAs0bYXciJrN
A second policeman steps up in front of me. "I'm afraid we've had some complaints about you, sir."36Please respect copyright.PENANAnm0eJT5UPS
"Complaints?" I repeat, confused.36Please respect copyright.PENANAcfC17sf2Lw
"That you're disrupting the trade of other businesses. And we're regrettably obliged to move you on and.. confiscate your earnings.."36Please respect copyright.PENANA5oIZ01NjL2
I open my mouth to question him further, but the police chief pushes past, snatching my jar in the process. "Hey! What're you doing?"36Please respect copyright.PENANAFWv5wPy4Qz
"Don't worry," calls the man over his shoulder. "It's going to a good cause. Sick kids or something."36Please respect copyright.PENANAKABgOKflJM
"Sorry, sir." I look back at the police officer in front of me. "Rules is rules."36Please respect copyright.PENANAf026QslDhA
I think despairingly of the room I have to pay for. "Can you at least leave me a sovereign? I need to pay for my room..."36Please respect copyright.PENANAFmVuJitrZN
He glances around then sighs, sticking his hand into his jacket. "Here." He presses a coin into my hand.36Please respect copyright.PENANAbFxUbcbnji
"Thank you." 36Please respect copyright.PENANANJHEq50nuQ
I retrieve my travel factory, slinging it over my back, and start back to the guesthouse.36Please respect copyright.PENANAlOnRpDu25D
With the sovereign in one hand, my cane in the other, and my eyes upon the road tiles, I don't notice until it's too late.36Please respect copyright.PENANAOs3iPHKETa
Someone slams into me, and I stumble backwards, dropping my sovereign. 36Please respect copyright.PENANAJm3DiH2u6N
"Watch where you're going!" The man shoves me aside.36Please respect copyright.PENANAeGEclIZpAt
I sigh, and look around for the sovereign, but it's nowhere to be seen.36Please respect copyright.PENANAEbY3xVBiCP
"Great. Now what am I going to do?"36Please respect copyright.PENANAxdrF3Hu1ii
"Why are you stopped in the middle of the path?"36Please respect copyright.PENANAcWFT55kfTa
I turn to confront the girl I saw in the crowd earlier.36Please respect copyright.PENANAHVNjHqsPRy
I shrug, letting my shoulders slump.36Please respect copyright.PENANAmSPVPS1geL
"I saw what happened." The girl looks livid. "I don't understand why they'd take your money. That seemed completely unnecessary."36Please respect copyright.PENANAmaoYYpo8lD
"The one officer gave me a sovereign to pay for my room."36Please respect copyright.PENANAnvjvtxkM4R
She deflates ever so slightly. "That was.. kind."36Please respect copyright.PENANAz0iLj89COZ
"Did you get to try a Hoverchoc?" I ask hopefully.36Please respect copyright.PENANAYY42vK3IiB
She shakes her head. "I wasn't close enough to grab one. But it's okay." She hurries to reassure me since I find myself insanely disappointed. My mother always said I had an expressive face. "I'm afraid of heights anyway, so I don't mind missing out."36Please respect copyright.PENANAsIujAMtYBa
I let out a slow sigh, that was all the chocolate I took the time to make last night, so I don't have any I could give her.36Please respect copyright.PENANAYefFmo9d8f
"Why are you stopped in the middle of the path anyway?"36Please respect copyright.PENANA2PwraarMBX
"I dropped my sovereign.."36Please respect copyright.PENANAN7odAgXpsg
"Oh no!" She puts a hand to her mouth before lowering it and looking determined.36Please respect copyright.PENANAgc0BQvFisZ
I shrug again. "I don't know how I'm going to pay for my room now."36Please respect copyright.PENANAogCZUxDThQ
She puts a hand into a pocket in her dress, pulling out a pouch. 36Please respect copyright.PENANAblTMcoG0mt
"What're you doing?" I ask, watching her as she opens the pouch.36Please respect copyright.PENANAz8Vwze3TG9
"Helping you." She pulls out a few silver sovereigns and replaces the pouch.36Please respect copyright.PENANAZYzjcB3cvK
I smile softly. "I can't accept that.."36Please respect copyright.PENANAR1vDkc7CKq
She grabs one of my hands, shocking me with how cold they are. 36Please respect copyright.PENANAuFb3IHxVUq
"Your hands are so cold!"36Please respect copyright.PENANAzb97cwPsgl
"Why thank you," she says dryly, pressing the coins into my hands.36Please respect copyright.PENANA5kzXdhAOlQ
I try to press them back into her hands, noting how ratty her dress is. "I really can't take these."36Please respect copyright.PENANAW1O0gl4kLs
"I insist." She closes my hand over the sovereigns and I stifle a shiver at her touch. Her hands feel like ice, only without the wetness.36Please respect copyright.PENANAgDyqngXVl3
I can only stare at her as she steps away. 36Please respect copyright.PENANAkOddCWSsnV
"Think of it as an advance payment." She steps back again. "Another time you can give me the chocolate I'm paying you for."36Please respect copyright.PENANALQW2MadiV7
I open my mouth to argue but- "When will I do that?"36Please respect copyright.PENANAp2wD62nCf3
"The next time you see me, I assume."36Please respect copyright.PENANAkRD9vVm7CG
"When will that be?"36Please respect copyright.PENANAKO60xKSWGB
She takes another step back. "I don't know."36Please respect copyright.PENANAZjgwCV21Mj
I bite my lip, watching her turn away. "I don't even know your name!"36Please respect copyright.PENANAllwK2Ga9MM
She pauses. She looks over her shoulder. And that's when I see the gold glimmering in her chocolate eyes. "Ember." And then she's gone.
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I know I spent most of the chapter retelling part of the movie, but I still hope you liked it :D36Please respect copyright.PENANAvjlRKWO15Q
I'd love to hear what you think so please comment <3