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標點符號，重點強調，節奏安排

溪嵐 溪嵐
May 25, 2025 33 1 Min Read 80 Words
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No Plagiarism!jIhW7n3LydBsiMYWxZtHposted on PＥNAＮＡ

1.標點符號有些地方可能不是那麼恰當

2.有些不是很重要的地方過度強調

3.段落銜接有點怪

4.對人物的修飾可以多一些

5.對想表達的事物可以更精準

6.對白設計很好，但要加一些其他的

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