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否則就會小命不保?
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對這個創挑觀望好久後終於鼓起勇氣參加,229Please respect copyright.PENANAwfAvWFQSh1
雖然碼字有段時間了,但今年才開始認真寫,229Please respect copyright.PENANAKIGOETjBVC
也是六月時才成為蕉友,229Please respect copyright.PENANAUK7KVUSlpq
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但因為是大長篇,229Please respect copyright.PENANA2If4nqMGH3
為了鋪陳情節開頭敘事偏向緩慢,229Please respect copyright.PENANA1gjELqWQHy
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任何閱讀體驗或心得,229Please respect copyright.PENANA38oFL5VTiA
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希望參加的大家至少都因為這個挑戰229Please respect copyright.PENANAxARuVq5Ozb
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