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※ 作品日更中,目前已破 50 連更,正在挑戰百更~198Please respect copyright.PENANAQNVlbYBmpb
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殷璃某天醒來發現自己穿越了,198Please respect copyright.PENANAXLb1I2H9qV
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必須和眼前這群美男們為愛鼓掌,198Please respect copyright.PENANASsx1RNzIgW
否則就會小命不保?
天知道,她連個男朋友都沒交過!198Please respect copyright.PENANAioPaLhZ4T8
難道不能先從害羞地牽牽小手開始嗎?
突如其來且無限吃到飽的肉198Please respect copyright.PENANAG3Vd1OpNZW
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對這個創挑觀望好久後終於鼓起勇氣參加,198Please respect copyright.PENANAtIcYUGJsvZ
雖然碼字有段時間了,但今年才開始認真寫,198Please respect copyright.PENANAbZqJ530Rfm
也是六月時才成為蕉友,198Please respect copyright.PENANA9HYnY8INR3
心態上還是把自己定位為初心者,198Please respect copyright.PENANAWQ89enaLbF
希望可以得到前輩的一些指點。198Please respect copyright.PENANAqKIvumGEHA
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自己覺得劇情和設定還算完整,198Please respect copyright.PENANAZDYiGg0oNm
但因為是大長篇,198Please respect copyright.PENANApFNL4nvriP
為了鋪陳情節開頭敘事偏向緩慢,198Please respect copyright.PENANA6YYV3ySfk7
也擔心自己是否有細節太多讓讀者不耐煩的情況。198Please respect copyright.PENANAvgTn0fwH1s
任何閱讀體驗或心得,198Please respect copyright.PENANAJhICvf7ht3
都還請主辦大大和各方路人不吝點評指教 🙏198Please respect copyright.PENANA1l4tH0jOuN
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感謝這個創挑的舉辦,198Please respect copyright.PENANAskhSq0VlJT
希望參加的大家至少都因為這個挑戰198Please respect copyright.PENANAX4ghiUcubs
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