這是我首次寫 rap 歌詞 (09/22/2023 完成),因為我節奏還不會抓,所以先借用 MC HotDog〈貧民百萬歌星〉的節奏&旋律來寫自己的 rap 歌詞〈夏之熱力學〉。
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〈夏之熱力學〉
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四周扭曲又冒煙 好像世界大戰
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熱力學 從第零到第三定律488Please respect copyright.PENANAxNup01cgTM
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Give me a fine fridge 冷卻我夏天的熱能
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熱氣不間斷累積 持續傳遞到我這裡488Please respect copyright.PENANAkIZc2VaJ8f
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無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它488Please respect copyright.PENANAbzMvQso2ul
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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降低熱氣 非關修養 而是靠分析488Please respect copyright.PENANA0p8Von1cVE
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沒有人知道怒氣變成動機包括我自己
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熱力是一種動量 燒起來挺耗能488Please respect copyright.PENANAsseUzJ91GX
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人不犯我我不犯人 人如果犯我488Please respect copyright.PENANAeGWLWL1kbY
用事實反擊截圖蒐證 這是種本能
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卻不曉得天道好還 大家都有個小本本488Please respect copyright.PENANAa006RotxJl
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無形者例行一遊 在這熱爆的夏祭488Please respect copyright.PENANAq0hqZ4lNck
沒想到 參與一齣莫名的破戲488Please respect copyright.PENANAPMh2jU0PeW
那隻網蟑什麼都不怕 以為最大是自己488Please respect copyright.PENANATEIlEXMVME
以污辱 以扭曲 把無形者扯進去488Please respect copyright.PENANAt9OPJ7YCg7
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怎樣才算修養 罵不還口?488Please respect copyright.PENANAHpxcqW8VDN
逃走還是戰鬥 這還真不好說488Please respect copyright.PENANAWliKztdqxR
無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它488Please respect copyright.PENANAzA0pnLClje
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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We're watching
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如果一張嘴能將正義伸張488Please respect copyright.PENANADtlpXnt0bP
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待無形者彙整報告 全身爛光光
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網蟑舉止人鬼神再也看不下去
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懲罰或者機會都將由祂們決定 人無法管488Please respect copyright.PENANAyy10u8uP7g
網蟑現在所有一切都是它不斷拼命488Please respect copyright.PENANAResGReA0i0
用骯髒言語行徑 自己走向絕境
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怎樣才算修養 罵不還口?488Please respect copyright.PENANAjPenRIwSuH
逃走還是戰鬥 這還真不好說488Please respect copyright.PENANAvSC6TmRjMQ
無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它488Please respect copyright.PENANAwOatF4MkMR
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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We're watching
We're watching
We're watching
you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
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We're watching
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怎樣才算修養 罵不還口?488Please respect copyright.PENANAaj8t8AXTnp
逃走還是戰鬥 這還真不好說488Please respect copyright.PENANAlGHzjDWhNG
無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它488Please respect copyright.PENANArgR4ok1ydF
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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We're watching
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We're watching
you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
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魔鏡歌詞網〈貧民百萬歌星〉歌詞連結:
https://mojim.com/twy101024x12x2.htm
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【創作感想】
目前為止,我已經寫了上百首新詩,也聽過不少 rap,本以為 rap 不難寫,沒想到一寫才發現:rap 歌詞的字數真是超・級・多!而且要配上節奏來唸,不曉得哪些拍子適合 rap 節奏?華爾滋的 3/4 拍?探戈的 2/4 拍 (註)?還是其他?
雖然我音感不錯 (以前是合唱團團員,也玩過MIDI),但節奏感不夠強,所以第一首 rap 就先借用現有歌曲的節奏&旋律,不過歌詞完全是原創。
之後會來發展自己的節奏能力,使用我的蘋果福利機的原生軟體 GarageBand 做節奏+作曲,配上我的原創歌詞。
韓森老師的《來韓老師這裡學饒舌》有提到,rap 歌詞可以先單獨存在,之後再放上節奏和旋律;所以等我寫熟一點,應該會直接寫歌詞,之後再自己創作節奏或者請人配。
寫 rap 歌詞,也算是另類新詩,還滿有趣;因為 rap 歌詞的承載量大,也比較直白,所以用它來寫讀書心得或法律常識,未嘗不是某種變形的筆記或網誌。
最緊要有意思!!
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(註):【探戈舞的認知】
http://www.dancers.com.tw/te/te-03/te-0313.html
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【博客來書店:《來韓老師這裡學饒舌》】
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