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五言律詩：理想

dreameryuki

May 12, 2023

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暮夜眾星現，聽狂風籟聲，

雲煙遮不畏，玉鏡掛天鳴，

幾度鴻心壯，遙放來日兮，

風雲無懼變，杳杳現朧明。

按照此規律：（押中華通韻）

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夜色時分，群星現身，

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風籟聲，狂狂作響，

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雲煙遮，明月仍不畏，

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釋義：

仿佛在天邊發出它的響聲，

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這令觀者的心得以壯大，似乎有了勇氣，

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寄託于未來啊，明亮的月不怕風雲，

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因為在昏暗貌，明月仍有光芒。（朧明）

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#1 五言絕句：輝燭

#2 五言：素雪

#3 五言：冬日暖陽

#4 七言絕句：冬日星辰

#5 五言律詩：夜的旅途

#6 五言律詩：理想

#7 古體詩：遗忘尘世的眼睛

#8 五言律诗-咏谷雨

#9 五言絕句：夢現盛朝

#10 五絕「蠟燭?️」

#11 五绝-仄起-西坠

#12 七絕-平起-平水韻「花影」