There have been so many great entries, it was hard to pick winners. So, before I list the winners, I want to give a more detailed review of each writers work. If you don't feel like reading it, feel free to skip to the end, where I will list the winners.661Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6SmO5HsP1j
RAMENNOODLESX: Well done, I really enjoyed reading this, there was plenty of details and lots of emotion and dialogue involved. It was a bit of a read, but well work it, right down to the end. I loved how you made it so that James was unable to touch anything tangible. Your portrayed your characters relationships well. Great Job.661Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqMYxD7W4Ye
NAKYSHA: Well done, your approach and description of the afterlife in the beginning was interesting, and I like how you ended the story, with Jeff being able to watch his family, talk to his grandson and later be rejoined by his wife. Very touching, great job.661Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGWyFe9M7OL
ElIZABETHBECKER: Well done, short but simple, and sometimes that is all that is needed. I like how Alexander decided not to use his 10 minutes,and it made sense for him to do so, in a way. Great job661Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsEzO70Qd70
BUBUWINTER:Well done, the way you took into perspective the halves was interesting, and caught my attention from early on. I love how he choose to say nothing at all, instead just giving her a push on the swing. The way that he died for his sister was very touching indeed. Great Job661Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfblYd4EM1w
SAR-LOW:Well done. Sometimes less is more, very touching story. Paints a nice simple image, while leaving room for imagination, great job661Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJCv6cPVdyb
CORRUPTEDPURITY:Well done. I liked your approach of having the character look over and run through the available options. While a different approach than the other stories in the contest, i found it interesting that the character had not made a difference in anyone's life, which may have been better. Good descriptions, well done.661Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDgibjCmwpv
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Picking winners was hard. I took into consideration plot, grammar, spelling errors, and a few other basic things. Thank you for participating. 661Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2NoMjmE7Ep
The Winners are:661Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaJPAi7rier
First place:BUBUWINTER661Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4Bh4crpY7y
Second Place:RAMENNOODLESX661Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRcCCfvgKE7
Third place:NAKYSHA661Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdIAI3qizsQ
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