Hello, everyone!! Thank you so much for entering this contest. I was blown away by all of your entries; they were amazing! The violence, the romance, the emotion! You all certainly made my Tuesday morning.282Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHwAVl9kRxX
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Grammar: 5 points282Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡi1nUMMNZsW
Creativity: 10 points282Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8EmgfXdDch
Emotion: 5 points282Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1UQ062jVU1
Complying with the rules: 5 points
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#1: “Its better to fall(inspired by All Summer in a Day)” by SomethingSomethingSomethi282Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4LE8DeFGN1
This would’ve also been an amazing entry for my Perfect contest! I love it so much. I haven’t read All Summer in a Day yet (if you’re talking about the book), but now I must! You have a creative way with words, and thank you for entering!282Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8vIT1VRSEu
Total: 20.5 pts
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#2: “Just leave me alone” by Mia Flame282Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJmw9s0fbve
I can’t be the only one who just adores the line, “I looked up at him, willing myself not to get lost in his eyes like I did five years ago." I love how you put two perspectives in this story as well! Thank you so much for entering!282Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0uhiOguSwo
Total: 19 pts
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#3: “For Becky” by Bluemoon Scriptor282Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwQNZCGEaFg
I have no words, Bluemoon Scriptor. I need this to be a novel. Hell, a movie too. The way you describe things is…again, I have no words.
The plot twist at the end was great too! Thank you for entering!282Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuQVneKNWwD
Total: 23.5 pts
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#4: “What Happens When We’re Sober” by MarkTwain2.0282Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvsavPEJwen
Yes! Rue and Malachi are back! And you created such a beautiful story in under five hundred words! 282Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡk5b2o8jZWr
I can’t lie, you’re amazing with dialogue. Keep up the great work, and thank you for entering!!282Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlUYpiUjRMG
Total: 20 pts
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#5: “To Wait Out The Rain” by Clovers282Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGWreri5Qvq
The last two lines were just perfect, Clovers! And the line, "Our lips fit like two pieces of a jigsaw puzzle, the kiss gentle and warm, producing a heated fuzzy sensation in my chest” is such a beautiful description. Thank you for entering!282Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiqJP1BQUcm
Total: 21 pts282Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ57wKsKegrd
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Honorable Mentions!! (In no particular order)282Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡr5rRqkXpAY
~~ “Just leave me alone” by Mia Flame ~~ 282Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡupu7IOvsif
~~ “What Happens When We’re Sober” by MarkTwain2.0 ~~
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Never stop writing,
Julia282Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoPmFBNV30e
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