感謝各位的投稿!440Please respect copyright.PENANAVMoEbdAmai
看了八篇不同風格的故事!真讓人開心!440Please respect copyright.PENANAH7i0k3RuMF
先恭喜得獎的故事,夢墨為得獎篇章此附上短短的心得~440Please respect copyright.PENANAZGmTZismUa
心得就只是夢墨個人的感受及想法440Please respect copyright.PENANA2ejvlbNszT
並沒有說寫得不好或是特優,純粹夢墨喜不喜歡而已
另外人氣獎以「喜歡數量」多的故事獲得!440Please respect copyright.PENANAW4jsN7tkhQ
就那麼剛好的,第一名也同為人氣獎得主!440Please respect copyright.PENANAlT8ZzrAKC0
再次恭喜《Cứu, cứu cháu với》
第一名:《Cứu, cứu cháu với》440Please respect copyright.PENANAXEj5vG0p0Q
(兼人氣獎得主)440Please respect copyright.PENANATi81KDylCd
以日常作為開頭偷玩電腦、尋找訊號XD440Please respect copyright.PENANAMNJOcbvP8H
這讓也偷玩過電腦的我非常有共鳴W440Please respect copyright.PENANAtgHuSmjXW1
除了開頭很逗之外,還有就是突然出現的神祕亂碼+恐怖畫面!440Please respect copyright.PENANAOGvPhGXwmG
其實到這裡我還沒什麼感覺,只認為「唉唷!有點看頭!」440Please respect copyright.PENANAyc9S9FxTHj
結果後續結尾意外二連發!440Please respect copyright.PENANAt8eAQgxJoL
不管事移工慘劇還是Cứu, cứu cháu với的原意440Please respect copyright.PENANADeHqX8lJ7m
這在整天看完之後,都讓我有種心有餘悸的感覺440Please respect copyright.PENANA8bL9Ht1JWa
用字簡單明白,劇情樸實無華,卻令人覺得真有其事440Please respect copyright.PENANAu61m1bR83V
恭喜我說你聽撰寫《Cứu, cứu cháu với》獲得第一名及人氣獎
第二名:《廊道》440Please respect copyright.PENANADAmQpzWVPd
雖然看到第二段就猜到大概結尾XD440Please respect copyright.PENANAyUUd4wfLXa
不過這種「小丑竟是我自己」的業力引爆故事很不錯440Please respect copyright.PENANArHrxKKFP4s
敘述上也很像在看短片美劇那樣440Please respect copyright.PENANARXEdKaRueG
獵奇程度我還挺喜歡的,特別是肚子裡的蟲蟲XD440Please respect copyright.PENANAOtHF8WLMif
劇情上有懸疑但都被我猜到後續發展所以有點ODO唉呀~440Please respect copyright.PENANAoE5csiMrDS
就是沒有被驚艷到,但又喜歡傑森的夢與屍體(?440Please respect copyright.PENANADwxP4K9n8g
整題來說是很不錯的驚悚短文440Please respect copyright.PENANAGgfnPNDWKx
恭喜不轉的《廊道》獲得第二名
第三名:440Please respect copyright.PENANAiJzljQr4Vi
這個名次是最難抉擇的440Please respect copyright.PENANA2Y3l0JAowN
因為我第三喜歡的文章,都是「好可惜」的狀態440Please respect copyright.PENANAOISZkFmd21
既然是曾經競爭的三篇,就也來說一下三篇較勁的短評吧440Please respect copyright.PENANATEhERK9WVf
以發佈順序點評:440Please respect copyright.PENANA1c9jq7R1T8
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》440Please respect copyright.PENANANubiWRkkkS
超值爽直快,一筆暢通到底440Please respect copyright.PENANAxPJnoFLSVQ
渣男現身設計嚇人、渣男劈腿真相大白、鬼來了殺渣男>END440Please respect copyright.PENANAi4SVswrG7f
沒有任何曲折離奇,鬼說來就來,說殺就殺440Please respect copyright.PENANAty4nwpcFNH
WOW!明明有點陰謀詭計卻不需要動腦直接獲得答案440Please respect copyright.PENANAFi34YmwPSU
這也是很微妙的一篇故事w440Please respect copyright.PENANAFan0EESx6U
但好可惜的部分,就是我沒有沒感覺到恐怖440Please respect copyright.PENANAE9X8F03Sye
跟第二名同樣,劇情上沒有被驚艷到440Please respect copyright.PENANAuerZmRWCy8
不過渣男便肉渣也挺舒爽的w
《乖乖文化》440Please respect copyright.PENANAeMg6Q9o7kI
好可惜!這篇真的要大喊好可惜!440Please respect copyright.PENANA0oTRGQJCxX
首先引用台灣奇怪的乖乖文化我覺得很有看點440Please respect copyright.PENANAaOOq44Qr2g
對呀,我也覺得乖乖文化很奇妙XD440Please respect copyright.PENANABegiTeH2Mf
(老實說我原本不知道有這個文化,後來看某部電影才補充到這個冷知識)440Please respect copyright.PENANAzlhzTFbNcS
唉呀,故事裡那個乖乖吊飾笑得我心裡發寒440Please respect copyright.PENANADRcuNUieOh
我也想來瓶麥香紅茶壓壓驚440Please respect copyright.PENANAY8EqUptskM
結尾真的很可惜,因為沒有首尾呼應導致恐怖點直接消失440Please respect copyright.PENANAZO8vKICBJh
感覺小儀真的就只是做了惡夢,其他都只是想太多了440Please respect copyright.PENANAQbbcGMcrzk
結尾建議多一點點暗示,增加故事的慣連性440Please respect copyright.PENANASkIb4VjrcJ
例如:440Please respect copyright.PENANA7S1n8jZViU
小儀醒來鬆了一口氣,原來是在做夢440Please respect copyright.PENANAAUQK90a1dd
>放學忘記去放乖乖440Please respect copyright.PENANA27SMFCQ5V3
>回家打開冷氣時,乖乖吊飾卡在冷氣孔嘿嘿笑著(喂440Please respect copyright.PENANAaN8CDWgZ6q
好啦、浮誇了,就只是希望結尾完整一些440Please respect copyright.PENANAgkrHN2cClj
總結來說題材有趣、文章順暢但缺乏慣連性440Please respect copyright.PENANAEgH9gxT3EG
有種將要發寒卻嘎然而止,實為可惜
《玉妃引》440Please respect copyright.PENANANKkvM5JERR
宛如聊齋的古風故事440Please respect copyright.PENANAiONKjRWMFb
以架空東晉時期桓伊的梅花引撰寫精怪戀情(?440Please respect copyright.PENANASI4zZDSqmi
不恐怖但很有趣,就像我前面說的宛如聊齋440Please respect copyright.PENANAPHO1bnelPm
不過這架空似乎出現了玄幻的設定(好微妙)440Please respect copyright.PENANATa0i99zdlO
雖然排版壅擠,但內容可以說是很漂亮?440Please respect copyright.PENANANUFm4EE69N
對,有氣氛、有畫面,就像在鬧街看見說書人坐在凳子上講民間故事
可、要說恐怖程度440Please respect copyright.PENANAUizcg7Z4wz
乖乖笑得你心裡發寒贏了XDDD440Please respect copyright.PENANAcZ9uN7DaVx
以中段度來說乖乖贏了,但以整體完成度玉妃引更勝一籌440Please respect copyright.PENANABSJ7AnMcSY
畢竟乖乖文化,會讓我產生期待,然而他卻讓我跌倒了440Please respect copyright.PENANAhE4q2XgCBh
玉妃引穩紮穩打,也許沒有錯愕驚奇,但他有離奇軼聞440Please respect copyright.PENANAcOoKNOQ4dg
新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件介於兩者之間440Please respect copyright.PENANAVPoB14ELWS
這篇有屬於自己的狗血風格,彷彿看到了某色水玲瓏
歷經幾小時的掙扎(對,都凌晨了我還在思考難以入眠440Please respect copyright.PENANApdqlUh6hy5
我還是決定把第三名頒給乖乖440Please respect copyright.PENANACE0KunzFYL
畢竟能用短短五百字以內就引起我的期待,一秒過後讓我跌倒440Please respect copyright.PENANAIqJ1GFhbIv
這也算有點厲害的鬼故事啊(初次閱讀衝擊性來說440Please respect copyright.PENANAm4b5nV1q1r
恭喜夏夜的風《乖乖文化》獲得第三名
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》和《玉妃引》440Please respect copyright.PENANAb5CT3HOAC0
個別獲得夢墨特別獎50金幣打賞
其餘未獲獎的文章也能獲得10金幣打賞440Please respect copyright.PENANAakOkBxoVvc
再次感謝各位的參與!下次有機會開創挑的話!歡迎再來玩!