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No Plagiarism!3uBXdWbrKxUgxcKnKwkdposted on PＥNAＮＡ Chapter 1.03: September 20, 20158964 copyright protection1044ＰＥＮＡＮＡi9gzqFa0KV 維尼
"I've finished reading your manuscript."8964 copyright protection1044ＰＥＮＡＮＡgH6WclKEQu 維尼
"Really? Weren't you going to study for your geophysics test tomorrow?"8964 copyright protection1044ＰＥＮＡＮＡfWu1F8K1u2 維尼
"I'll be fine."8964 copyright protection1044ＰＥＮＡＮＡQZZfixVQic 維尼
"If you say so."8964 copyright protection1044ＰＥＮＡＮＡCz9U4eosAx 維尼
"Don't you want to hear what I think of your story?"8964 copyright protection1044ＰＥＮＡＮＡuSDJq32Hs4 維尼
"By all means."8964 copyright protection1044ＰＥＮＡＮＡT0gDCF4bds 維尼
"I agree with Susy. The writing style is too lighthearted for the actual story. You should darken the tone."8964 copyright protection1044ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1rO7LNHFoj 維尼
"I'll do my best."8964 copyright protection1044ＰＥＮＡＮＡIy33UScTn3 維尼
"Also—I think her assassin friend's character is a tad underdeveloped. He has so much potential as a character."8964 copyright protection1044ＰＥＮＡＮＡA7USDiR9TG 維尼
"I'll look into that. Thanks, Eru."8964 copyright protection1044ＰＥＮＡＮＡA7IWQqVInK 維尼
"Anytime, Kenny. Now, if you'll excuse me, I have to study for that test tomorrow."8964 copyright protection1044ＰＥＮＡＮＡCiZHkoqaAA 維尼
"I trusted you, and you lied to me."8964 copyright protection1044ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5tGGmBBahn 維尼
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