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No Plagiarism!u5BvWVzKK2Ubrb9jzhwuposted on PＥNAＮＡ Chapter 1.03: September 20, 20158964 copyright protection1105ＰＥＮＡＮＡzepCetJ7cp 維尼
"I've finished reading your manuscript."8964 copyright protection1105ＰＥＮＡＮＡLFFfQ7OgFD 維尼
"Really? Weren't you going to study for your geophysics test tomorrow?"8964 copyright protection1105ＰＥＮＡＮＡpjYiMcqtsJ 維尼
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"Don't you want to hear what I think of your story?"8964 copyright protection1105ＰＥＮＡＮＡP34CPPiggC 維尼
"By all means."8964 copyright protection1105ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4AvUwyTqgJ 維尼
"I agree with Susy. The writing style is too lighthearted for the actual story. You should darken the tone."8964 copyright protection1105ＰＥＮＡＮＡR7ngWVC2Lj 維尼
"I'll do my best."8964 copyright protection1105ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7AgvaNXttF 維尼
"Also—I think her assassin friend's character is a tad underdeveloped. He has so much potential as a character."8964 copyright protection1105ＰＥＮＡＮＡoC5JptIWye 維尼
"I'll look into that. Thanks, Eru."8964 copyright protection1105ＰＥＮＡＮＡbfSRrKRmGQ 維尼
"Anytime, Kenny. Now, if you'll excuse me, I have to study for that test tomorrow."8964 copyright protection1105ＰＥＮＡＮＡT38T2TIOo9 維尼
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