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昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜，好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部：『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』332Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbj2U5fs0vN
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場，將眾人打散重組成小團體，達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間，這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花，結果是點子很散，沒有流暢的起承轉合，以下是想到的橋段：332Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPlxuBMAOXd
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐332Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsjfQjAk9yj
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆332Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqiVVMqD4fH
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲332Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMO991RLY59
帶出角色支線332Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡChbzFDAnJ0
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破332Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9ZTbZsGqst
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫332Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpYZO2xRDmD
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴332Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGGra1318z7
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌332Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbQ9HG1fCIu
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊332Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzaOhdIYsrN
殺人犯vs富婆332Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgRivoMHEZZ
一輪深思後，將以上點子整合成四個章節：
1 祐嘉質問昌332Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1H8IrkrLgv
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴332Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFiSojJw6fX
3 智賀玩遊戲，友梨亞里割腕332Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8ILWuxDeFH
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫，初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹，實際内容是邊寫邊想的。332Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWM4QyP86JG
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。332Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMckZfpxlCS
魂之詩332Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsXmOo3aago
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