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昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜，好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部：『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』303Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtbbpCNFjUE
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場，將眾人打散重組成小團體，達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間，這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花，結果是點子很散，沒有流暢的起承轉合，以下是想到的橋段：303Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmoBSjWnyrW
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐303Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMJ7zDLkBkh
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆303Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPpOjNL5VcF
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲303Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNZEZKgrkvd
帶出角色支線303Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOGGThlALCh
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破303Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBWOS8Gl7wU
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫303Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5NGVmo4NYQ
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴303Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡL1Ecwff8uk
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌303Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuAnw0PwPiZ
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊303Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlrgtqkaGBq
殺人犯vs富婆303Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOB9Eh9Grfw
一輪深思後，將以上點子整合成四個章節：
1 祐嘉質問昌303Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1B4VF2YcHQ
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴303Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYwBYwgMKfs
3 智賀玩遊戲，友梨亞里割腕303Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQj4P0qGF0L
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫，初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹，實際内容是邊寫邊想的。303Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhIYn2LbXpy
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。303Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeXMZwg3nwB
魂之詩303Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSfeh5aIz6C
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