可惜文中太多「我」了,如果可以換寫法會更好。最後一句的處理比較好,不然就只是普通的夢境。對於怪物沒有比較深入描繪,所以感覺不恐怖。繼續加油吧,希望潛水中~生活順利。113Please respect copyright.PENANATXKzqfDfFk
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以怪物為主題:113Please respect copyright.PENANA22UjxHCM9H
創挑還沒有結果啊!113Please respect copyright.PENANAapw6bP2tDR
有了嗎?113Please respect copyright.PENANA7m19Ux8T0m
還沒啊……113Please respect copyright.PENANArLT11as20P
怎麼還沒呢?113Please respect copyright.PENANAl4YowWq3IS
怎麼呢……113Please respect copyright.PENANAydRIeRNwQY
拖延就是一只看不見卻處處有的怪獸,113Please respect copyright.PENANAVhUHxNDB8Q
我們的生命,越拖越短,越拖越乏。113Please respect copyright.PENANAVYKWGTjkhn
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我想在其他平台發,我嘗試不要用創挑。113Please respect copyright.PENANAY4nwDHVUFq
今天會把報告交上來吧?113Please respect copyright.PENANANYDMH15C0u
我聽說下個星期才是截止日期~113Please respect copyright.PENANAVQFjIrGOY6
啊!有怪獸!113Please respect copyright.PENANAdLdEZTkXNk
哪裡?那裡?113Please respect copyright.PENANA8AFCSfUjj3
這裡有,這裡有,那裡也有~113Please respect copyright.PENANAtvSSc9b3AA
就在你你我的時間裡!113Please respect copyright.PENANAFT4iDpRs07
生命,越拖越短,越拖越乏。113Please respect copyright.PENANAHFZ0nL5VG2
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〈被怪物襲擊〉潛水中~113Please respect copyright.PENANAQGT32z0yv7
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