寫作菜鳥日記 -12813Please respect copyright.PENANA3Hzp2zvDb0
今天把第14章寫到五千字13Please respect copyright.PENANAPvmnAYiscb
邊寫邊發現大綱要改,13Please respect copyright.PENANAiVocGaTesu
然後好幾次都被自己的設定不夠周全給卡住,13Please respect copyright.PENANAPZkvMl803g
或是糾結在一些不是很重要的問題,13Please respect copyright.PENANA04x14i4FYF
舉個例子,比如常見的日本影片,13Please respect copyright.PENANAvjZ8CZs5h1
怪都只攻擊東京,13Please respect copyright.PENANADt0t1UUmXp
主角可以直接迎戰。13Please respect copyright.PENANAm26CivNjz0
就不會攻擊例如名古屋還是秋田13Please respect copyright.PENANA8lCst9fmF9
(主角坐火車兩個小時後抵達,城市已夷為平地)13Please respect copyright.PENANA5b9ONHN7cb
其實好像可以不用管這件事,13Please respect copyright.PENANAMihHT4Ia02
但我太容易被這種奇怪問題影響,13Please respect copyright.PENANAKSnfk9BXrX
一旦陷入焦躁就無法寫下去。13Please respect copyright.PENANAaRHradXWWg
最後還是花了點篇幅來解釋這件事,13Please respect copyright.PENANANNz0Vs7b9a
並且因此修改了大綱。13Please respect copyright.PENANA0MCBsOqSYd
另外一件事,前面的日常生活化描寫,13Please respect copyright.PENANAWX8w6Aw5sx
雖然很有趣,13Please respect copyright.PENANAVWOum2DRzU
但貼近現實角度的喜劇的調性有點走過頭了,13Please respect copyright.PENANAoG5wfnqo2q
只好再花一點篇幅拉回一些神話奇幻的調性,13Please respect copyright.PENANA6NnWY45qVK
這章剩下的篇幅,13Please respect copyright.PENANAmyKNLdBma4
應該是要寫那對已分手的情侶的後續,13Please respect copyright.PENANApV7dfN06JT
這可能要想一想,不想寫得太哀傷。13Please respect copyright.PENANAiAk6t4Fb3F
應該有更好的表現方式才對,13Please respect copyright.PENANALaw0JhDiMb
把問題帶進夢裡吧,13Please respect copyright.PENANAONWg6fBhYq
夢會給我答案的。