作者妳好775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpPCQtZ9VFr
受到妳的邀请775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCoP9fc75f0
稍微看了下这本佩姬775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKRScrwnxQ9
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJGNpES7GM2
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡy37JaeGe6t
现世一堆东西775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIPUqKZxlh3
其实就很简单一个道理775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9RGWmvid9Y
主角想要被爱775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡp4LrRwaTmm
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnukW2FmLHL
男主卢克爱775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlgjAh6Vvuy
主角就爱回去775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKOL42ZqruB
女主伊莎爱775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1U077wMp5B
主角就爱回去775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWAPmgvQzXy
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡh0Oto4PBdt
想要被爱是佩姬的主题775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPW6ZBmPuQ8
主角性别不是问题775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcRh7EOUFMu
内心冲突不是问题775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbpczbaQNWg
主角被爱就迎刃而解775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPRi5bPsY8T
看不懂这点整部书就看不了775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6K9Zn8g6OF
妳的书乏人问津是这道理775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1kGH0qcZxm
作者妳说主角口是心非775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwV7hSXuDak
欸我说这不对775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNUvXmieNgH
这明摆着口非心也非775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdEQfw7n9PQ
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlNiDMkIcfu
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKL2otsRy1p
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5355ZI8U3r
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlZ0nwTcsiP
为了被爱775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUHGbcJAuhd
连原本的性别都不要了775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyuvU4qZnm7
这主角疯的傻的775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjqBOjRxYti
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvldDWgAorL
女主伊莎775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡI8W8EmATrJ
单纯的色鬼775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbtpHZveHFP
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmi7NYrRtra
黑化可能
艾德兰775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡI9RRbNlyTn
可怜虫阿775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5oN5lMyVrm
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNdlXw7tDcE
妳说解释不够775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPb7JeWh5Kw
我到觉得清楚775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ63hHI9B2J7
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQw9CrRQ6V7
他为啥强775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9XZv9OP0Qq
妳啥都没讲775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡn2Z8L4dBdj
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXIV3WWfTLz
也是除主角外最明白的角色775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhTSJFseCEU
她就拿来爱主角的775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSBtczSwaS1
功能性角色
还有其他许多775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡI2QoDpvX7S
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmxST5yvrXq
可以瞧见妳的苦心775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTD1gQ1oAkT
我觉得这没必要775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeZpT4OVBsw
好的台词提一次够了775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgpf0R7O0ro
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPkIhdk6Rjj
我倒嫌设定囉嗦775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcPZO7WAEyC
空白很重要775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjCIcYVMpcV
没明白有没明白的好处775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXN1AWxgNb6
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡysA6OChWQF
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKyOfKvCV0k
我还会继续看的775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSP2FT2bn2F
确实好看775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVys5kGAQoG
希望你这能写完775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtEmd25f7ft
能放上起点不775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡALyNIOwEGK
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5gkdFxrDH8
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHmSDZ0swZl
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxKeT1VabJx
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoCTsT2lEUc
感謝你的評文775Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuvb0Pz7lCs
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