作者妳好815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3igrLnw2x3
受到妳的邀请815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1pLDEbWuSL
稍微看了下这本佩姬815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡC1W014AoUJ
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvIASeycZNN
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtyDH1dywYo
现世一堆东西815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0GqbeGlMyL
其实就很简单一个道理815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbHXmKNzMI4
主角想要被爱815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIqsKqS6yXt
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyHpXRyv6qV
男主卢克爱815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPFrgFPznbW
主角就爱回去815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKwGMk440pg
女主伊莎爱815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbiFT7cYtkz
主角就爱回去815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHJl3cGTV89
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNCrfhkZSSL
想要被爱是佩姬的主题815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQlmDac1SjB
主角性别不是问题815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvoNjIUD0tk
内心冲突不是问题815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIixMUkWRmD
主角被爱就迎刃而解815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcnCHqfi4CF
看不懂这点整部书就看不了815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡD4wrOGftQk
妳的书乏人问津是这道理815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPIRqvu5ac8
作者妳说主角口是心非815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkKtSIbYVCD
欸我说这不对815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡML9w695V4X
这明摆着口非心也非815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfKkn3kr51c
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJSU8wBeikP
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ24hymldk9S
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrpZBpzFrwr
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3bL1Ge5H1k
为了被爱815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAU9Kuigmoy
连原本的性别都不要了815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXaEepPUwFc
这主角疯的傻的815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGrDiRqLZf0
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡINDcHcy6rn
女主伊莎815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsTZ86If7wV
单纯的色鬼815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbTfaPT6uMu
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4Lw2ASl77L
黑化可能
艾德兰815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLsKRb6J5xm
可怜虫阿815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDox0RCoJB9
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHrGJgpmHnE
妳说解释不够815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡptu6HbHhxU
我到觉得清楚815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡV4TO8w4IdD
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9VPXvWcS5U
他为啥强815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkwNgEUp5Ed
妳啥都没讲815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡy3M8DBh8tI
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8VAWt7skQC
也是除主角外最明白的角色815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ44jilIOaOq
她就拿来爱主角的815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9jh8ta567h
功能性角色
还有其他许多815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiYtXUnWkv7
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzu789053tt
可以瞧见妳的苦心815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRsFejuekv3
我觉得这没必要815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRQlBa3AmZF
好的台词提一次够了815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfNnpGSjzpu
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvOVAK1XCtJ
我倒嫌设定囉嗦815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzdZj5i2Q8m
空白很重要815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTrlcvZvCue
没明白有没明白的好处815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeslVZRAKmf
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqXnkyVgJEF
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfoUBIQSY1D
我还会继续看的815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIhZXw2kIgZ
确实好看815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrU2KIiEjWo
希望你这能写完815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlQWIuRqIZu
能放上起点不815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKpIjDSJkSD
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxcBnIgkJ4F
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡt4AjtsHxKD
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLy4hWmBn3a
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJkGHcXWuHP
感謝你的評文815Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJcSBQufJui
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