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M. Williams
Dec 17, 2018 14:16584Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9iJRJjw6i8
I love horror and thriller stories, but the short story "The Christmas Incident" by Zak is a favourite. 584Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEcOfCHvgbW
Firstly, I was honoured to be requested as the Beta Reader for this story and would like to thank Zak for giving me the chance.584Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwDXW9Ba0wi
Secondly, the story hooks you in straight away, and you immediately feel sorry for the family because of what's happening to their son. I also felt fear for the family when reading about their son.584Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRCin4y6uSy
He builds the suspense beautifully and makes you want to read the next part to check up on the family. Then BAM out of nowhere Zak has added in a twist that changes everything! It was crazy, but masterfully done!584Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡz6P7goo6lb
It is well worth the read, so pop on over to his page and take a look! You won't be disappointed!584Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiUDev1q5xE
Well done, Zak!
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