A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANAY2bMyY7Q5A
謝謝你,不過我這篇沒名字欸—519Please respect copyright.PENANAV8P0zyKSXA
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANAYpu3W6P3dC
你指標題?519Please respect copyright.PENANAZBNwzwue5V
但有時訂標題也很困難~519Please respect copyright.PENANA8xzII3NP1H
就像你這一段對話(給我看的故事)到底想向讀者表達什麼,很難用十個字以來形容得完。
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANAdNeEcamWoX
嗯對啊,519Please respect copyright.PENANAkG5r4EFJYH
所以才困擾嘛。
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANAbjLI39lJEZ
那是因為,你寫的時候沒有先定主旨,519Please respect copyright.PENANA0UMz529dJu
所以沒有中心思想在。519Please respect copyright.PENANAhYX1bf8C4B
我猜的對嗎?
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANAHxuNPBgsxf
嗯,我所有寫出來的都是臨時起意的。519Please respect copyright.PENANA2T5aSrBg2u
所以...有時候看以前的文,都還會想著:這真是我寫過的嗎?519Please respect copyright.PENANAT0VApczV4B
對了,我所有的文都無題。
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANAQ9qCRTG11o
看來你真的很喜歡想這些小故事!519Please respect copyright.PENANArbUtKQtzhS
如果是長篇故事,很難沒有主題和中心思想。
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANAYhLyWEVKbD
那是因為我很沒耐心,只能寫短的啊!
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANArcmeIrPKln
哈哈~真的嗎~XDD519Please respect copyright.PENANAimxlS7xQcO
我認為呢~ 只是因為這個故事你沒有材料寫不下去。519Please respect copyright.PENANAIZaAGLHj4Q
所以下一次你會想到其他人發生其他的故事,519Please respect copyright.PENANARc4nmgKFtZ
而不是一直把這個故事接下去,寫成長篇。
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANAvX4oWM6phR
當然是真的啊~所以我之前的小說寫到後面全都是我朋友寫的。519Please respect copyright.PENANA45evgaPizM
說來有點不負責任,但我就是沒辦法好好寫完,因為往往都是在我還沒寫完一篇,另一篇的靈感就來了。519Please respect copyright.PENANAbbOOqMETOH
我才剛打完你就講了我要說的😂😂 狂
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANASLPXvb0B5Z
我指的「材料」,其實就是你「靈感」的原料。519Please respect copyright.PENANARaPK1O1kNI
沒有「靈感」,是因為你「材料」用完了。
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANAyJfAqGW7cX
那材料沒了怎麼補充啊?
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANAOK9kWPDm4C
我先教你如何準備材料,好嗎?
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANAdXUwJm4bAx
好啊。
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANA9c75fDq0ew
如果寫作課給你一個題目:「強者和弱者」,三百字。519Please respect copyright.PENANAigFmchR7fz
你會想到寫什麼故事?我們看看裡面有什麼材料在。519Please respect copyright.PENANAcbR2Nzq4DJ
大致形容一下你想到的畫面就好。519Please respect copyright.PENANAJmmLJvjRzy
這個大致形容就是你的中心思想了。
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANAbFu3ZLQCuJ
好的,519Please respect copyright.PENANA1BXgmlvOJd
強者和弱者=弱肉強食的世界、519Please respect copyright.PENANAC0ztqGS4iq
有關言情的武俠小說吧。
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANAlscEGyIkov
『弱肉強食』是第一類材料,519Please respect copyright.PENANAHND75Jv1AP
『武俠』和『言情』第二類材料。
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANAl1yvHgJ1nW
弱肉強食怎麼會是材料啊?
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANA2YENt7qBgQ
讓我配上一些東西說明吧。519Please respect copyright.PENANA7CYV427N6P
『英雄』『總裁』『乞丐』『軍人』是第三類材料519Please respect copyright.PENANABtwOv2ZIEq
有了這些材料,可以組織出故事靈感。519Please respect copyright.PENANAJaul96uDyB
比如:519Please respect copyright.PENANAHV3hVkvzDj
『乞丐』是強者,而『總裁』是弱者。519Please respect copyright.PENANAocPQxTmMo0
兩者之間發生了一個『弱肉被強食』的故事。而這是一個『言情』做主題。519Please respect copyright.PENANA3bgeVYJMFe
總裁被乞丐吃了(攻受意味
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANAkY6XFKvrBD
還是不懂欸
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANAN9ENqhPA5Q
嗯...我好像舉錯例了
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANAhaAhKaiAIM
你的思維和他人不同啊…
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANA5PpVMkaXJy
『弱肉強食』描述兩個事物的互相關係519Please respect copyright.PENANA3iHyWvZe3T
一個強,一個弱,對吧?
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANAQTHfUvmmlO
嗯,對啊
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANAaBZgOhkCNy
有了這個定義之後,憑空創作出來的人物就有『身份和關聯』,519Please respect copyright.PENANAzahpf83wJJ
他們在故事裡,一個強,一個弱,強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方。
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANApYdM6wjBlI
強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方的話,那弱的一方是在反抗的一方嗎?
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANAWxM0TQvE7t
這個要再看其他材料能給你什麼想像了:519Please respect copyright.PENANApkk2ow4MwC
『老虎』和『兔子』做材料的話,弱者看起來不可能反抗。519Please respect copyright.PENANAOyIMtLw5su
但如果在放『讓弱者打敗強者』的劇本裡,就會變出弱者反抗強者的情節來。
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANAYlGsCQRerv
哦~
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANAvoOPk4sMDP
然後我就從沒靈感,變成可能想像和寫出:519Please respect copyright.PENANARZxcBkPxIS
『一隻兔子用陷阱打敗了老虎』(配上智謀)519Please respect copyright.PENANAZ4RFgE2b74
『一百隻兔子聯合打敗了老虎』(配上團結)519Please respect copyright.PENANAmLMYHya2VR
的故事
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANAb8cgmFUSk8
好的、519Please respect copyright.PENANAngyuhgOToj
可是這故事好誇張啊,一百隻欸!
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANAAM6IQCC0B1
哈哈~誇張是能讓你記得的套路XD
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANAZs9R9v6667
現在,我們回來看看你原來的故事有什麼材料?又少了什麼材料? 好嗎?
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANAZ55zl1RMBJ
我的故事有少什麼嗎?
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANAssHoKPXgSg
不知道~ 但你有興趣聽聽我的分析嗎?
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANAprfbmeZ4sT
好,只要是能讓我變好的我都聽!
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANAI50d1U4Z6g
你想不下去,是因為這個故事只有幾個材料:519Please respect copyright.PENANA6sy00uOBSN
1.『爭執』519Please respect copyright.PENANAzHM106YAfV
2.『有錢人/富貴的人』519Please respect copyright.PENANAgZNlFO0tDM
3.『分手的情人(主角)』519Please respect copyright.PENANAcaTsPxNCHp
4.『狠心的姐姐(主角)』519Please respect copyright.PENANAfXYbYfSyzp
5.『不孝女(主角)』
其中3-5都是文章中的"我"她與各人的關係
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANA2b2CibFF60
嗯,對,可是這又說明了什麼嗎?
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANAf1dXE63Qxk
當主角"我"的『爭執』一完了,整個故事也就沒有其他料能用,所以發展不下去了。
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANAv5ngQda3dW
那如果加入復仇呢519Please respect copyright.PENANAlIxcw8NZqg
搶她大姐的未婚夫519Please respect copyright.PENANA5AH01OT3wK
怎麼樣?
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANA5brGf1G6mH
沒錯~要寫下去就要更多的材料。那下一章《復仇》就是你想要的標題了519Please respect copyright.PENANApaM4TCVxYW
這一章叫《爭執》、下一章叫《復仇》……519Please respect copyright.PENANALxhWG92Eob
故事主軸可能就是『夏家因怨』。
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANAWteoKDmqzC
好的,了解啦
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANAIWHmdkcnRS
嗯...那男主要誰?
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANA1hsi8Yd0Ds
不一定要有吧~?519Please respect copyright.PENANACARFqJkoo9
兩個女主角又如何?
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANAl1wmcU0y9u
可是我只寫過言情小說啊…
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANAa1kvD1JkWl
比如519Please respect copyright.PENANAu50ylXJUrA
1."我(筑楓)"對夏家『復仇』519Please respect copyright.PENANAtrmA6gZ2LP
2.雨星又對"我"『復仇』
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANAHW1Csgz188
呵呵~沒關係~材料齊集靈感到了,你就知道該怎樣寫了!519Please respect copyright.PENANA2ehOHP1OG5
(要創作男主角,也是一樣用『材料』。)XD519Please respect copyright.PENANAXNFURQS6ZP
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANADyEo5yDcAs
只要你學懂解析自己文章裡有什麼材料,要從無沒靈感變有靈感會容易得多。 519Please respect copyright.PENANAEqAZlpMsga
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANABD9agicEB6
你好厲害啊!519Please respect copyright.PENANAPRKPB5himO
(重新把故事編排)519Please respect copyright.PENANAoCWNT3RR00
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANA6KLfW742ft
你真的做很好了~剩下的請再找其他人幫你啦~519Please respect copyright.PENANABK4yK0EWRf