No Plagiarism!7pFLsf78uz0ipPMFBGweposted on PENANA 他卻繞過我,面向着屏風,細品我的詞:「明明後面寫的是蓮花,為何起首卻寫荼蘼呢?」8964 copyright protection152PENANALLMxcXrGSv 維尼
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我還以為他是想靠近我,不想他竟然是想看自己的筆跡。我趕緊平伏心情,然後回應:「臣妾受『紅藕香殘玉蕈秋』[1]啟發,所以以荼蘼點明夏末時節。荼蘼開花之時,蓮花多半凋謝了。而且『開到荼蘼花事了』[2],這樣寫既有花期更季之意,也可指蓮花花事已了。」8964 copyright protection152PENANAIdLEEgTwnn 維尼
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他撫着下巴,若有所思地沉吟:「朕填的話,第二句大概會寫『枯蓮香魄斷』吧。」8964 copyright protection152PENANAx7i4kW2i2K 維尼
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我回道:「皇上好文采!『香魄』確實更有詩意。不過,蓮花『中通外直』[3],臣妾認為,唯有寫莖斷而亡,才可凸顯世途險惡啊!」8964 copyright protection152PENANACx97xPYwIM 維尼
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他微微失神,過一會再說:「朕喜歡這句『濁漣將子捲』。前面寫蓮蓬碎開,後句再寫蓮子被污濁的漣漪捲起,此處寫實而細緻。」8964 copyright protection152PENANAqUrrwh4FXO 維尼
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我笑答:「多謝皇上。臣妾是想起『濯清漣而不妖』[3],才寫成這句的。蓬心是蓮花之心,自然是憐子的。」8964 copyright protection152PENANAa6awZoC23k 維尼
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他反覆唸道:「『淒淒』、『憔悴損』……」他倏然想起什麼:「莫不是李清照的詞[4]?」8964 copyright protection152PENANA9cnrXmxVoT 維尼
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我沒想到皇帝這麼快認出來,於是有些雀躍:「正是,皇上真是滿腹詩書!」8964 copyright protection152PENANAyX9Mr7cjPc 維尼
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他好意建議:「想寫好閨怨確實該多讀『易安體』。」他一頓,又唸回上一句:「『高枝杜宇……』呵,杜鵑是杜宇、貴嬪也算高位,真是不錯。」8964 copyright protection152PENANAmDlRXPLSzt 維尼
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榮貴嬪的本名是盧黛鵑,我上次犯名諱惹怒了他,當然不敢再亂來。我解釋:「榮貴嬪是一宮主位,臣妾總得避諱。」8964 copyright protection152PENANAcn4NHeGwFy 維尼
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乍然,他略有神傷地問:「王益告訴朕,你們在御花園碰到正翰了。你們聊了什麼?」8964 copyright protection152PENANA0i0G79kTUf 維尼
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我如實答:「那天,榮貴嬪帶了紫米糕和紅豆糕去御花園,剛好大皇子也在,榮貴嬪便請他吃糕點。大皇子愛吃紅豆,還說皇上曾教佳貴人做紅豆湯。大皇子一直念叨着那甜湯的滋味呢。」8964 copyright protection152PENANAtZlDeTmqOn 維尼
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他不接話,反而問我:「你與佳貴人很熟稔嗎?」8964 copyright protection152PENANAAxBVCdGv5n 維尼
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我否認:「她中毒後,臣妾曾攜禮探望她數次,僅此而已。」8964 copyright protection152PENANApRij5T66S3 維尼
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他似乎不願多說,只是嘆氣:「唉!正翰這孩子……」8964 copyright protection152PENANAE1DmMRboML 維尼
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我不敢多言,他過了一會才繼續評我的詞:「下闕寫的是遠景吧。第一句是指,季節更迭後,禁苑的殘花會被亂風吹拂。風難道指的是朕嗎?」8964 copyright protection152PENANAixPdRWDbiN 維尼
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風當然是皇帝張祐「豐」。但我還是謹慎地答:「宮內一草一木都是皇上的,自然是這意思。但臣妾不敢犯皇上名諱,只敢用『披拂』一詞。」8964 copyright protection152PENANAp6MJYCH1gC 維尼
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他輕皺眉頭:「犯名諱又何妨?賦詞總不能以詞害意吧。不過,『披拂』既合格律,意趣也真,倒是妙筆。」8964 copyright protection152PENANAENvSIV7zSi 維尼
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皇帝緩一緩,然後遲疑地說:「『繞藤擇木』表面是寫景,卻又似乎意有所指。」8964 copyright protection152PENANApGs8uVok1P 維尼
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其實下闕寫的是宮妃仰賴恩寵而活的悲哀。我卻不知如何向他明言,只得吞吞吐吐:「蓮花不蔓不枝[3],最終落得香散花萎的下場。宮花唯有攀葛附藤,擇良木而棲,才能享日暖以求存。」8964 copyright protection152PENANAXMS8GjQEp8 維尼
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皇帝不置可否,定神望我一眼後,才轉看下一句:「東君是《楚辭》嗎?還是指春神呢?[5]」8964 copyright protection152PENANAQynydFHrCw 維尼
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我如實答:「上句寫了日暖,此處當然指日神。」8964 copyright protection152PENANAc3lL21P5wm 維尼
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他重覆唸了兩遍末句,對我微微一笑:「朕知道了。」他壞笑道:「不過,祁御女的意思,天恩到底該賜給詞人抑或驚鳥呢?」8964 copyright protection152PENANAN9qTnbVl7M 維尼
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他問得如此直接,讓我心頭一震。8964 copyright protection152PENANAGrwxXvrP7y 維尼
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1.紅藕香殘玉蕈秋:出自李清照《一剪梅.紅藕香殘玉蕈秋》。8964 copyright protection152PENANAbW7BjFqc1i 維尼
2.開到荼蘼花事了:出自王淇《春暮遊小園》。8964 copyright protection152PENANAKe9iB9DA3j 維尼
3.出自周敦頤《愛蓮說》。8964 copyright protection152PENANAMD4IqyRJDU 維尼
4.此處指的是李清照《聲聲慢.尋尋覓覓》。8964 copyright protection152PENANAUVwo3fqgg1 維尼
5.東君:在《楚辭.九歌.東君》中,東君解作日神。但在後世的文學作品,比如李清照《小重山.春到長門春草青》中,東君卻指春神。8964 copyright protection152PENANAKQOUYLpz7a 維尼
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