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讀後感：331Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7vBUhBQQjc
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抱歉，認真點重來一次w331Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡM8vC7SZWXu
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『感覺上正正是暴風雨前夕』331Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjsiQApeirs
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內容：331Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7dh43CXwNP
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典型(？)的災害前的安穩之時，序幕之章331Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8eVr55Kvit
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皇室日常生活的章節/公主成長片段331Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡn4K4m5ftJQ
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不敢說題材有趣，但有很大潛質，期待w
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希望能看見魔法世界的各種w
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比起日常感，更有安穩感331Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoXCS765Kej
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何謂日常感呢？
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以動漫〈辣妺&恐龍〉、〈K-on〉為例，這些動漫當中，(多數)每一集會有節奏性的起乘轉合，每一集也是可以是一個單獨的故事，就如平常的生活，亦如此，看這些動漫時，那輕鬆的氣氛便是日常感331Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXI4sMw6xGx
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可是安穩感是另一樣331Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiXkuYoJOlb
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安穩，安為穩定，生活安穩，是指一個人生活平平無奇，沒有太大的起承轉合，同時，我們亦會這樣說：331Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaiI5Be6BWF
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「您生活這麼安穩，怎會明白」331Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1E3bdqt3lr
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這處，安穩成了貶義331Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmeUn828px1
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這處的安穩感，即帶有懸念的日常，因為缺乏轉，或是在合的位置，沒有落回起的高度，這個浄高度，乃是懸念，也是製造「災難前夕」的感覺
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例子：
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抓周結果+皇兒的忌心 -> 結果未知 + 前言(國家滅亡
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可能性：331Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡz5XAOZ28wf
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之類
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評文(角色)：
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平面角色，個人感覺可以再給多點角色描述，例如幼年時的公主平日生活(更加日常的生活片段，比如用膳(？)總之增加出場率)331Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGvAqeu4af5
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角色特性是有，如女僕的裏意，公主的心智發展，有體現到角色特質，若加上更多身體語言描寫更佳
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目前最影響性的角色，個人感覺是父王331Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLdKgMqt9E7
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父王的角色在平衡日常感之上有很大作用，簡單來說，角色就是個「重國之皇」，嚴肅、沉默寡言，認真的形象，而其「重國」(嚴肅)的感覺，就正正和日常的輕鬆對沖331Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZhN8k34JQt
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再者，是全部角色之中，唯一嚴肅的態度存在，特別反映到各種日常中的一絲不輕易
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個人覺得「國家即將滅亡」的感覺，只有父王一人在支撐w331Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡU4doB66yqi
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希望角色能藉轉折發展全面形象，例如父王在面臨國亡之時展現另一面(？
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個人非文學士，所以不作到什麼很建設性的意見
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只能說⋯331Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMhMxDeG5TG
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希望有第一人稱角度描寫w331Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFp2MUgNuXB
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還有小心錯字w331Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLoA87sgwvI
(所以是繆還是謬/周3
(還有，有殘體/周2
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認名字/角色有點困難，希望能[名字+角色職位]，這樣子用多點w
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大概就是以上，希望多多加油，期待後續喔331Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiAjkCHsB2q
